• Story: The Cutie Mark Master

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    [Slice of Life] [Comedy]

    Author: TheSlorg
    Description: The Cutie Mark Crusaders have had enough and are determined to finally get their cutie marks. When they meet a mysterious stranger who claims to be the "Cutie Mark Master", their quest looks to finally be at an end. But will even a Master of Cutie Marks not be enough?

    The Cutie Mark Master

    Additional Tags: Short, Parody, Everyone, Cute, Light-hearted
    Friday, February 3, 2012 op
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    16 comments:

    1. KilokkFebruary 3, 2012 at 11:02 AM

      Looks interesting enough

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    2. DoctorWhoovesFebruary 3, 2012 at 11:05 AM

      Why does this cry pedobear....

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    3. Nykkes64February 3, 2012 at 11:09 AM

      The Origins huh? Fascinating!!! ^_^

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    4. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2012 at 11:10 AM

      will read

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    5. WInter StormFebruary 3, 2012 at 11:11 AM

      Uh oh... Is he offering free candy too? O.O

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    6. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2012 at 11:36 AM

      @WInter Storm

      yeah there are only like a billion ways this scenario could easily go grimdark lol

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    7. BakedBadFebruary 3, 2012 at 12:10 PM

      Just finished reading, I found this little story quite charming.

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    8. Daft OatsFebruary 3, 2012 at 12:11 PM

      Short, silly, and fun. Four stars. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm off to drink a lot of water.

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    9. Matt NeighborsFebruary 3, 2012 at 12:22 PM

      That. Was. Epic.

      I was really hoping for some push ups or running with a backpack, though. Oh well.

      Where's that water bottle...

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    10. DPV111February 3, 2012 at 12:58 PM

      That story only had 1 problem. It should have been 10 times longer.
      I want MORE!

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    11. DPV111February 3, 2012 at 1:09 PM

      But yeah the description remind me of THIS

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    12. TheSlorgFebruary 3, 2012 at 2:14 PM

      I am honestly truly humbled that this made it here.

      I woke up today coughing so hard I was doubled over in pain. I had slept poorly, my throat is raw, and I was miserable.

      Then I signed into FIMFiction to find the story was featured and I felt much better.

      Then I logged into chat and they all said "Congrats on EQD!"

      I had no idea it had been posted up!

      Seriously, I'm honored by everyone giving the story a read. If it puts a smile on a few faces, I'll feel I've done my job.

      Thank you. :)

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    13. PikariFebruary 3, 2012 at 2:34 PM

      5 ★

      I enjoyed this fanfic. The story was short and sweet, with the absolute hilarity of a frog talking like Yoda to the CMC. Poor Twi and AJ, haha!

      ...For some odd reason, I imagined the frog's voice sounding like Grover from Sesame Street, which made the story even funnier in my head.

      Hope you feel better soon, TheSlorg!

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    14. Sgt. GrubFebruary 3, 2012 at 2:50 PM

      This wasn't bad by any means. I enjoyed it. The exchanged between the CMCs was very cute, though some of their dialogue(namely some of Sweetie Belle's) seemed off.

      I'll also say that it ended a lot sooner than I felt it should have. it had me loling, then going "Wait, it's over?"

      Anyway, 4-stars. :)

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    15. TheSlorgFebruary 3, 2012 at 3:02 PM

      The biggest complaint I've received so far is that people want it to be longer.

      I made a blog post over on FIMFiction the day I wrote it that stated that if the story was well-received, then I may write up a sequel.

      I suppose I have some writing to do.

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    16. MelodiaFebruary 4, 2012 at 8:46 AM

      Yes, that's exactly what would happen. I.E. the CMC especially seemed pretty much spot on.

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