The script needs a proofreader. I thought that the author didn't have a fluent grasp of English at first; he's listed as hailing from the USA, though, so it seems more likely that he just needs an editor with knowledge about the art of grammar.
I don't think Big Mac went missing, he just got bored and stopped wanting to see Fluttershy. Instead he wants to see other ponies, which is why the other pegasus pony walked past her. But I could be wrong.
I was interested in this, but then I got to page 7. Then I read on the first page comment it is inspired by Cupcakes. FlutterMac may be my favorite straight shiping but screw this noise. I have read enough GrimDark Fluttershy stuff to stay clear of this.
Was not expecting that. Art style was cool but. You really should have put grim/dark on that post. But now I kinda like grim/dark . . . Not sure if want.
I feel a little bad about saying this because the author clearly isn't a native English speaker but this is seriously borderline unreadable. Also I'm not feeling the grimdark angle.
The art feels a little on the rough side, too, but it's stylized enough that it works, I think.
Those backgrounds are awesome. I especially liked the house in part 4.
Pro tip: When picking translators don't choose the guy who's name was decided after he slammed his face on the keyboard and called it a day. djfwhw? Seriously?
For people who are slower on the uptake (like me... I plead mood whiplash myself), after reading the comments over there it suggests that this will be an attempt to show a scary side to Fluttershy... The idea seeming to be to put a dark spin on her "You're going to LOVE ME!" rant after she gets jilted. That's not Pinkie in page seven, but a dark version of herself.
So the "Cupcakes" mention is certainly worrying.
Now, I have nothing to do with the comic and couldn't tell you how far it may go or if it might turn around and have a happy ending... but that does seem to be the theme.
@rpgamer987 A story-focused comic is by definition fanfiction, just in the form of sequential art rather than prose. For many people, the former is acceptable while the latter is not.
Yeah, nice going Big Mac. You don't even think to tell your girlfriend that you want to move on, let alone put her down gently.
Oh and nice upgrade there; from one of your sister's best friends (known to be very kind and extremely sensitive) who happens to also be an ex-super model to a random OC.
Kinda weird seeing AJ lie like that to cover up her brother's infidelity. Isn't she supposed to be the honest one?
Poor Fluttershy. I can see where this is going; she either kidnaps Big Mac and keeps him locked up in her home forever, or she does something psychotically creepy with him. Or she murders that OC thing.
Wow, thats... interesting. I also didn't expect it to turn so dark. It started out so cute and happy... then it started getting really odd and creepy. I'd like to see how this ends.
No! Big Mac! You are supposed to have integrity and honesty. :( Shameful! A caveat, I don't think that Big Mac would be so rude - at least I would hope not.
Fluttershy... I'm sure there are many others who will appreciate you for who you are.
Very intriguing, I look forward in anticipation. :)
hmm... Let's think about this. Fluttershy admits that her animals are sometimes too much for one pony. Big Macintosh tells Fluttershy about his ambition to have grape farm, but Granny has objections. A pony similar to Berry Punch shows up to have a meeting with Big Macintosh.
Conclusion? I think Big Mac is speaking with this pony about perhaps investing in a new farm: a farm to grow perhaps cherries (by the looks of the cutie mark) with enough space for Fluttershy's animals.
I love kkt937 and his style (as for the writing, I'm pretty sure he's not a native English speaker) but why does this have to be grimdark?!! The beginning is sooooo cute, Fluttermac is like everything I love :(
kekekeke am I the only one that thinks its going to be like rarirties new dress in that Big Mac doesn't want to kill fluttershy because he loves her but doesn't want her to know what he does in his private time that oc pony is likely dead. kekekekeke Or big mac is going to turn her into a dress or fluttershy is going to turn mac into a dress thats how I see this ending...
I'm going to say that Fluttershy is going to kill and make a dress out of the skin of some other lady pony to make Big Mac think she is beautiful again...
I don't really enjoy f/m shipping. I can deal with shipping between spike an rarity or something, but why Fluttershy and Macintosh? Seriously, I don't even think they meet once throughout both of the seasons we've been given so far. With other shipping I can read because it actually connects with the logic of the Series, but m/f shipping is a huge stretch and doesn't really fit in. However, I will read it and I must say the plot developed really well for just seven comic strips. Well done!
I liked the first 6. The 7 was kinda dark, but as long as the entire comic doesn't head in a grim dark direction, I can see this being a cool, kinda internal conflict with fluttershy. It'd be her low self esteem or something.
He read the fanpic "cupcake" & he wanted to write some story like it. so, he wrote the story name "The most wonderful dress" and I made it in to comics! wish you like this P:"
@Pinkie Pie Oh Pinkie Pie, you're so random. Although I'm guessing you mean the pony that passed by Fluttershy since her cutie mark is cherries. But, she's pink, not blue..
