• Story: The Price of Grace (Update Story 2!)

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    [Sad][Dark][Adventure]

    Author: Sparkle
    Description:

    Celestia and Luna live a carefree childhood at Canterlot Castle, but its end approaches far too quickly. As both of them try to come to grips with their future roles as queens, they find themselves drifting apart; while Celestia is ready to adjust, Luna struggles. Meanwhile, a new evil rises that could drive a wedge between the two for good...
    The Price of Grace 


    Additional Tags: Long, Drama, Growing up, War, Redemption
    [Sad][Dark][Adventure] Sequel

    Description: Young Celestia has gone into hiding in the underbelly of Equestria. Through his vile scheming, Discord has driven her out of Canterlot Castle, engineering a civil war; Luna, her mind and soul poisoned by Discord, has turned into Nightmare Moon. Sooner or later, Celestia must face what she knows is her destiny: to confront and banish her own sister, before the advent of Eternal Night.
    The Nightmare (New Part 2!)

    Additional Tags: Destiny, Eternal Night, Betrayal, War, Grace
    Monday, June 18, 2012 op
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    14 comments:

    1. TKJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:00 PM

      Good story.

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    2. teaspooonofgodzillaJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:02 PM

      Great story

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    3. Pinkamina Diane PieJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:04 PM

      Sounds good, very good.

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    4. ZeroHeroJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:06 PM

      I always enjoy a good Celestia/Luna fic.

      *Stores this one away for later :P*

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    5. HuntingfurbysJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:31 PM

      Luna is simply divine. I'm interested in reading this. It can't be sadder than Bubbles anyways.

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    6. Pherisphena LadeaJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:33 PM

      Seems like everyone is a bit tired with this story or something. It didn't get much feedback.

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    7. teaspooonofgodzillaJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:35 PM

      @Gwriterk
      yep it sure seems that way

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    8. NalyJanuary 20, 2012 at 8:05 PM

      @teaspooonofgodzillaStill, it is his first fanfic. I would think this would be a good start if you're wanting to try out your skills at writing for the first time.

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    9. Ignacio SantacruzJanuary 20, 2012 at 9:07 PM

      Sad? Sure why not, I'm in the mood to be depressed for a while.

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    10. MysticJanuary 20, 2012 at 10:20 PM

      A little jumpy at times, but overall a really decent read. I am watching this one in interest.

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    11. Zephyr January 21, 2012 at 1:18 AM

      I thought that this was actually quite good . I like the way he paints luna as well the night . not loved by most and beautiful in a dark way . I actually feel like the way she is written in this story is quite how she would be . though I feel like acier was kinda dropped that is to say he suddenly wasn't mentioned for awhile .

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    12. metapsionicMarch 13, 2012 at 12:08 PM

      A bit of a long read with a slow pace, but the writing's good quality. I'm intrigued now and I'd like to see more

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    13. StarfallJune 18, 2012 at 10:10 PM

      Looks like a really good story to me. This might be one of the few sad (or part sad) stories that I actually read.

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    14. lancerhnjJuly 6, 2012 at 4:03 PM

      This story is frightfully underrated, a great read defiantly recommend it.

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