[Shipping]
Author: Keyframe
Description: Summer Sparks is very inventive for an Earth pony. She's very good with her hooves and doesn't rely on magic for technology, but with all her success she still dreams of flying high with the graceful speed of a Pegasus pony. With her newest creation, Gigatrot, she goes to Ponyville. And compared to flying, how hard could making friends be?Shadow Of Dreams (New Part 3!)
Additional Tags: Alternate universe, Rule 63
27 kommentaari:
Shipping with no sad tag. I approve.
VastaKustutawhy is a pony version of Soi Fon there?
VastaKustutaSoifon pony?
VastaKustutaThis ain't Bleach crossover...
"Magic for technology"? Is that right?
VastaKustutaI haven't watched Bleach in months. I might check it out again
VastaKustutaDescription makes this sound like steampunk ponies.
VastaKustutaWill read to confirm if it is, indeed, steampunk ponies.
tags say no, but description says YES YES YES! hmm, thinking two-part probationary trial?
VastaKustutaRule 63? What?
VastaKustutaLooks like a great story, but why did you decide to make it rule 63?
VastaKustutaSkimmed it. Stallion mane six, looks like.
VastaKustutayou know, I'll try everything once. Welcome to my (to read) list
VastaKustutaThe R63 is a bit random, but perfectly enjoyable. There are also a few formatting errors here and there, but they don't detract. This is looking to be a great story so far. I just hope it'll update more often than it appears it has been.
VastaKustutaWhy not use rule 63?
VastaKustutaSeriously, what's with the picture of Soifon pony if this story doesn't even reference Bleach?
VastaKustuta...
Although...I can't say this is the first time the picture had no relation to the story it was attached to. After all, there's an old OC story that has an annoyed Celestia picture as its cover. (Don't ask me what it was called.)
There was a mix up. Proper picture is in place. Thanks staff!
VastaKustutaAnd suddenly the right picture!
VastaKustutaRandom 63 is random. Is the author a female who wanted to make a female character, but wanted straight shipping?
VastaKustuta@Aeolus
VastaKustutaI'm male. I made a female antagonist, and the 63 thing is a gimmick. I got into that rule very early on when I became a brony and they kind of stuck with me. Using the original mane 6 never crossed my mind.
As for straight shipping... Does it matter?
Holy crap, she's topless!
VastaKustutaI'm usually very sceptical about shipping but I think I'll give this one a try.
VastaKustutaFor now, here is a vectorized version of Summer Sparks. You see, I noticed that the lines on your cover image are a bit messy and decided you could use one.
@Tundra
VastaKustutaHoly crud! Magical picture change! :0
Now I want to see the picture was there before. lol I missed it. Could someone link it?
VastaKustuta@Lord Elliott
VastaKustutaHere you go
I still don't get why this story had to be in an r63-verse.
VastaKustutaNoooooo!!!! My original character!!! I had one exactly like that! D: Oh well, at least someone is doing something with her. :)
VastaKustutaEh, I tried to give this a fair shake, I did, but I just couldn't finish it. The writing is shaky and stutters from paragraph to paragraph, and the R63 is just carried too awkwardly. I keep losing my immersion every other line.
VastaKustuta@Easteu
VastaKustutaWow, thank you Easteu!
I'll admit the picture is really, really old. I've gotten better with using SAI. And I just got into vectoring but school has become way too time consuming to do anything D:
Thank you again for this.