• Story: Striped Like Me

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    Author: Fernin
    Description: M.L.P's Bridle Gossip, but slightly redone; Applejack's now alone in her Poison Joke fun. Should she trust Zecora to set things to rights, or will our farm pony forever wear stripes?
    Striped Like Me

    Additional Tags: Rewritten episode; rhyming zebras yay!
    Saturday, December 31, 2011 op
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    35 comments:

    1. Cosmic driveDecember 31, 2011 at 11:00 AM

      Ooh! A Zecora fic!

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    2. BombedrumbumDecember 31, 2011 at 11:00 AM

      Oh. Mah. God.


      This story......is definitely capturing my interest!!

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    3. Cosmic driveDecember 31, 2011 at 11:00 AM

      And Applejack fic.

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    4. Spitfire8aDecember 31, 2011 at 11:01 AM

      Hmmm i guess im a hipster because i am already reading this. good read everypony. check it out.

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    5. Nykkes64December 31, 2011 at 11:06 AM

      Its capturing everyone's interest!!!!
      And its a GOOD THING!!!! ^_^

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    6. Nykkes64December 31, 2011 at 11:07 AM

      My favorite Pony in a Zebra appearance is Awesome!!!!!! ^_^

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    7. Princess LunaDecember 31, 2011 at 11:07 AM

      @Spitfire8a You don't have magic, so are your wings mane-stream?

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    8. NikoDecember 31, 2011 at 11:08 AM

      Took ya long enough to get this on here.

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    9. BombedrumbumDecember 31, 2011 at 11:08 AM

      @Nykkes64 Wohoo!! Another AppleJack fan!! AppleJack FTW!!

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    10. Nykkes64December 31, 2011 at 11:11 AM

      @Bombedrumbum Thank YOU!!!! ^_^

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    11. Nykkes64December 31, 2011 at 11:14 AM

      AppleJack is my favorite pony ALL TIME!!!!
      She looks AWESOME in her Zebra appearance!! ^_^

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    12. jpDecember 31, 2011 at 11:15 AM

      Oooo this looks interesting

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    13. Spitfire8aDecember 31, 2011 at 11:15 AM

      @Princess Luna Ahhhhhh I c wat u did thar!

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    14. Renegade the Last ShadowboltDecember 31, 2011 at 11:15 AM

      Since this is an Applejack story, I'll read it an wont make any Dash comments

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    15. UnknownDecember 31, 2011 at 11:17 AM

      This story was awesome ^.^ everypony was really in character and the rhyming is awesome.

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    16. thesuperflyDecember 31, 2011 at 11:20 AM

      Hmm, sounds inter- No wait I mean

      Applejack speaking in rhyme?
      GREATEST FANFIC OF ALL TIME!!!

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    17. AnonymousDecember 31, 2011 at 11:20 AM

      I remember reading this a week ago, it was pretty good.

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    18. OnlinowiecDecember 31, 2011 at 11:24 AM

      Hmmmmmm I might read it just for some rhymes :D

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    19. Princess LunaDecember 31, 2011 at 11:24 AM

      @Hato F Hey! You stole the other me's profile pic!

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    20. AnonymousDecember 31, 2011 at 11:55 AM

      This was on my list of potential reading, and seeing it here gave me the push I was needing.

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    21. WilliamDecember 31, 2011 at 12:27 PM

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    22. WilliamDecember 31, 2011 at 12:28 PM

      It's been a long time since I've read a story this good.
      Have you not read it yet? You should.

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    23. AnonymousDecember 31, 2011 at 12:38 PM

      so its a ponyfied version of Black Like Me

      ME GUSTA

      40 Sweet Apple Acres and a Mule

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    24. statooseDecember 31, 2011 at 12:47 PM

      Alternate canons... AUGH, my brain!

      I'll read this.

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    25. SetDecember 31, 2011 at 1:05 PM

      A story so great, deserve my rate. Writing so clear, rhyming quite dear.

      Applejack so tough, her rough ways made my day.

      And as the story began to end, I give this tale five stars to send. But don't forget this little rhyme, for I hope you write more stories sometime.

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    26. MultiversityDecember 31, 2011 at 2:21 PM

      A story of prejudice overcome. Reading this was lots of fun!

      I love Zecora and her rhymes, though I know it can be hard at times. I commend you, sir, for your poetic skill. The dialogue gave me a quite a thrill!

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    27. SuperGiantRobotDecember 31, 2011 at 2:31 PM

      I can rhyme just as well when feeling inspired,
      I've done quite a lot and am often admired
      But enough of patting my back, that's not why I'm here,
      Speaking in rhyme is a hobby most dear
      It can be hard work, the path can be rough
      But I struggle along, never saying "Enough!"
      Giving up's for a coward, that's not what I do
      I see you think the same and I'm most proud of you.
      Zecora can be tough; speaking in two-part rhyme
      Matching her speaking style can take quite some time
      But you persevered, yes you climbed the mountain,
      Soon enough the rhymes flowed from your hand like a fountain
      I doff my cap to your story, this tale that you tell
      Applejack as a zebra? This sure won't end well!


      Mayhaps at some point we might share rhymes between,
      Might a friendship result? That's yet to be seen...

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    28. AnonymousDecember 31, 2011 at 7:39 PM

      Not the best I have ever read, but still there is nothing I wish I had done instead.

      The number of stars I will give is four; as Apple Jack may have been out of character, but I am not sure.

      Though if judging a book by their cover makes AJ racist or not I am not sure which, her actions overall certainly made her out to be a total bitch.

      -Havokpony

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    29. RHJuniorDecember 31, 2011 at 10:04 PM

      Everyone but twilight was accusing Zecora of everything from witchcraft to animal torture to cannibalism--- but it's Applejack who gets singled out as the racist. Why? Because she's an "ignorant country hick," of course.

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    30. DPV111January 1, 2012 at 2:37 AM

      @RHJunior

      I have to partially agree. AJ was only worried about Applebloom for the most part. Pinkie was by far the most unreasonably prejudiced.

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    31. BraininthejarJanuary 1, 2012 at 2:10 PM

      Rhymes were nice. But it was Pinky's "leaps of illogic" that really made my day. XD

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    32. WierdplatformerJanuary 1, 2012 at 3:54 PM

      That was quite an enjoyable read and acknowledges a great moral to heed. I don't want to sound like I'm picking a knit, but the characters' actions didn't always quite fit. The grammar was swell and the plot was quite funny. I just think that there were part where the motives where runny. Now, I won't prattle on, for this fic I approve. As a writer, I look forward to your writing behooved.

      (See, now you have us commenters all in rut. The rhyming from our mouths we can no longer shut! XD)

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    33. FoxOfWarFebruary 5, 2012 at 12:48 PM

      Stumbled upon this from the artist's dA... and dayumn, I missed this the first time this going up on EqD? Phail!

      Really liked this short n' sweet story.

      I can only imagine how much work it took to get AJ's phrases to rhyme x)

      Also the image - both the header image and my own mental image - of AJ as zebra is beyond cute.

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    34. The Seventh WonderboltFebruary 10, 2012 at 12:29 PM

      This is the second time I've read this, and my opinion of remains the same. I absolutely ADORE Zecora and I wish there were more stories featuring her in a prominent role.

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    35. DiamondTiaraApril 2, 2012 at 1:48 AM

      I rely like this plz make more

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