• Story: Fireball! (Update Part 2!)



    [Normal] [Adventure] [Sci-Fi] [Comedy]

    Author:
    Bookish Delight
    Description: Several years after Nightmare Moon's defeat, a meteor is seen hurtling across the sky. Its presence heralds a reckoning for Rainbow Dash... as well as the greatest spectacle Equestria will ever witness!

    Fireball! Part 1
    Fireball! Part 2 (New!)

    Additional Tags: Her hooves are BURNING RED!

    28 kommentaari:

    1. Hmm i may have to read this later...

      VastaKustuta
    2. I've been inspired by Rainbow Dash. I'm not really a fanfiction person but I'm going to give them a try.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Just skimmed through this instead of sleeping. Just by skimming i liked it. Will read in-depth later.

      VastaKustuta
    4. That was cracktastic and awesome and the author deserves a medal.

      You have my attention.

      Proceed :D

      VastaKustuta
    5. This was just what I needed to read after that horrid...thing...that another fic turned in to. Normally I'd avoid a Sci-Fi tag but for some reason I thought I'd check it out.

      Glad I did too. Interesting writing style, mysterious without being overly so, very interesting takes on the future, drama while still being chipper...and of course Pinkie being Pinkie.

      Can't wait for more.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Well, I didn't like the part with Rarity and the cake, but overall this entire first chapter was just... WOW! Almost pure action from top to bottom without pause. It almost has a crazy, anime-like feel to it. In a good way.

      Awesome start to the story so far, and I'm usually not interested in [Sci-Fi] fics at all. Looking forward to Chapter 2!

      VastaKustuta
    7. If that BURNING RED is telling me anything, and this has ANYTHING to do with G Gundam, well shit, I'm going to have to read this.

      VastaKustuta
    8. From what I've seen of the story, I'm kinda rooting for Rainbow Dash.

      VastaKustuta
    9. My hoof is burning red. It's loud roar tells me to grasp victory! Shining Finger!

      VastaKustuta
    10. Well that was certainly action packed and all kinds of epic but the constant POV shifts make it really choppy and kind of hard to read while also making for a lot of unanswered questions. Hopefully the next few parts will maintain the epic action while improving the exposition.

      VastaKustuta
    11. @Catharsis25 You are off on your BURNING HOOVES. That is the BURNING HOOF. If it were the one you're referencing, it would have been thus, "This hoof of mine glows with an AWESOME POWER...Its light will illuminate my victory! SHIIIININIIIING HOOOOOOOOFFF!!"...I apologize. So VERY much. (but I regret nothing!)

      VastaKustuta
    12. I'm not one for reading stories at the moment but I have to say the cover is my DP on Facebook.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Oh, wow, we're live! I can finally stop biting my fingers! ^^;

      While G Gundam is not expressly in this story, it will contain every bit of its burning spirit--with lots of character to boot! Observant readers will notice that this is so far titled "1 of 5"; as in, for once, I have an actual plan for this thing. :) Rest assured, all of your questions will be addressed and explained!

      (Except that one about the towels. Some things are just better left mysteries.)

      Immense thanks to all who have commented and/or enjoyed so far; and to those who'll be reading this story over the next few days, I hope you do the same as well! It's going to be a crazy ride, as well as--hopefully--a novel take on my favorite side character that we don't often get to see!

      VastaKustuta
    14. Did you do the art for this as well? Because it's SUPERB.

      VastaKustuta
    15. Those are like all of my favorite story tags, AND the author is Bookish Delight.

      YOU HAVE MY ATTENTION.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Hotblood is the finest writing technique.

      VastaKustuta
    17. @derpy dash typhlosion What's that got to do with the story? I'm just curious.

      VastaKustuta
    18. @derpy dash typhlosion What's that got to do with the story? I'm just curious.

      VastaKustuta
    19. This is gonna be intense, cheezy, and sappy.
      I love it.

      VastaKustuta
    20. @Ponybro7

      I think they were (for some reason) basing it off the first poster's comment of "cool", making it "cool beans".

      Anyway,

      @Bookish Delight

      I already said this on DA, but...this is one crazy story. Looking forward to the next part (but don't rush anything, of course).

      VastaKustuta
    21. @Shellsh0cker
      Hee hee! You're too kind. ^_^

      @Arcainum
      I consider myself to be more Stylish Action(tm) than Hotblood(tm), but indeed, we are allies. :)

      @DPV111
      Those are the three things I do best! Especially the last two. :)

      @The Lovely Penguin
      Thanks! And don't worry--this story isn't allowing me to rush it, even with my actively trying to! :D

      VastaKustuta
    22. http://www.kens5.com/news/West-Coast-abuzz-after-washing-machine-sized-fireball-sighting--148452435.html

      Fireball: "RAINBOW DASH!"

      VastaKustuta
    23. @Pikari
      ...I knew we shouldn't have moved the Wonderbolts Derby to Nevada.

      VastaKustuta