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Author: Vimbert the Unimpressive
Description: Rainbow Dash has a chance to fulfill her life's dream of joining theThe Pursuit of Victory
Wonderbolts. But without anypony to act as her support, will her nerves
get the better of her?
The Pursuit of Victory Alternate
Additional Tags: Tenacity is important in life.
19 comments:
That author........lol..........
ReplyDeleteGeshundheit.
ReplyDeletenoooo im third???
ReplyDeleteand who is this author?
ReplyDeleteHey Dash story
ReplyDeleteShes almost there and....................
ReplyDeleteTRY AGAIN NEXT YEAR LOLOLOLOLOLO
This Vimbert is not very unimpressive... His and/or her writing is quite good.
ReplyDeleteZegenen.
ReplyDeleteThis fic is very great. Well written too. The alternate was a nice take as well
ReplyDelete"It's cool to love to win, but better to hate to lose..."
ReplyDeletelol I wanna see a fanfic that turns Dash into Michael Jordan - a complete asshole with a unhealthy pathological need to win at everything. Yep. Read up on it sometime. That's how you get 6 fucking rings and that's why Lebron will be lucky to win 2.
That was sad. ;_;
ReplyDeleteThat was good! I have no idea why the fic is rated as low as it is.
ReplyDeleteCome on, don't just rate a fic 1 or 2 stars! At least give it a fair critique or, failing that, share your feelings!
@mycutiemarkisagun
ReplyDeleteI always liked this one most:
"Winning isn't everything. It's the only thing."
- Vince Lombardi
@Batty Gloom
ReplyDeleteI do like feedback, even if it's negative.
It's nice to see that a story can have a sad ending without being a sapfest. How does Rainbow Dash deal with a crushing blow? Read this fic for a biblical example, and then bow down and face Vimbert.
ReplyDeleteNo, seriously. More fics should possess a rich and quirkily accurate narration of the ponies they're centered upon. F'naaa.
Please, keep submitting stuff. The Internet needs it.
@Bombedrumbum
ReplyDeleteWhat? The "alternate" is an alternate link, not an alternate version...
Anyway I read this on FimFic (alternate link) and didn't especially like the story. The writing is great and I enjoy the author's other stories, but the plot and characterization just don't cut it for me. I left my review and opinions on FimFic and they can be read there, I'm not going to clog up the comments here by repeating myself.
Accidentically close the wrong tab, lose entire comment...
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed your in character narration, I think it does well to capture and characterize the examples we've seen of Rainbow Dash buckling under pressure in the show.
Now off to read the rest of your stories.
there are moremust read NOW!!!!!
ReplyDeleteim more of a huy who doesnt like to be viewed as soft but its writers like this that made you hard a little softer listened to skrillex as i read it but still
very well done :D
@EPIC!!! AWESOME!!!
ReplyDeleteI... uh. Thank you? I gather you enjoyed it, and that's always good to hear.