• Story: My Gift

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    Author: SoundofRainfall
    Description: Luna's mental breakdown before trying to bring forth eternal night, as told from her point of view.
    My Gift

    Additional Tags: Madness, Arrogance, Equality
    reede, 9. detsember 2011 op
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    19 kommentaari:

    1. X X X9. detsember 2011, kell 11:00

      cool

      VastaKustuta
    2. Gypsy9. detsember 2011, kell 11:11

      I like to believe she was raped in the day

      VastaKustuta
    3. Shadow Heart9. detsember 2011, kell 11:11

      Poor Luna T_T

      VastaKustuta
    4. Matt Neighbors9. detsember 2011, kell 11:13

      "Madness, Arrogance, Equality"

      Sponsored by the NAACP?
      /rimshot
      /I kid, I kid

      VastaKustuta
    5. Sigil9. detsember 2011, kell 11:21

      Very interesting.

      VastaKustuta
    6. kawoline9. detsember 2011, kell 12:18

      @gypsy

      lol, WHAT!!!!???

      VastaKustuta
    7. Warden9. detsember 2011, kell 13:15

      This was intriguing.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Maquabra9. detsember 2011, kell 13:21

      Sounds cheesy. Has anyone here read it already?

      VastaKustuta
    9. moocow14529. detsember 2011, kell 13:26

      Usual Stream of Consciousness rant, nothing special really.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Corky649. detsember 2011, kell 13:36

      Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Klice9. detsember 2011, kell 14:30

      Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Klice9. detsember 2011, kell 14:32

      Nice story ! I really like the concept.

      I don't know where else I could ask, so I'll do it here : Is somebody knows where to find a nightmare moon fight story in Celestia's point of view ?

      Thanks in advance and sorry for polluting the comments.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Cloudhammer9. detsember 2011, kell 15:15

      Very dark and menacing, I like it so far, will keep an eye out for sequels

      VastaKustuta
    14. Gypsy9. detsember 2011, kell 15:31

      @Karrotline

      well ya see you don't turn into some freakin' evil version of yourself because you got jelous of ponies fuckin' sleeping and shit, no, for that crazy mofo it had traumatizing to get what she had. So I'm like she probably got raped in the day so because of that experience she got trauma

      VastaKustuta
    15. Maquabra9. detsember 2011, kell 18:16

      @Corky64:
      Well, this idea is actually overused. After reading a few dark/grimdark fics, I must say that they are pretty much repetitive. What's worse, when I was trying to write my own one, I was finding along the way fics with my "original" ideas o) Don't want to write the same shit for the 100th time so I need to come up with more ideas before I continue... Time to go totally off-canon.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Sleepingcobrox9. detsember 2011, kell 20:32

      I will say that this story of Luna's perspective really works here. I suggest you all read through this story to the very end

      VastaKustuta
    17. Anonüümne10. detsember 2011, kell 13:03

      Well, you already got my review on FF dot net, but I'm still going to comment here anyways~ (: This story is breathtaking; perfect example of why you'll always be my favorite author!

      VastaKustuta
    18. Pokeball 252521. detsember 2011, kell 14:11

      I must say it is decent a decent fiction, grammar

      VastaKustuta
    19. Pokeball 252521. detsember 2011, kell 14:12

      I must say it is decent a decent fic, grammar was good flow was good but it felt like an unbalance in the atmosphere,too much head-cannon and not enough cannon from the mind of the princess of the nigh.The nicknames that Celestia gives her the way she acts when she running and most of all the Luna's monologue to herself doesn't feel like something Luna would say.Granted Luna doesn't have much screen much less the royal family and time and your head-cannon will be your head-cannon but all the same I felt my immersion constantly being ripped away from me whenever I started to read Luna dialog or your narration of her inner thoughts. But it's also your competing with great stories like upheaval:breaking point and heavenly turmoil casting some pretty big shadows on your work and shaping the communities view on the possibilities of the royal family mentality. Some decent works on Luna as the a character would be Night's favorite child and a few other but keep doing what your doing it's great work.

      VastaKustuta

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