[Sad] [Shipping-ish]
Author: Aqua Bolt
Description: Octavia and her childhood friend Allegro con Brio have grown distant ever since he moved away when they were thirteen. Now, caught in a dream, she must relive a series of scattered memories of him through the helpless eyes of an observer cursed with the gift of hindsight.
Requiem
Additional Tags: You can't change the past.
16 kommentaari:
Wohoo! Octavia!
VastaKustutaSecond?
VastaKustutaLooks good. Also very deep. But it's OCTAVIA! Will read
VastaKustutaFinally, Octavia without Vinyl!
VastaKustutaI never liked or understood Vinyltavia.
You can't Change The Past But, You Can Change The Future!
VastaKustuta…Well, that was depressing. Well-done, but depressing. I'm going to go listen to some happy music to get rid of this acute case of sad.
VastaKustutathose tags r really depressing
VastaKustutaTears? No. I'm too manly for tears.
VastaKustuta*sniff*
But, honestly, it was pretty good. I don't normally do sad, but I really liked this one.
Shipping-ish.
VastaKustutaCool tag.
Eh, I'll be honest: this seemed a fair bit rushed. The characterizations, the plotline, the writing, everything just seemed a bit condensed. Also, I spotted a few stylistic errors that kind of got on my nerves. Oh well. Decent story, nonetheless.
VastaKustutaAwesome! And I agree with you RessQ.
VastaKustutaSad ? Octavia ?
VastaKustutaI HAVE to read this. Let's go
It was decent, title is what caught me; I love the Mozart Requiem, it's a personal favorite, but I digress, it is a decent fanfic, but I do have to agree it seemed a bit rushed.
VastaKustutaYay Octavia! But why sad octavia;(
VastaKustuta@Ryonne
VastaKustutaThanks for the honest feedback. Any suggestions on what/how to improve in the future/specific things you had a problem with?
@RessQ
VastaKustutaIt's the standard "opposites attract" approach. Octavia's a cultured, expensive-looking mare, Vinyl's trendy and energetic-looking by comparison. One deals in classical, the other in electronica.
Fairly unoriginal but it works.