[Random][Shipping][Comedy]
Author: Mushious
Description: The biggest party Ponyville has ever seen is about hit town. Follow the antics of everypony as they prepare for the best night they'll never remember!Three Pony Story
Additional Tags: We're all gonna die!
54 kommentaari:
Lol sounds fun
VastaKustutaWhat is this, I dont even?
VastaKustutawat.
VastaKustutaDat Tag
VastaKustutalolwut.
VastaKustutaNo seriously. What did I just read? I think my brain did a cartwheel about halfway through and I stopped being capable of reading or writing. Even this comment is just me banging on my keyboard with my head and hoping it comes out coherently kumquat defenestration bellybutton pig narwhal spastic blowfish cockamamie xylophone spoon.
VastaKustutaI love this. Just thought I should let people know.
VastaKustutaoh god it actually got posted. Sorry guys.
VastaKustutaYes author, it was stupid. But I like stupid. Much lulz were to be had.
VastaKustutaWow, I haven't seen one of these for a while.
VastaKustutaI am ashamed to have been involved in this.
VastaKustutaI couldn't read Spiderses. I couldn't read the Half-Life parody.
VastaKustutaI could read this.
It made no sense whatsoever.
It was rather funny.
...
Spoon.
Truly sorry. You'll be seeing a serious fic soon. Rob, you had just as much fun with this as I did.
VastaKustutaI'll check what all the fuss is about
VastaKustutaalso the image on the doc looks saucy
All day long you trot around
VastaKustutaLooking at the apples on the trees
Dreaming all your pony dreams
Licking lips so greedily
Who's a silly pony? Who's a silly pony?
Who is?
You is!
Applejack!
:| it ended with no sex.
VastaKustuta=| don't tease clopfics, that's not nice.
dude what?
VastaKustutaIts not clop. Clop doesn't pass the prereaders.
VastaKustutaAy nod-unk yep! Gid mee anoder~!
VastaKustutaHuh?
VastaKustutaThat made little sense, but it was still hilarious. That was the second time in a week that I've busted up laughing in a room full of people.
VastaKustutaStill on my cell... When I get home I'll move that warning to the top of the doc.
VastaKustuta...okie dokie lokie then.
VastaKustutaI...
VastaKustutaNo.
Damn, it was wierd, some moments were funny some were not. i give it +3/5
VastaKustutaThat... That was an indescribably beautiful slice of random, right there. I'm not kidding, I don't usually read fics, but when I do, they're as crazy as this.
VastaKustutaDammit that warning should have come at the start... my skull... ALL my skull...
VastaKustutaepic lol inc!
VastaKustuta@Berry Punch
VastaKustutaNo, no more wine coolers for you. Besides, vodka is way better, or maybe a good rum.
I don't know what I just read, but I liked it.
VastaKustutaP.S. I know that feeling. 3 am does do strange thing to a person (or pony, whichever you prefer)
I have no idea what I just read.
VastaKustutaIt did cause me to snort and giggle like a moron, though.
Ah well, guess it's the good kind of random we need at times.
Fun little short story of parties and fillyfooling.
VastaKustutaPfft. Screw sense. I'm better off without!
VastaKustutaWhat is this sense you speak of?
VastaKustutaI could tell by the way she parked her chariot sideways that it wouldn't last.
VastaKustutaSomeone sure knows how to mislead the reader into thinking of perfectly innocent things.
VastaKustutaA little over half way through... What the hay? O___o
VastaKustutaAlright, well, that was... interesting. I enjoyed it... But I'm still not sure exactly what that was about. Whatevs, I guess.
VastaKustutaI REGRET NOTHING 5 STARS
VastaKustutaBut... huh? Okay then.
VastaKustutaWe're sorry but the brain you are attempting to reach is not excepting calls at this time. Please hang up and try your call again later.
VastaKustutaWe're sorry but the brain you are attempting to reach is not excepting calls at this time. Please hang up and try your call again later.
@The communist pony
VastaKustutaSomething to do with the fact a child might read a shipping story but avoid grimdark because "they're scary."
We do have young fanmembers here... That been said, maybe I should take this down. Causing 'the dumb' in younglings might not be a good idea.
@Sparky Luck
VastaKustutaYou have caused horrible mental images. You will not be forgiven.
You have also caused lolz. Maybe you shall be forgiven.
Moar Pleez. Less battery operated objects though. Less on that subject overall. Please.
@The Commander
VastaKustutaI don't think I could write another one of these, I'm hating myself for it. Kinda 'squee' over the amount of votes though.
Have a 'serious' Luna fic coming soon though.
WHAT IS THIS AWESOMENESS I DON'T EVEN
VastaKustutaEeh... This needs a new tag: Cloptease.
VastaKustuta*Scratches head* Yeah, I've got nothing.
VastaKustuta>before she could open her mouth to complain, Princess Celestia appeared, winked at Berry and snuck up on Colgate,
VastaKustuta>“Oh-hohoho... You have been a very, very naughty filly,”
-Good humor, but not sure if this 'random Celestia' works that well in this scene ?
>to let her know I am sending Luna along to join in with the fun
-Possibly 'drunk Luna' ? The fun has been doubled, as one could say. ;) (maybe she will bring Abacus too)
>“Silly, you’re allllways late for work!”
-Always late for work, when she can do it in 10 seconds flat ? ...not sure how this works ?
>“my sister Rarity has these long rubbery things stashed in the back of her dresser, kinda like swords! Lets go try them out!”
-*facehoof* ...not sure if this works well while involving young fillies.
>“LET US PARTY LIKE IT WAS NEIGHTEEN EIGHTY-NEIGH!” She declared
-Huh... you know the joke (with Luna) is about 'Partying like it's 999'', right ?
>Colgate. “Wanna... head upstairs with me...?”
>“I thought you’d never ask,” Berry replied
-I suppose that Berry's filly... you know, the one we see in Bridle Gossip, known by plenty of fans, and mentioned in a few stories... is sleeping at a friend's house tonight, yes ?
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Well, that was an 'ok' story, though the 'drunk pony' thing wasn't used as much as it could have been, 'comedy' or otherwise.
@Nova25
VastaKustutaOh god, you actually analyzed this? Be right back, ordering you some mind bleach.
1, Meh, Molestia works wherever you put here. In weird, wonderful and illegal ways.
2,Doh! I forgot Abby.
3, That would give her reason to do it in ten seconds flat, would it not?
4, Thats the point. It's supposed to be like, "WOAH! I did NOT just read that!"
5, Did not know. Did not think about it. Poor pop culture refrence is poor.
6, Ruby? I'd say so. It'd be awkward if she walked in and saw Berry in bed with two other mares. However, it's probably a common occurance for her.
@Sparky Luck
VastaKustutaAnalyzed wh... huh ?
No, no, it's a 'comment', not a 'review'... Made as I read the story.
A 'streaming thought' comment, some would say.
It's something I tend to often do.
Also, Party Luna, 999 :
http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-tonight-were-gonna-party-like-its.html
and
http://johnjoseco.deviantart.com/art/Let-s-Get-LOUDER-221147196
(For reference)
Berry Punch, party pony *AND* good mother, of course.
@Nova25
VastaKustutaDepends which tumblr of Berry's you read. :)
No seriously, what?
VastaKustuta4 Stars? Gonna write a sequel now. Trololololololololol.
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