Story Updates October 22nd

I don't know if submitting story updates on new episode day is the best idea ever, but apparently you all decided to do it!  Have a larger than average update post.

As always, send broken stuff to [email protected]

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Story: Progress (Update Chapter 22!) 

6 Star

[Normal] Entire post revamped for simplicity

Author: Andrew Joshua Talon

Description: A thousand years is quite the generation gap, so Princess Luna decides she has to get with the times. However, this isn't quite as easy as she thinks it will be...

Progress

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Story: Death Note: Equestria (Update Part 7!) 

4 Star

[Grimdark] [Crossover]

(Comments contain spoilers)

Author: Nine

Description: Equestria is growing, and magical savant Twilight Sparkle is disgusted by the crime and corruption this change has brought. Her life is changed forever when she discovers the Death Note, a notebook with inexplicable and deadly powers. She uses this book to pass judgement on those she deems unworthy of life, aiming to create a perfect world free of crime. But when the two Princesses put their best pony on the case, a mysterious detective known only as “L”, a psychological game of cat and mouse erupts between the two.

Death Note: Equestria

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Story: Ponies make War (Update Part 3!) 

4 Star

[Adventure][Grimdark] We sure do get a lot of grimdark lately. It's surprising too, most of the pre-readers dislike it!

Author: AestheticB

Description: In a single night, the royal pony sisters are overthrown by an evil they believed they had long since defeated. The new royal family is as cruel as they are powerful, and under their reign ponykind suffers. But how can ponykind rise against the gods themselves?
It is up to the Elements of Harmony, under the leadership of Princess Luna, to restore order. First, however, they must face the most dangerous and terrifying opponent they have ever known: their onetime leader and now bitter rival, Twilight Sparkle. Facing impossible odds, the remaining Elements cannot lose hope, for this war calls for more than soldiers, but friends...

Ponies make War 

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Story: To Fix You (Update Part 5!) 

4 Star

[Sad][Dark][Shipping]

Author: BronyNeumo

Description: Sometimes, when you've lost so much, when everything you do seems to come out wrong, and when you don't feel like anything but a failure, it can seem like there is no other option but to give up.

But when one pony feels so lost, so inconsolable, so forlorn, that she makes a life-changing decision that almost leaves her shattered forever, it is up to her friends to bring her back.

When you lose something that you can't replace, when you love someone but it goes to waste, and when the tears come streaming down your face, is there anyone who you can turn to...

To Fix You

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Story: The First Light of Dawn (Update Part 8!) 

5 Star

[Adventure]

Author: Cold in Gardez

Description: It is the longest day of the year, and something has gone wrong. Canterlot is in ruins, Celestia is an out-of-control god flying west, and it's up to Twilight Sparkle and her friends to save Equestria. But with the Great and Powerful Trixie playing a reckless wild card, do the girls have what it takes to set things right.

The First Light of Dawn

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Story: Natural Order (Update Part 5!) 

5 Star

[Sad][Normal]

Author: GreatSnapper

Description: Things between Celestia and Luna are getting worse than ever, with both Princesses unable to reconcile their guilt over the events surrounding Luna's banishment. With the leadership of Equestria fraying, outside forces long forgotten by the subjects of the sun and moon take the opportunity to settle an old score.

Natural Order

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Story: These City Walls (Update Part 3!) 

4 Star

[Normal] [Sad] [Slightly Dark]

Author: KitsuneRisu

Description: A strange series of occurances are plaguing the fine city of Canterlot, as one by one, a pony of vengeance strikes seemingly random ponies down in their prime. As the locals try to contain the situation, they find that it soon slips out of their hooves as they discover that this one simple pony might not be as simple as was originally thought. Once Twilight Sparkle and Princess Celestia gets involved, can everyone work together to bring down this threat that threathens to ruin the very core of Canterlot?

These City Walls

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Story: Upheaval: Breaking Point (Update Part 17!) 

4 Star

[Grimdark] [Adventure]

Author: Visiden Visidane

Description: A coincidence and a magical accident leads Twilight Sparkle to a grim world hidden by Equestria's peaceful existence.

Upheaval: The Breaking Point

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Story: Long Distance (Update Chapter 6!) 

5 Star

[Adventure]

Author: Ezn

Description: White Noise is the founder of Dragonfire Deliveries, a start-up enterprise that's sure to take Equestria by storm and revolutionize the way ponies talk to each other. But the problem is, he doesn't really know what he's doing. How does the fire dragons use to send messages actually work?

Long Distance

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Story: In Spades (Update Chapter 3) 

4 Star

[Adventure][Comedy] Finding the right image to go with a story can be very Trixie when the author doesn't give any suggestions.

Author: Coconutswallow

Description:Evil is plotting, Equestria is in peril, kidnappings abound, and unlikely ponies band together as intrigue is starting to spin its webs-- large, clingy webs that don't make themselves known until they are upon you.

In Spades

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Story: A New Harmony (Update Chapter 2!) 

3 Star

[Sad] [Dark] [Comedy]

Author: Pascoite

Description: Twilight Sparkle has defeated Discord, but she lacked the discipline to do a proper job of it. He's ready for a rematch, but he's recruited three ponies to be his unwitting minions, and nopony will know he's behind it until it's too late. Everypony is in for some serious mind games.

A New Harmony

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Story: Shadows of the Sun (Update Part 8!) 

4 Star

[Grimdark][Sad] And Twilight ran. She ran so far away...

Author: theamberfox

Description: A long drought has created food shortages across all of Equestria. In an effort to restore the country to its former glory, Princess Celestia sends Twilight Sparkle to the northern country of Prance to seek aid. But when something goes wrong, it starts a tragic chain of events that seems to have no end. With a sinister plot for power developing in the shadows of the sun, the entire world will be changed forever.

Shadows of the Sun

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Story: Wooly Fetlocks and the Fashion Factory (Update Part 8!) 

5 Star

[Normal] [Crossover] [Comedy] [Shipping]

Author: Pen Pal

Description: 

Wooly Fetlocks, the legendary fashion designer, has finally returned from his mysterious sabbatical. His wondrous 

    and beautiful fashions flow to the far reaches of Equestria once more. Of particular interest are his affordable 

    designer socks, of which five packages contain golden tickets which will allow the bearer entry to the 

    hidden world of Fetlocks' factory. Luna is deeply enamored with Fetlocks' socks, and actively seeks a ticket.

    Will Luna acquire a golden ticket? Will she win Fetlocks' secret prize? What mysteries await inside of Fetlocks' Factory?

Would you mind altering this? If so, thank you. If not, I understand.

Wooly Fetlocks and the Fashion Factory

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