• Story: Hiatus (Update Sequel!)

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    Author:     Vargras
    Description: After a thousand years, Luna finds herself finally freed from the form of Night Mare Moon - the ordeal has left her weakened, though, and she is ordered to spend the next year regaining her strength and getting herself up to speed on what has transpired during her thousand-year absence. Finding ways to spend that time? That... might be troublesome.

    Hiatus

    Additional Tags: Luna, Celestia, Absence, Daily Life
    [Slice of Life]
    Description: A sequel to 'Hiatus' - Spurred on by her sister, Luna decides to open a summer camp dedicated to the arts and sciences in an attempt to become further involved with the daily lives of Equestria's citizens, hopefully improving her reputation in the process. The campers that sign up prove to be more than what the Princess of the Night was expecting, however. 'Camp Counselor' certainly wasn't supposed to be part of the royal duties.
    Stuck In The Middle With You (New!)

    Additional Tags: Summer camp, friendship, Luna, Mane 6
    Wednesday, December 7, 2011 op
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    25 comments:

    1. theexogenerateDecember 7, 2011 at 5:01 PM

      Shrodingers comment may or may not be first.

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    2. Spikely WhiplashDecember 7, 2011 at 5:05 PM

      @theexogenerate

      Did you know that Schrodinger's Cat was originally conceived to show how preposterous certain theories of quantum physics were? True story.

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    3. TimDecember 7, 2011 at 5:06 PM

      nope, it is first

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    4. Mr. UnsmileyDecember 7, 2011 at 5:08 PM

      Huh. This sounds promising, but it seems to have an idea almost identical to that of Progress.

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    5. Mather MaddoxDecember 7, 2011 at 5:09 PM

      Ooh, I've seen this on FIMfiction.

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    6. VargrasDecember 7, 2011 at 5:12 PM

      @Mr. Unsmiley

      I've read Progress before, and they seemed nothing alike while I was writing Hiatus. Regardless, I hope the rest of you enjoy it.

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    7. Shadow HeartDecember 7, 2011 at 5:13 PM

      So, another fic like Progress.

      Sounds nice.

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    8. theexogenerateDecember 7, 2011 at 5:14 PM

      @Spikely Whiplash
      Yeah, the uncertainty principle and such. I personally agree with special reletivity, although now with those neutrinos reportedly travelling faster than the speed of light...

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    9. Jack KnoxDecember 7, 2011 at 5:16 PM

      @theexogenerateIrrelevance levels are at an all-time high!

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    10. RED SANDVICHDecember 7, 2011 at 5:24 PM

      Great story, I recommend it to everypony!

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    11. ChandlerDecember 7, 2011 at 5:29 PM

      Wow... we have a Luna fic where everypony is talking about physics is the comments...

      Actually, I don't mind. I'll take a look at this story, although it does sound like Progress (which I haven't read, so who cares?).

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    12. AnonymousDecember 7, 2011 at 5:39 PM

      @theexogenerate
      Actually, they found that experiment to be fatally flawed. They're apparently redoing it.
      Good news, this means that nothing-is-faster-than-light is still in effect, and fast travelling to the future is still a possibility.

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    13. iisawDecember 7, 2011 at 5:40 PM

      @Tim
      "nope, it is first"

      But not until you looked at it.

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    14. JukashiDecember 7, 2011 at 5:57 PM

      It's an ok story. Not great. There are a few plot holes, mismatches with the show, and it's sort of simplistic - even a bit cliched at times. A few amusing moments, but I wouldn't read it again.

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    15. Autumn WindDecember 7, 2011 at 6:13 PM

      Hey, you made it to EqD! Good work!

      Also, this is only like Progress in that both follow Princess Luna.

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    16. TundraDecember 7, 2011 at 6:26 PM

      I saw this a bit earlier this month. It was a good read. Time-consuming, but it was a good read. I really like how Luna effectively banished her nightmare (in more ways than one).
      I don't know why the comments are comparing this to "Progress" because I don't see any similarities.

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    17. ForderzDecember 7, 2011 at 8:10 PM

      This... has very little in common with Progress.

      I'm with Jukashi here: enjoyed it, but not something I'll come back to.

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    18. VargrasDecember 7, 2011 at 8:18 PM

      @Forderz

      It happens. I enjoyed writing it, and I know others have greatly enjoyed it as well, but it won't be everyone's cup of tea - no story ever is.

      Still, I appreciate that you both took the time to post comments about it.

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    19. richfilesDecember 7, 2011 at 10:35 PM

      So basically, this is Schrodinger's story...

      It is either just like Progress or is not like Progress at all. Without observing the story, it is simultaneously like and not like Progress. Only once I chose to observe it, will it be measured to be one state or the other.

      Wow... This is the most intriguing result of a "first" comment in the history of ever!

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    20. VargrasDecember 7, 2011 at 10:45 PM

      @richfiles

      Of all the possible off-topic discussions that could have started, we get a physics discussion instead.

      And I'm strangely okay with it.

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    21. SynxDecember 7, 2011 at 10:57 PM

      I really did like this one.

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    22. csos95December 8, 2011 at 2:52 PM

      awesome story im glad its finally on eqd

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    23. XamrinDecember 9, 2011 at 12:59 PM

      There are a lot of references in this one. One to Oblivion and another to 2010. I thought that was great.

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    24. DPV111December 26, 2011 at 4:49 PM

      I absolutely loved this story.

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    25. Bigyeti1369March 6, 2012 at 7:57 AM

      Its already 100% updated complete

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