• Story: Requiem

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    [Sad] [Shipping-ish]

    Author: Aqua Bolt
    Description: Octavia and her childhood friend Allegro con Brio have grown distant ever since he moved away when they were thirteen. Now, caught in a dream, she must relive a series of scattered memories of him through the helpless eyes of an observer cursed with the gift of hindsight.

    Requiem

    Additional Tags: You can't change the past.
    Wednesday, February 29, 2012 op
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    16 comments:

    1. OmFebruary 29, 2012 at 1:01 PM

      Wohoo! Octavia!

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    2. Videogame9February 29, 2012 at 1:01 PM

      Second?

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    3. iisfunnymanFebruary 29, 2012 at 1:04 PM

      Looks good. Also very deep. But it's OCTAVIA! Will read

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    4. RessQFebruary 29, 2012 at 1:09 PM

      Finally, Octavia without Vinyl!
      I never liked or understood Vinyltavia.

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    5. Rex2099February 29, 2012 at 1:11 PM

      You can't Change The Past But, You Can Change The Future!

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    6. Shimmer ScrollFebruary 29, 2012 at 1:42 PM

      …Well, that was depressing. Well-done, but depressing. I'm going to go listen to some happy music to get rid of this acute case of sad.

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    7. kawolineFebruary 29, 2012 at 1:53 PM

      those tags r really depressing

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    8. HawkysuFebruary 29, 2012 at 2:15 PM

      Tears? No. I'm too manly for tears.
      *sniff*

      But, honestly, it was pretty good. I don't normally do sad, but I really liked this one.

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    9. Pegasus Rescue BrigadeFebruary 29, 2012 at 2:44 PM

      Shipping-ish.
      Cool tag.

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    10. RyonneFebruary 29, 2012 at 3:15 PM

      Eh, I'll be honest: this seemed a fair bit rushed. The characterizations, the plotline, the writing, everything just seemed a bit condensed. Also, I spotted a few stylistic errors that kind of got on my nerves. Oh well. Decent story, nonetheless.

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    11. UnknownFebruary 29, 2012 at 4:08 PM

      Awesome! And I agree with you RessQ.

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    12. LightningBronyFebruary 29, 2012 at 4:11 PM

      Sad ? Octavia ?

      I HAVE to read this. Let's go

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    13. Linkeh24February 29, 2012 at 7:45 PM

      It was decent, title is what caught me; I love the Mozart Requiem, it's a personal favorite, but I digress, it is a decent fanfic, but I do have to agree it seemed a bit rushed.

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    14. ShadowBronyFebruary 29, 2012 at 8:45 PM

      Yay Octavia! But why sad octavia;(

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    15. Aqua BoltFebruary 29, 2012 at 10:07 PM

      @Ryonne

      Thanks for the honest feedback. Any suggestions on what/how to improve in the future/specific things you had a problem with?

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    16. ScherzandoMarch 1, 2012 at 5:49 AM

      @RessQ

      It's the standard "opposites attract" approach. Octavia's a cultured, expensive-looking mare, Vinyl's trendy and energetic-looking by comparison. One deals in classical, the other in electronica.

      Fairly unoriginal but it works.

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