Author: Reginart-Renart
Description: Princess Celestia is the best teacher in all of Equestria. But teaching is an art and first attempts can be messy. More than a thousand years ago, Celestia's first student and her sister had embarked on a journey that would take them across the world. For the land has become restless. Foes from the West and South seek the demise of Equestria itself. What should have been a simple teacher-student relationship becomes the starting point of an adventure that would shake Equestria forever. There will be tears, there will be blood, but most of all, there will be courage.Lives of Ponies - Celestia: The Last Princess: Prologue
Lives of Ponies - Celestia: The Last Princess: Chapter 1
Additional Tags: Self-discovery, Slice-of-life, Strained friendships, Long, Origin,
9 comments:
Colonoscopfirst!
ReplyDeletei lost the game
ReplyDeleteDis gon' be good.
ReplyDeleteSo mentally how much of a wreck is Twilight after that conversation. Somewhat worse than Swarm of the Century? Cold Celestia, just cold.
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed the story, looking forward to more.
uhm, Celestia at the beginning seems ... out of character a bit. even if Twilight went somewhere she shouldn't have or done something she shouldn't have, i just can't see Celestia being that cold or distant.
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ReplyDeleteJust my perspective but I've felt that Celestia has had little enough screen time that it's possible she has a colder more distant side, heck it might explain why Twilight always flips out about everything being perfect for the princess. She might be an immortal goddess but as shown by Luna that doesn't preclude a pony from having emotions both positive and negative.
Someone needs to beta this thing. I'll offer my services if you'd like.
ReplyDeleteThe first chapter is very confusing. Solera and Serena are just so similar that you get confused on who is speaking and you're launched into a world where, I assume, Celestia and Luna aren't actually in charge and don't have the same names as they do now, and other people are in charge of the sun and moon. You need to give some sort of explanation for the state of things at the start of the chapter so the readers have a hoof to stand on when they go into this, otherwise, like it did with me, it just confuses them.
ReplyDeleteI like this story... I'd like to see more. Hope it updates!
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