Author: cesmaster644
Description: Following the zombie apocalypse, a young stallion decides to record the events surrounding his settlement's survival, with hopes that someone will find it and learn from it, be it from their mistakes or triumphs.Flash's Journal Part 1
Flash's Journal Part 2
Flash's Journal Part 3
Flash's Journal Part 4
Flash's Journal Part 5 (New!)
Additional Tags: Zombies, Non-mane cast, Ensemble cast
23 kommentaari:
This seems interesting. Might make it to my ever growing "fanfics to read" list, skyrim is not helping me read all these.
VastaKustutazombeeez, alright :D
VastaKustutaNot a lot of fanfics about zombies or zombie ponies although we should make more of them......maybe i guess ill write one
VastaKustutamoar :D
VastaKustutaZombies, I have only seen two other zombie pony fanfics, although there are probably more. Seems intriguing
VastaKustutaHmmm... interesting. This seems legit.
VastaKustutaSounds interesting, and it has Berry Punch, Blues, Carrot Top, Vinyl and Octavia as tags. I'm expecting a good read
VastaKustuta@Applebloomismywaifu Go ahead and first all you want, but please be respectful of story posts and leave them out of it.
VastaKustutaWow, this story sounds amazing! There's only one character in the labels that I wasn't really excited about, and I've never read a fic that had them in it, so this'll be my first impression for that bg pony. I hope it's a good one!
oh, so the "light" grimdark tag is pink colored now? lol
VastaKustutaWhat's all this about there being "so few" zombie fics? There are at least like twelve... probably more.
VastaKustutaNot many of them are good enough to get on EqD, but there are a fair amount of them.
Hmmm, how do I feel about this?
VastaKustutaZombies = meh
However...
Background Ponies = awesome
Fuggit, I'm reading it. I don't know why I try to stop myself, I read just about everything, personal preferences be damned!
June 19th is my birthday :D Anywho, amazing story!
VastaKustutaThis is an amazing zombie story, please continue with it.
VastaKustutait is a good story but there is something that bugs me.they say that there are cars but i have seen all of seson oun and two and i havent seen no cars
VastaKustutaBackround ponies-win
VastaKustutazombies-WIN
shipping-WINWIN
Vinnyl shipping with pony other than Octavia-WINWINWIN
1st person to 3rd person-C-C-C-C-COMBO BREAKA!!!
I like this hybrid style.
VastaKustutaVery interesting story so far. Now considering that author's note at the end...
VastaKustutaFirst of all, why do I like this story. Well, I for one like the combination of light grimdark/seriousness and shipping. I feel that those two mix together well when done right, and so far you seem to be doing so. It will take time, of course, to see for certain, but it seems to be going pretty steady so far.
On a similar note, the characters are also well done, and seem to have depth. Using OC's allows your characterization as an author to shine through, and those OC's being background ponies is also a nice touch. Once again, only time will tell if they will continue this trend and develop as good characters should.
The transitions from first to third person, in my opinion, are good. It allows the story to expand beyond one point of view, and you execute it well. By that, I mean you make it very clear when the point of view changes.
Now let's address the plot. Honestly, I do not have too much to say about this. The story has not really progressed far enough for me to see where it will go exactly. However, what has been done so far is pretty solid. All in all, this is a very worthwhile story, and one I honestly hope you keep up with.
More, dear celestia more!
VastaKustutaThis is such a great fanfic but there is so much to be found out, this could become a long runner (nor as long as fallout equestria mind you)
Definitely a 5 star
Love the story very nicely written but I do have a question. How are zombies light grimdark? Lol I find that funny. Or maybe it's just a lack of sleep.
VastaKustuta6 stars definitely, love the story, continue plzzz
VastaKustutaThis is my favourite fanfic, thank you for writing
VastaKustutaone of my top favs
VastaKustutait just sucks that i read so fast...
It lives!!! I am so happy this updated! lol
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