• Writer's Training Ground #010: "It Ain't Easy Being Breezies" - Entry Post


    Another week, another episode, another topic, and more fanfiction to go with it! Breezies were pretty much an endless pool of ideas to work with, so how did you all take advantage of it? Head on down below the break for your usual fanfiction entries for last week's writing prompt(s)!





    Normal/Slice of Life


    [Normal] - 2600 words

    Author: Renaissance Brony


    With Twilight's help, Fluttershy endeavors to discover the meaning of a book given to her as a parting gift. She soon discovers that the book will help her remember the breezies in a way much different than she expected.

    Dreamy Breezies

    Characters: Fluttershy, Twilight Sparkle, Seabreeze

    [Slice of Life] - 5117 words

    Author: DouglasTrotter


    Twilight Sparkle, Rarity, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie came within a few wing beats of their goal to exit the breezie homeworld. With the portal shut, they have to find a new way home. It won't be as easy as the breezie flies.

    Journey of the Shy

    Characters: Mane6

    [Normal] - 4835 words

    Author: Zeck


    Seabreeze and the other Breezies have mailed Fluttershy a book. She is excited to receive such a gift, but when she finds that it's written in the Breezies' ancient text and she's unable to read it, she goes to visit Twilight for help. Twilight is all too happy to help translate the book, but in doing so she finds a secret that not only she dare not tell Fluttershy, but also relates to one of her own previous adventures.

    The Book

    Characters: Fluttershy, Twilight Sparkle

    [Normal] - 1939 words

    Author: Somedudeatemytaco


    Rainbow Dash never really bought that Gilda just became a jerk just like that, there has to be more to it, she was sure of it. This wasn't the Gilda she knew back at Junior Speedsters camp. Unfortunately though, she can't ask what went on through her head, for all Rainbow knows, Gilda is long gone. So what better way to learn about a griffon than to be the griffon? Convincing Twilight might be a whole other story though!

    Through a Griffon's Eyes

    Characters: Rainbow Dash, Gilda, Fluttershy

    [Normal] - 1489 words

    Author: epona92


    Two meteorology ponies discuss the implications of controlling the breeze for the Breezies.

    A Scientific Rant

    Characters: "OC"


    Comedy/Random


    [Random][Comedy] - 2329 words

    Author: Yukito


    With the portal closed behind them, our heroes must traverse an ancient tunnel to find their way home! What horrors and/or challenges await them?

    The Journey Home

    Characters: Mane 6, Seabreeze, OCs

    [Comedy] - 1600 words

    Author: Georg


    Fluttershy discovers a hidden secret of the Royal Sisters, and enlists the Cutie Mark Crusaders to get to the bottom of the mystery. She should have known better.

    The Cutie Mark Crusaders and the Accidental Alicorn Incident

    Characters: Fluttershy, Celestia Breezie, Luna Breezie

    [Comedy][Adventure] - 1519 words

    Author: Chaucer345


    The portal closed too quickly. Now the Mane 6 are trapped in the world of the breezies, with their only chance at getting home being to fling themselves into the middle of a terrible war. This will be an epic adventure! Sort of...

    Oh… I Guess We Could do that…

    Characters: Sea breeze, Twilight Sparkle, Applejack

    [Random][Adventure] - 2112 words

    Author: Game Changer


    Rainbow Dash becomes omnipotent. Chaos ensues.

    Reign of the Goddash

    Characters: OC, Mane Six bar Rainbow Dash, The G 'n' P T

    [Comedy][Random] - 1246 words

    Author: Palm Palette


    While giving a scientific report on the breezies, Fluttershy reveals a secret about their kingdom. Thanks to that info, Rainbow Dash realizes that she and her friends can each make one wish. What will they wish for?

    Pony Wishes

    Characters: Mane 6


    Adventure


    [Adventure] - 4233 words

    Author: Silent Strider


    Twilight and friends were late to leave the land of the breezies, and are sealed inside when the portal closes. An old journal kept in Seabreeze's family for generations might provide the answer to this problem; another pony, a long time ago, found a way into the Breezie Kingdom.

    Breezie Journal

    Characters: Mane 6, Flitter, Spike

    [Adventure][Comedy] - 4816 words

    Author: AlwaysDressesInStyle


    Fluttershy is tasked with finding breezies lost in Equestria. With the help of her friends, she sets out to see if any breezies could possibly survive in the harsh world on their own.

    Summer Breeze

    Characters: Mane 6, Breezies


    Dark/Grimdark


    [Dark] - 1020 words

    Author: SpecksTheRoyalArchiver


    Long ago before the Breezies had their own dimension to call home, there was a great war between the Breezies and a new monster known as the Parasprites. This is the story of that war, the birth of the parasprites, and the discovery of a new home.

    The Most Adorable War To Ever Scar Equestria.

    Characters: OC. Private MoonGust, OC. Captain DewLeaf, OC. Sergeat TwinkleWings

    [Dark][Random] - 2910 words

    Author: Fluttashift


    Fluttershy has received a very strange book as a present from Seabreeze. However, what seems like an innocent scary poem may be the means to summon a monster of myth!

    Libellus De Monstrum

    Characters: Fluttershy, Twilight, Applejack

    [Dark] - 2252 words

    Author: Scarf Ace


    In the Breezie enclave, an ancient book has lain, undisturbed, for centuries. Now, it has been passed on by its keeper, Seabreeze, to his new friend Fluttershy. Written on its pages is a brief account of some of Equestria's greatest triumphs and tragedies - disguised in the form of elegant poetry, but clear to those who can read between its lines.

    The Seven Sonnets

    Characters: Fluttershy, Figures from Equestria's history,

    [Dark] - 2657 words

    Author: Goldymarg


    "That tome that SeaBreeze gave us was just a compendium of fictional creatures. Just ridiculous, fake information written to scare little fillies. How could any of that drivel be real...?" Fluttershy hasn't been acting like herself lately. She's been staying up late at night, her animal friends are constantly being neglected, and she can't seem to stop spacing out. All Twilight and the rest want is for her is to tell them if anything's wrong, but she never gives a straight answer. However, it wasn't until Angel Bunny came pounding on Golden Oak Library's door that their concern turned to horror. A festival is coming, one that could potentially raze all of Equestria to the ground. And pure, innocent Fluttershy is somehow the instigator.

    Mysterious Compendium

    Characters: Mane 6, Fluttershy


    Crossover/Alternate Universe


    Alternate Universe(s) - 7000 words

    Author: A Hoof-ful of Dust


    Trapped on the wrong side of the portal in the Breezie homeland, Twilight and her friends must take a journey inward to return home.

    Rivers of Babylon

    Characters: Mane 6

    Alternate Universe - 4000 words

    Author: A Random Guy


    It's been decades since the war between Bonxico and Equestria broke out. Since then, the Beezies have disappeared from the world completely, and have since become nothing more than a myth. Camión Lechero, a low ranking officer of the Bronxican Imperial Army, finds out that the myth is real. But he doesn't realize that he's at the epicenter of ground zero of a world that will change. All that's needed is a Breezy's wing.

    End of Things That Came

    Characters: Camión Lechero, Star Wisp