[Normal] [Adventure] [Sci-Fi] [Comedy]
Author: Bookish Delight
Description: Several years after Nightmare Moon's defeat, a meteor is seen hurtling across the sky. Its presence heralds a reckoning for Rainbow Dash... as well as the greatest spectacle Equestria will ever witness!
Fireball! Part 1
Fireball! Part 2 (New!)
Additional Tags: Her hooves are BURNING RED!
28 comments:
cool
ReplyDeletebeans
ReplyDeleteHmm i may have to read this later...
ReplyDeleteI've been inspired by Rainbow Dash. I'm not really a fanfiction person but I'm going to give them a try.
ReplyDeleteJust skimmed through this instead of sleeping. Just by skimming i liked it. Will read in-depth later.
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ReplyDeleteThat was cracktastic and awesome and the author deserves a medal.
ReplyDeleteYou have my attention.
Proceed :D
This was just what I needed to read after that horrid...thing...that another fic turned in to. Normally I'd avoid a Sci-Fi tag but for some reason I thought I'd check it out.
ReplyDeleteGlad I did too. Interesting writing style, mysterious without being overly so, very interesting takes on the future, drama while still being chipper...and of course Pinkie being Pinkie.
Can't wait for more.
Well, I didn't like the part with Rarity and the cake, but overall this entire first chapter was just... WOW! Almost pure action from top to bottom without pause. It almost has a crazy, anime-like feel to it. In a good way.
ReplyDeleteAwesome start to the story so far, and I'm usually not interested in [Sci-Fi] fics at all. Looking forward to Chapter 2!
I'm so confused but I love it
ReplyDeleteIf that BURNING RED is telling me anything, and this has ANYTHING to do with G Gundam, well shit, I'm going to have to read this.
ReplyDeleteFrom what I've seen of the story, I'm kinda rooting for Rainbow Dash.
ReplyDeleteMy hoof is burning red. It's loud roar tells me to grasp victory! Shining Finger!
ReplyDeleteWell that was certainly action packed and all kinds of epic but the constant POV shifts make it really choppy and kind of hard to read while also making for a lot of unanswered questions. Hopefully the next few parts will maintain the epic action while improving the exposition.
ReplyDelete@Catharsis25 You are off on your BURNING HOOVES. That is the BURNING HOOF. If it were the one you're referencing, it would have been thus, "This hoof of mine glows with an AWESOME POWER...Its light will illuminate my victory! SHIIIININIIIING HOOOOOOOOFFF!!"...I apologize. So VERY much. (but I regret nothing!)
ReplyDeleteI'm not one for reading stories at the moment but I have to say the cover is my DP on Facebook.
ReplyDeleteOh, wow, we're live! I can finally stop biting my fingers! ^^;
ReplyDeleteWhile G Gundam is not expressly in this story, it will contain every bit of its burning spirit--with lots of character to boot! Observant readers will notice that this is so far titled "1 of 5"; as in, for once, I have an actual plan for this thing. :) Rest assured, all of your questions will be addressed and explained!
(Except that one about the towels. Some things are just better left mysteries.)
Immense thanks to all who have commented and/or enjoyed so far; and to those who'll be reading this story over the next few days, I hope you do the same as well! It's going to be a crazy ride, as well as--hopefully--a novel take on my favorite side character that we don't often get to see!
Did you do the art for this as well? Because it's SUPERB.
ReplyDeleteThose are like all of my favorite story tags, AND the author is Bookish Delight.
ReplyDeleteYOU HAVE MY ATTENTION.
Hotblood is the finest writing technique.
ReplyDelete@derpy dash typhlosion What's that got to do with the story? I'm just curious.
ReplyDelete@derpy dash typhlosion What's that got to do with the story? I'm just curious.
ReplyDeleteThis is gonna be intense, cheezy, and sappy.
ReplyDeleteI love it.
@Ponybro7
ReplyDeleteI think they were (for some reason) basing it off the first poster's comment of "cool", making it "cool beans".
Anyway,
@Bookish Delight
I already said this on DA, but...this is one crazy story. Looking forward to the next part (but don't rush anything, of course).
@Shellsh0cker
ReplyDeleteHee hee! You're too kind. ^_^
@Arcainum
I consider myself to be more Stylish Action(tm) than Hotblood(tm), but indeed, we are allies. :)
@DPV111
Those are the three things I do best! Especially the last two. :)
@The Lovely Penguin
Thanks! And don't worry--this story isn't allowing me to rush it, even with my actively trying to! :D
This is a cool story bro.
ReplyDeletehttp://www.kens5.com/news/West-Coast-abuzz-after-washing-machine-sized-fireball-sighting--148452435.html
ReplyDeleteFireball: "RAINBOW DASH!"
@Pikari
ReplyDelete...I knew we shouldn't have moved the Wonderbolts Derby to Nevada.