I agree with the others though, you need some proofreading skillz.
Since the title is "The Most Glorious Dress," I'm hopeful that this will work out well in the end...
And FINALLY!! Mare/Stallion!! I have quickly gotten tired of the mare/mare shipping, this feels more... normal. Haters gonna hate me for that comment, but what can you do? I live in a free country... :-)
Found the problem! KKT937 doesn't really exist any more. He moved everything to his LenToTo account. Copy paste into your browser --------> http://lentoto.deviantart.com/
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That picture is scary....
ReplyDeleteThat was.... kinda dark. @.@
ReplyDeleteUmm... What? Just... wow. First off, good drawing style. Second off, DAT PART 7!!! MY GOD! ;_;
ReplyDeleteOh, and just to be a troll: FIRST!
Oh dear god.
ReplyDeletePut a [Grimdark] tag on that mofo'
After reading the authors comments for the first one, I am scared to see how this turns out.
ReplyDeleteI knew the m/f was too good to be true...
ReplyDeleteI've been up to date with this since Page 1, Agreed with Inconspicularity, put a Dark at least in front of it.
ReplyDeleteWant to know what happens next curse it!
Well.
ReplyDeleteI'm intrigued.
Well .. that was very cute .. bud .. also so .. sad ;(
ReplyDeleteM/F shipping!? Inconceivable!
ReplyDeleteI've seen enough creepy image previews to know where this is going.
ReplyDeleteWow, wasn't expecting it to get so.....dark
ReplyDeleteVwhat a Twist!
Now every time a pony has like a darkside I can't help imagining it as his discord-chaos side
ReplyDelete@Farnor
ReplyDeleteI always find that their chaos side was Happier compared to their, foreboding, creepy, potential yandere, darkside.
Is that Pinkamena at the end but...grey?
ReplyDeleteThe script needs a proofreader. I thought that the author didn't have a fluent grasp of English at first; he's listed as hailing from the USA, though, so it seems more likely that he just needs an editor with knowledge about the art of grammar.
ReplyDeleteOh Fluttershy! :(
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the art, Part 7 was a little dark for my tastes but i do want to know what happens now.
ReplyDeleteTHIS IS AWESOME! Keep drawing comics! Keep-Drawing-Comics-Guy!
ReplyDeleteIt was written by a "Cupcakes" fan.....well this should be intriguing.
ReplyDeleteThat's... certainly something.
ReplyDelete@Overlong Analysis Cobalt that or the artist doesn't know how to setup a deviantART account.
ReplyDeleteNot all users are tech savvy Internet buffs.
I think I missed something.
ReplyDeleteAt what part did big mac go missing/run away or whatever?
What are the tags to this? Shipping and what else?
ReplyDeleteJesus Christ how horrifying.
ReplyDelete"They spent a lot of time together and they had the most beautiful love all over the equestria"
ReplyDeleteWhoa, hey... get a room you two, or at least towel it off afterwards. Other ponies have to use that equestria.
Just kiddin'. No idea where this thing is going, but I do enjoy my comics.
"I recently played Limbo..."
ReplyDeleteWell that figures. Epic comic!
I don't think Big Mac went missing, he just got bored and stopped wanting to see Fluttershy. Instead he wants to see other ponies, which is why the other pegasus pony walked past her. But I could be wrong.
ReplyDeleteI was interested in this, but then I got to page 7. Then I read on the first page comment it is inspired by Cupcakes. FlutterMac may be my favorite straight shiping but screw this noise. I have read enough GrimDark Fluttershy stuff to stay clear of this.
ReplyDeleteWas not expecting that. Art style was cool but.
ReplyDeleteYou really should have put grim/dark on that post. But now I kinda like grim/dark . . .
Not sure if want.
The comic started off so cute and innocent too. But I can see where this is going. -shutters-
ReplyDeleteHmm, if this IS being inspired by cupcakes, I sure hope this "Glorious dress" doesn't come out to be red with Mac's cutie marks on it o.O
ReplyDeleteSaddening. And creepy
ReplyDeleteWhy would someone do this to Fluttershy? :(
ReplyDeleteFirst six pages: d'aww
ReplyDeletePage seven: ok...wait, what... O_O
First six pages: d'aww
ReplyDeletePage seven: ok...wait, what... O_O
I feel a little bad about saying this because the author clearly isn't a native English speaker but this is seriously borderline unreadable. Also I'm not feeling the grimdark angle.
ReplyDeleteThe art feels a little on the rough side, too, but it's stylized enough that it works, I think.
I've seen Fluttermac before, but why? Why would you do this?
