#1 Twilight, hold an auction for that book. You'll be rich in ten seconds flat! (I know, I'm terrible.)
#2 MORE! I must know what happens next!......OK, get a hold of yourself. Seriously, this is one epic comic. Can't wait to see the rest of it as it's finished.
The author of the 2nd comic needs to get someone to proofread his writing for him. I find it hard to take a story seriously when it has grammatical errors ("I see your awake") and other mechanical wonkiness, like frequently missing commas and apostrophes.
The first one is pretty good and despite a few grammar mistakes in the second one it looks interesting to me, hopefully there will be more in the future. :)
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Also, when do we turn in Day 2 of Artist Traning Grounds?
ReplyDeleteThat first one's link is busted up.
ReplyDeleteUh...click for full?
ReplyDeleteLink for first: http://toxic-mario.deviantart.com/art/That-s-a-Keeper-278856949
ReplyDelete1st one is broke
ReplyDeletesecond is really good
E gads...#1 Link is bad...
ReplyDeletehttp://toxic-mario.deviantart.com/art/That-s-a-Keeper-278856949
Yay! Comics! My favorite part of the night.
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@CityFlyer502
ReplyDeleteThanks man!
Sad now that i need to raid her trash for that book
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ReplyDelete#1 Twilight, hold an auction for that book. You'll be rich in ten seconds flat! (I know, I'm terrible.)
ReplyDelete#2 MORE! I must know what happens next!......OK, get a hold of yourself. Seriously, this is one epic comic. Can't wait to see the rest of it as it's finished.
I actually laughed out loud at the first one.
ReplyDeleteI read the second in a Russian accent because I thought it seemed appropriate.
@CityFlyer502
ReplyDeleteThat's the 10th comment or so I've gotten on that. XD
She doesn't need the book because everypony already knows dashie is 100% awesome. O,0
ReplyDeleteRAINBOW DASH: 20% Cooler, 80% Pony, 100% AWESOME
ReplyDeleteHaha first one made me lol, nice work.
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ReplyDeletethats all the math a brony ever needs.
#1 lol Silly Dash. I guess all the other pages are blank. Surprised Twilight didn't complain about it being a waste of a book. :P
ReplyDelete#2 My guess is the artist's first language isn't English. lol It's certainly an... interesting series of comics so far.
The author of the 2nd comic needs to get someone to proofread his writing for him. I find it hard to take a story seriously when it has grammatical errors ("I see your awake") and other mechanical wonkiness, like frequently missing commas and apostrophes.
ReplyDelete#1 self promotion by book. haha!
ReplyDelete#2 MOAR!
All gay
ReplyDeleteAll gay
ReplyDeleteI love these comics
ReplyDelete1. I would've kept the book. Twi!
ReplyDelete2. hmmm creepy.
#1, Twilight didn't keep that book because she already memorized the facts in it. :)
ReplyDelete#2, Oh G**, NO!
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ReplyDeleteThe first one is pretty good and despite a few grammar mistakes in the second one it looks interesting to me, hopefully there will be more in the future. :)
ReplyDeleteOoh, I'm interested in the Rising Darkness comic.
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