• Story: Griffon a Hard Time (Update Part 4!)



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    Author:
    Tricky-Step
    Description: Gilda is on a mission of desperation to find Rainbow Dash to become best friends again. However, her pride and conflicted feelings causes her to act impetuously, posing confusion and dilemmas. As she finally reaches Rainbow Dash, she soon finds herself staring down a magical concoction she will never forget. When she wakes up, she will being seeing the world in a different way, literally. New emotions arise, along with old and new conflicts with Rainbow Dash and her friends.

    Can Gilda use this new opportunity to make things right and forge new relationships? Or will she sabotage herself against her unyielding pride.
    Griffon a Hard Time (New Part 4!)

    Additional Tags: First-Person / Dilemmas / Transformation / Cupcakes / Gilda insanity

    23 comments:

    1. Gilda doesn't look half bad as a pony.
      Bookmarked.

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    2. good job, myzz(author's name on another site)

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    3. Cupcakes and insanity in the tags?

      Uhmmm... >_>
      not sure if want

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    4. @Luxin_Nocte
      It's not what you think >_>
      Besides, just look at that normal and shipping tag.

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    5. I don't know. Heart of Gold, Feathers of Steel is such a compelling story you have a lot to compete with but let's see!

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    6. @Tricky-Step

      Oh, you are the author....
      now I just feel silly >_<

      Well, congratz anyway to getting posted on EqD!
      I always had a huge amount of respect for people who are able to tell a compelling story.

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    7. wait, somethings wrong... it's a shipping story, posted 20minutes ago and hasn't been star bombed yet! Are those guys getting unreliable? Or *gasp* are people actually reading the story before rating?

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    8. @Acriaos
      Just telling you right now, my story hasn't gotten to the shipping part yet.

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    9. I have a soft spot for Gilda stories, and the tags "Pinkie Pie" and "Rainbow Dash" always pique my interest. I'll definitely give it a read.

      Why does every Gilda story insist on using that horrible, horrible pun :P?

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    10. I must admit, HoG, FoS will always be my favourite Gilda fic, but this one isn't half bad

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    11. Thanks for sharing.

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    13. Gilda looks cute as a pony /)^3^(\

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    15. Okay, yeah. You got my attention. Can always use more Gilda stories, and this one gives off those lovely HoG vibes.



      Plus, I've been interested in reading GilDash lately (that's what this is, right?), so this came at a pretty good time.

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    16. I've been following this since its inception on FimFiction. It's a great fic so far (though I'm biased in favor of anything starring Gilda), and has the potential to become even better if the rest will keep up the intro's quality.

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    17. That's...
      interesting.
      In any case, I'm not rating it one way or the other just yet.

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    18. I really like the way that you are writing her in this so far. This latest chapter is perhaps the best in that regard, too.



      In regards to your question on FiM Fiction, I think this new formatting is good. It helps the reader keep their place in the chapter without accidentally skipping lines or anything.

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    19. Wait!! But what will be Gilda's cutie mark???

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