• Story: Flash's Journal (Update Part 5!)

    by
    [Light Grimdark] [Shipping]

    Author: cesmaster644
    Description: Following the zombie apocalypse, a young stallion decides to record the events surrounding his settlement's survival, with hopes that someone will find it and learn from it, be it from their mistakes or triumphs.
    Flash's Journal Part 1
    Flash's Journal Part 2
    Flash's Journal Part 3
    Flash's Journal Part 4
    Flash's Journal Part 5 (New!)

    Additional Tags: Zombies, Non-mane cast, Ensemble cast
    Monday, November 21, 2011 op
    Labels: , , , , , , , , , , ,
    Open in app
    Share This! Facebook Share Twitter Share

    23 comments:

    1. emp2012November 21, 2011 at 1:03 PM

      This seems interesting. Might make it to my ever growing "fanfics to read" list, skyrim is not helping me read all these.

      ReplyDelete
    2. kawolineNovember 21, 2011 at 1:13 PM

      zombeeez, alright :D

      ReplyDelete
    3. crris14November 21, 2011 at 1:16 PM

      Not a lot of fanfics about zombies or zombie ponies although we should make more of them......maybe i guess ill write one

      ReplyDelete
    4. SupahponyNovember 21, 2011 at 1:16 PM

      moar :D

      ReplyDelete
    5. TheIdlingRevNovember 21, 2011 at 2:57 PM

      Zombies, I have only seen two other zombie pony fanfics, although there are probably more. Seems intriguing

      ReplyDelete
    6. karimNovember 21, 2011 at 2:58 PM

      Hmmm... interesting. This seems legit.

      ReplyDelete
    7. BlackSwanizedNovember 21, 2011 at 3:19 PM

      Sounds interesting, and it has Berry Punch, Blues, Carrot Top, Vinyl and Octavia as tags. I'm expecting a good read

      ReplyDelete
    8. HanselNovember 21, 2011 at 3:37 PM

      @Applebloomismywaifu Go ahead and first all you want, but please be respectful of story posts and leave them out of it.

      Wow, this story sounds amazing! There's only one character in the labels that I wasn't really excited about, and I've never read a fic that had them in it, so this'll be my first impression for that bg pony. I hope it's a good one!

      ReplyDelete
    9. AnonymousNovember 21, 2011 at 3:44 PM

      oh, so the "light" grimdark tag is pink colored now? lol

      ReplyDelete
    10. Dusty the Royal JanitorNovember 21, 2011 at 4:38 PM

      What's all this about there being "so few" zombie fics? There are at least like twelve... probably more.
      Not many of them are good enough to get on EqD, but there are a fair amount of them.

      ReplyDelete
    11. Joey the JoeyNovember 21, 2011 at 5:19 PM

      Hmmm, how do I feel about this?

      Zombies = meh

      However...

      Background Ponies = awesome

      Fuggit, I'm reading it. I don't know why I try to stop myself, I read just about everything, personal preferences be damned!

      ReplyDelete
    12. pegasis1924November 21, 2011 at 9:07 PM

      June 19th is my birthday :D Anywho, amazing story!

      ReplyDelete
    13. That White GuyNovember 21, 2011 at 10:17 PM

      This is an amazing zombie story, please continue with it.

      ReplyDelete
    14. AnonymousNovember 23, 2011 at 1:49 PM

      it is a good story but there is something that bugs me.they say that there are cars but i have seen all of seson oun and two and i havent seen no cars

      ReplyDelete
    15. Vinyl ScratchNovember 30, 2011 at 8:42 PM

      Backround ponies-win
      zombies-WIN
      shipping-WINWIN
      Vinnyl shipping with pony other than Octavia-WINWINWIN
      1st person to 3rd person-C-C-C-C-COMBO BREAKA!!!

      ReplyDelete
    16. TenchiFreak5December 9, 2011 at 8:23 AM

      I like this hybrid style.

      ReplyDelete
    17. KeeperofthedarkDecember 12, 2011 at 10:46 PM

      Very interesting story so far. Now considering that author's note at the end...

      First of all, why do I like this story. Well, I for one like the combination of light grimdark/seriousness and shipping. I feel that those two mix together well when done right, and so far you seem to be doing so. It will take time, of course, to see for certain, but it seems to be going pretty steady so far.

      On a similar note, the characters are also well done, and seem to have depth. Using OC's allows your characterization as an author to shine through, and those OC's being background ponies is also a nice touch. Once again, only time will tell if they will continue this trend and develop as good characters should.

      The transitions from first to third person, in my opinion, are good. It allows the story to expand beyond one point of view, and you execute it well. By that, I mean you make it very clear when the point of view changes.

      Now let's address the plot. Honestly, I do not have too much to say about this. The story has not really progressed far enough for me to see where it will go exactly. However, what has been done so far is pretty solid. All in all, this is a very worthwhile story, and one I honestly hope you keep up with.

      ReplyDelete
    18. chappers27December 19, 2011 at 12:45 AM

      More, dear celestia more!

      This is such a great fanfic but there is so much to be found out, this could become a long runner (nor as long as fallout equestria mind you)

      Definitely a 5 star

      ReplyDelete
    19. StormcallerJanuary 11, 2012 at 10:49 PM

      Love the story very nicely written but I do have a question. How are zombies light grimdark? Lol I find that funny. Or maybe it's just a lack of sleep.

      ReplyDelete
    20. danielmajors1January 12, 2012 at 12:10 AM

      6 stars definitely, love the story, continue plzzz

      ReplyDelete
    21. chappers27January 13, 2012 at 8:00 AM

      This is my favourite fanfic, thank you for writing

      ReplyDelete
    22. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2012 at 9:14 AM

      one of my top favs
      it just sucks that i read so fast...

      ReplyDelete
    23. KeeperofthedarkMay 15, 2012 at 10:54 PM

      It lives!!! I am so happy this updated! lol

      ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)