ReplyDeleteThose backgrounds are awesome. I especially liked the house in part 4.
ReplyDeletePro tip: When picking translators don't choose the guy who's name was decided after he slammed his face on the keyboard and called it a day. djfwhw? Seriously?
Was the twist absolutly necessary? I mean, it feels rather forced.
ReplyDeleteFor people who are slower on the uptake (like me... I plead mood whiplash myself), after reading the comments over there it suggests that this will be an attempt to show a scary side to Fluttershy... The idea seeming to be to put a dark spin on her "You're going to LOVE ME!" rant after she gets jilted. That's not Pinkie in page seven, but a dark version of herself.
ReplyDeleteSo the "Cupcakes" mention is certainly worrying.
Now, I have nothing to do with the comic and couldn't tell you how far it may go or if it might turn around and have a happy ending... but that does seem to be the theme.
@Wierdplatformer
ReplyDeleteObviously "more like Cupcakes=better."
Wait, no, that's the opposite of a thing that is true.
For Not-Fanfiction, it does feel a bit fanfictiony.
ReplyDelete@Harwick
ReplyDeletePretty much what I was guessing. I know these little ponies aren't perfect, but I know they aren't hiding a psychotic side, either. Pass.
@rpgamer987
ReplyDeleteA story-focused comic is by definition fanfiction, just in the form of sequential art rather than prose. For many people, the former is acceptable while the latter is not.
at first i was like "shipping? meh..."
ReplyDeletebut then, grimdark out of freaking nowhere.
imokwiththis.jpg
This is...... Depressing.
ReplyDeletePoor Fluttershy.
I don't see why Big Mac would be that much of a jerk.
Yay for BigMacxFluttershy. Yay
ReplyDeleteYeah, nice going Big Mac. You don't even think to tell your girlfriend that you want to move on, let alone put her down gently.
ReplyDeleteOh and nice upgrade there; from one of your sister's best friends (known to be very kind and extremely sensitive) who happens to also be an ex-super model to a random OC.
Kinda weird seeing AJ lie like that to cover up her brother's infidelity. Isn't she supposed to be the honest one?
Poor Fluttershy. I can see where this is going; she either kidnaps Big Mac and keeps him locked up in her home forever, or she does something psychotically creepy with him. Or she murders that OC thing.
Wow, thats... interesting. I also didn't expect it to turn so dark. It started out so cute and happy... then it started getting really odd and creepy. I'd like to see how this ends.
ReplyDeleteVery nice comic
ReplyDeleteM/F shipping? I thought it was fanonly forbidden...
ReplyDelete1-6:Very good relationship
ReplyDelete7:WTF, Big Mac is missing.
No! Big Mac! You are supposed to have integrity and honesty. :( Shameful!
ReplyDeleteA caveat, I don't think that Big Mac would be so rude - at least I would hope not.
Fluttershy... I'm sure there are many others who will appreciate you for who you are.
Very intriguing, I look forward in anticipation. :)
Damnit Big Mac!! Some boys just don't know how to love...
ReplyDeleteEwwwww heterosexual!
ReplyDeleteAlso, from the comments it sounds dark and sad. The art seems to be very nice though!
Hmmm.. This comic series interests me... I also don't like shipping.. Bravo..
ReplyDeleteI *really* like the art for some reason. I don't even know why, it's rough to no end, but it works very well.
ReplyDeleteI hate it how people keep saying that M/F ships are impossible and unrealistic.
ReplyDeleteI *really* like the art for some reason. I don't even know why, it's rough to no end, but it works very well.
ReplyDeleteAm I the only one who thinks it's obvious from the title that he's making her a dress?
ReplyDelete@TheWerePony
ReplyDeleteMost people are probably assuming she's going to turn him into a dress. Because Cupcakes.
I will never understand this fandom's strange obsession with that goddamn story.
Art is nice but the English is so bad...
ReplyDeleteI'm liking this rough-hewn art style.
ReplyDeleteI'm also expecting a twist for the twist.
y'all are looking at cupcakes, and I'm thinking y'all is oatmeal.
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ReplyDelete@A Pony Farce
ReplyDeleteMore likely Fluttershy's going to find whoever stole Big Mac and wear her like Buffalo Bill
YAY! Fluttermac! I love this! It's so cute and----
ReplyDeleteNo, wait. He can be doing this...
AAAAAAAHHHHH!!! WHY SO GRIMDARK SUDDENLY!?
Poor fluttershy. Her place is a mess now... It's so depressing ;-;
... I like how everyone assumes that Big Mac is cheating on Fluttershy, although there's no direct evidence of it.
ReplyDelete@TheWerePony: That's what I'm thinking... or at least hoping.
