• Story: All of a Fluttershy

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    [Comedy]

    Author: Impossible Numbers
    Description: When Applejack discovers that a thief has been stealing her prized apples, she looks for help in capturing the culprit. Fluttershy is eager to step in, but she's been acting very oddly of late...
    All of a Fluttershy

    Additional Tags: A pony friendship-comedy whodunnit
    Monday, December 5, 2011 op
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    17 comments:

    1. AnonymousDecember 5, 2011 at 9:00 PM

      NotFirst

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    2. UnknownDecember 5, 2011 at 9:00 PM

      Guessing before reading: It's Angel.

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    3. smokeydops2December 5, 2011 at 9:01 PM

      WHODUNNIT

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    4. Do you like bananas?December 5, 2011 at 9:07 PM

      Wat

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    5. ShingoDecember 5, 2011 at 9:11 PM

      Come on everypony! There's a mystery afoot! Or is it ahoof?

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    6. Jack KnoxDecember 5, 2011 at 9:15 PM

      Who dunnit? lolidunno.
      DONE.

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    7. Marine726December 5, 2011 at 9:37 PM

      Eh it was a decent story! But still good worth my time!

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    8. TharDecember 5, 2011 at 9:42 PM

      A mystery is upon us! Call in Sherclop Holmes (not THAT kind of clop, it's not a dirty word!)

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    9. FluttershyDecember 5, 2011 at 9:42 PM

      A story about me?
      you rock, woohoo!
      I guess ill try it :)

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    10. twohumanDecember 5, 2011 at 10:37 PM

      I have the coolest idea for a small fluttershy comic now. I am going to make the Stare at least 20% cooler!

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    11. DPV111December 5, 2011 at 11:11 PM

      Good god RD was a total bitch in this one.
      I'll let it go since it's a comedy fic but that was borderline OOC.
      Hmm. What should Flutters fight next? I know! A Salamander!

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    12. AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 4:09 AM

      It was ok, but felt kinda messy and rushed...

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    13. StrykeDecember 6, 2011 at 6:25 AM

      That was cute as hell and nicely episodic in feel in a good couple of places.

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    14. Conner CogworkDecember 6, 2011 at 8:56 AM

      I thought that was an AMAZINGLY good read. Absolutely loved it. ^^

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    15. Nomad PrimeDecember 7, 2011 at 2:45 PM

      Big Macintosh reminds me of GrimdarkBigMac in this. the ending was so perfect.

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    16. Luna-tic ScientistDecember 11, 2011 at 11:01 PM

      Excellent story, despite the foreshadowing I didn't figure it out until the 'reveal'. Really enjoyed it, had some great descriptive bits (the 'stare' and 'windows on the soul' spring to mind).

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    17. silverstarDecember 21, 2011 at 8:44 PM

      Balloon! LOL!

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