• Story: An Entwining of Hearts


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    Author: Phil the Time Wizard
    Description: The two of them had never been entirely sure how to feel about one another. Then one day, after being suddenly thrown together, everything starts to finally falls into place.

    An Entwining of Hearts

    Additional Tags: RariDash, cute, romantic, one shot

    27 comments:

    1. more RariDash?

      wtf...

      not that i'm complaining, but jeez....

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    2. RariDash has suddenly become fairly popular, hasn't it? Ah well.
      -adds to "to read list'-

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    3. This paring was really rare and now we get 3 in the same week. It's...nice. :D

      -reads fic-

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    4. Did what Party Favors did-

      Im getting too much reading material that a year ago, i thought it would be DOWNRIGHT crazy to read so much... XP

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    5. Rarity shipping so so rare. It's like, every fanfic about her is a... rarity...

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    6. This was cliched as heck. And yet I loved it anyway.

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    7. Is it just me or is Rarity/Dash becoming popular all the sudden?

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    8. More lesbian ponies? Hmmm, I think I'll pass.

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    9. Jeeeez. A third RariDash fic gets on here before I can even write mine. I'm gonna feel like a bandwagoner by the time I get around to writing it. XD

      @Calnos
      I think it's because RariDash was one of two pairings that had never been done before on the shipping chart. An ApplePie story being uploaded brought attention to the shipping chart again. That's where I got my inspiration, at least.

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    10. Not a bad read at all. However, I've also noticed the influx of RariDash fics as of late. Let's not oversaturate the blog too quickly now guys, allright? *yes, this means you too Scy. Sorry. :P*

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    11. Times like these make me wish there were more prominent male characters on the show, just so the abundance of lesbian shipping wasn't so great. I mean, most of it (the ones on here, at least) are well-made, but it's just a little... uncomfortable.

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    12. "third Rarishy this week" Where the hell have I been? What are the other two called? Where are they? I MUST READ!!!

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    13. Of the three RariDash fics recently put up, I think Any Port In A Storm is the best one.

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    14. I read this, and enjoyed it. It was largely well-written but one problem I found in the last paragraph (slight spoiler if you can put two and two together):

      'How would her and Rarity tell the others?' is not quite grammatically correct. It should quite simply be 'How would she and Rarity tell the others?' or 'How would they tell the others?'

      Otherwise, it's fine. Well done, and I'm waiting for the next part.

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    15. RariDash. RariDash EVERYWHERE. I think the more I read of it the less I think it works well as a ship. It's strange--Dash's character seems to work well with any other main character BUT Rarity. It doesn't really seem like there's any romantic chemistry between them whatsoever. All the RariDash fics I've read have each felt VERY forced, which is the last thing a good ship fic wants.

      I don't think this one was an exception, either. In fact, if anything, the author provided pretty good reasons why the two don't have any chemistry at all--by detailing their friendships with everyone else in the mane six, they really show just how little the two have interacted in the actual series. In a situation where there's little source material to pull from, chemistry has to be completely artificial. Again, shipping has to really feel natural. This is why pairings like AppleDash and RariJack work--authors have a lot more character interaction to build off of.

      I have yet to have a RariDash fic blow me away. This was well written, I suppose, but the premise felt cliche and the shipping really forced. I hope this sudden surge in the pairing will produce something 6-star worthy.

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    16. Hmph, cmon shipping fans make yourselves known!!! We are being seen as less. Fight the power!!!

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    17. Ah jeeze. I can't read this until I finish with all my FlutterDash!! Otherwise my poor mind will simply explode.

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    18. not a bad story, the shipping was strait up forced. no lead in, no build up, just strait up, oh btw, i love you. how do you feel today?
      gave it a three, as there was nothing to make me want to close the window, but the story just didnt flow for me. sorry :(

      I've been tossing ideas around since the first raridash fic I saw on EQD. Nothing seams to work. Eventually resorted to extensive character building to give them a reason, or make it seam more natural but you would have to write up, edit, and put out something before the next episode comes out as cannon can rip apart a story based on a lot of speculation and fan made background. Since i'm pretty lazy like my hero Dashie, I dont see that story getting written by me. I do have hope that somebrony will though ^^

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    19. Things going against RariDash: Rarity is a busy working girl and easily four year older than Rainbow Dash.

      Things going for RariDash: Rarity probably holds a fondness for Rainbow on some level for saving her life. Rarity probably also admires Rainbow's striking color and attitude.

      I like RariDash ships. It's a hard sell but rather cute.

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    20. getReadList("FiM")->insert(getReadList("FiM")->begin(), this);

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    21. I really enjoyed this! I don't see how it didn't get a higher rating...

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