ReplyDeleteIf that is the case, then the pegasus with the cherry cutie mark is there so Big Mac can make sure the dress will fit.
But if this goes cupcake-shaped*... yeesh.
* Cupcake-shaped: Similar to pear-shaped, but worse/more gory.
Scaryshy is scary.
ReplyDeletehmm... Let's think about this. Fluttershy admits that her animals are sometimes too much for one pony. Big Macintosh tells Fluttershy about his ambition to have grape farm, but Granny has objections. A pony similar to Berry Punch shows up to have a meeting with Big Macintosh.
ReplyDeleteConclusion? I think Big Mac is speaking with this pony about perhaps investing in a new farm: a farm to grow perhaps cherries (by the looks of the cutie mark) with enough space for Fluttershy's animals.
I love kkt937 and his style (as for the writing, I'm pretty sure he's not a native English speaker) but why does this have to be grimdark?!! The beginning is sooooo cute, Fluttermac is like everything I love :(
ReplyDeletekekekeke am I the only one that thinks its going to be like rarirties new dress in that Big Mac doesn't want to kill fluttershy because he loves her but doesn't want her to know what he does in his private time that oc pony is likely dead. kekekekeke Or big mac is going to turn her into a dress or fluttershy is going to turn mac into a dress thats how I see this ending...
ReplyDelete@Select Few
ReplyDeleteThat would be the beginning of part six.
@SgtGarand
No, it'll be blue with cherries on it.
the last one is super creepy o.O
ReplyDeletepoor Fluttershy :(
I hope there will be a happy end, this one simply shouldn't end bad.
OH! fuuuu--
ReplyDeleteI'm going to say that Fluttershy is going to kill and make a dress out of the skin of some other lady pony to make Big Mac think she is beautiful again...
ReplyDeleteI said it. Were all thinking it.
I agree with yetti. This needs to have a good ending, because I'm being bombarded by sad thoughts and images over here.
ReplyDeleteI don't really enjoy f/m shipping. I can deal with shipping between spike an rarity or something, but why Fluttershy and Macintosh? Seriously, I don't even think they meet once throughout both of the seasons we've been given so far. With other shipping I can read because it actually connects with the logic of the Series, but m/f shipping is a huge stretch and doesn't really fit in. However, I will read it and I must say the plot developed really well for just seven comic strips. Well done!
ReplyDelete@Albert1357
ReplyDeleteWhat's wrong with M/F relationship? you're taking this a tad bit too seriously.
i want to read the part 8 ^_^
ReplyDeletei like it but this comic is a little out of the context of MLP
I liked the first 6. The 7 was kinda dark, but as long as the entire comic doesn't head in a grim dark direction, I can see this being a cool, kinda internal conflict with fluttershy. It'd be her low self esteem or something.
ReplyDeleteI must have missed something? What the hell is happening? Was she dreaming the entire thing? Is she obsessed with Big Mac? Is he cheating on her...?
ReplyDeleteGah, confused.
"Im Drawing comic with my internet friend
ReplyDeleteHe read the fanpic "cupcake" & he wanted to write some
story like it. so, he wrote the story name "The most wonderful dress" and I made it in to comics!
wish you like this P:"
I am concerned by this statement.
@Pinkie Pie
ReplyDeleteOh Pinkie Pie, you're so random. Although I'm guessing you mean the pony that passed by Fluttershy since her cutie mark is cherries. But, she's pink, not blue..
AWWWWWWW
ReplyDeleteBut the pictures kinda messed up.
I SWEAR I SAW NOTHING
ReplyDeleteNEGA-SHY OUT OF FREAKING NOWHERE
ReplyDeleteSo part 7, the fourth and fifth panels from the bottom......is that implied rape?
ReplyDeleteIs awaiting the 8th installment VERY impatiently.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the others though, you need some proofreading skillz.
Since the title is "The Most Glorious Dress," I'm hopeful that this will work out well in the end...
And FINALLY!! Mare/Stallion!! I have quickly gotten tired of the mare/mare shipping, this feels more... normal. Haters gonna hate me for that comment, but what can you do? I live in a free country... :-)
Broken link now..
ReplyDeleteThe link is dead... DA is saying the thing was deleted. I am sad!
ReplyDeleteFound the problem! KKT937 doesn't really exist any more. He moved everything to his LenToTo account. Copy paste into your browser --------> http://lentoto.deviantart.com/
ReplyDeleteffffuuuuuuuuuuu-
ReplyDeleteI'm here in feb. 2012 and they've deleted it!
Very dark, but I have a feeling that there's going to be a happy ending. Am I right? Am I? Am I?
ReplyDeleteNow I'm here in Nov. 2012, season 3 is coming out in 2 days, I'm searching for the comic again, still can't find it.
ReplyDelete