• Story: For All That Must Be (Update Part 6!)

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    [Shipping]

    Author: cruelfeline
    Description: The balance was lost eons ago when fear and anger drove two friends apart. Recent events have lead to Equestrian secrets coming to light, and Twilight Sparkle must recover what has been lost by rejoining two halves of an eternal whole, changing Equestria forever.
    For All That Must Be (New Part 6!)

    Additional Tags: Long, origins, redemption, forgiveness, guilt
    reede, 16. detsember 2011 op
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    14 kommentaari:

    1. Greeny16. detsember 2011, kell 09:06

      Wth does it matter to be first? >_>

      VastaKustuta
    2. Shadow Heart16. detsember 2011, kell 09:16

      @Rita Lot

      If you ever first again, I will teleport you into the dimension of Nightmares.

      Trust me, you don't want that

      Also, Celestia ship?

      VastaKustuta
    3. no_space16. detsember 2011, kell 09:22

      Oh, yes, Celecord. My second favorite Celestia ship. Forget the list, this one is an immediate read.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Municipal Engines16. detsember 2011, kell 09:35

      A Dislestia fic! I've seen some pictures and comics, but never a fic. This might be interesting.

      VastaKustuta
    5. thejayowl16. detsember 2011, kell 09:46

      read one similar, bur this is decent

      VastaKustuta
    6. Maquabra16. detsember 2011, kell 09:51

      Why is there so much shipping lately? More grimdark plox.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Gayettix16. detsember 2011, kell 18:01

      More grimdark shipping!!

      VastaKustuta
    8. BronyHaterSlayer16. detsember 2011, kell 22:23

      Wait, so it's a shipping between Celestia, and Discord? Eeeewww!

      VastaKustuta
    9. TheManWithTwoNames2. jaanuar 2012, kell 09:39

      A fantastic read, and well deserving of five stars. The fragmented and jarring (and at times, funny) way the author describes Discord's thought processes is incredibly well done. Not to mention the entire story is very well written and easily allows the reader to empathize with Celestia and Twilight.

      VastaKustuta
    10. TheManWithTwoNames23. jaanuar 2012, kell 09:14

      You really do have a flair for going into amazingly illustrative detail in this. Every character's thoughts are well conveyed and in tune with their personalities, and now that the plot is beginning to thicken, I really can't wait for the next update.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Party Favors23. jaanuar 2012, kell 20:20

      >Posted over a month ago
      >12 comments

      Something's wrong here.

      Reading.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Party Favors23. jaanuar 2012, kell 21:03

      .... Holy buck.

      Where are the readers for this? And why aren't its praises being sounded in the streets?

      VastaKustuta
    13. cruelfeline23. jaanuar 2012, kell 23:03

      @TheManWithTwoNames

      Thank you kindly :). Did the higher amount of description not bother you?

      I know some people have been getting frustrated with the description and the rather slow pace I've set. I'm trying to figure out if I should drop some of my language, or keep the style as it's been.

      VastaKustuta
    14. cruelfeline23. jaanuar 2012, kell 23:03

      @Party Favors

      That's very sweet of you to say; thank you!

      I hope my writing continues to be pleasant for you.

      VastaKustuta

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