• Story: Evil's Twilight (Update Complete!)

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    [Dark][Adventure]

    Author: Kuroi Tsubasa Tenshi
    Description: When unforeseen weather disrupts the Winter Wrap Up effort, Twilight is left to fend for herself. She stumbles upon a once in a lifetime experience, but everything has a price to pay.
    Evil's Twilight Part 1: Chills
    Evil's Twilight Part 2: Inklings
    Evil's Twilight Part 3: Revelations
    Evil's Twilight Part 4: Echoes
    Evil's Twilight Part 5: Convictions
    Evil's Twilight Final: Farewells (New!)

    Additional Tags: OCs Are Not Bad Mkay?
    Thursday, December 22, 2011 op
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    20 comments:

    1. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2011 at 7:07 PM

      This story has the best additional tags yet and I shall read it just for that reason.

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    2. LafterSeptember 10, 2011 at 7:08 PM

      I think I've read these tags before somewhere! XD Will read soon.

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    3. GypsySeptember 10, 2011 at 7:12 PM

      twilight sparkle is ebil

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    4. BasharoonskisSeptember 10, 2011 at 7:22 PM

      Mkay, I shall read.

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    5. KurbzSeptember 10, 2011 at 7:33 PM

      Really really good o.o needs a chapter 3 though :3

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    6. MasqueradeSeptember 10, 2011 at 7:43 PM

      Goddamnit, DA. Why the hell can't I read this?

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    7. Kuroi Tsubasa TenshiSeptember 10, 2011 at 8:24 PM

      @P. Pony Ponyson

      Huh, well I provided Google docs links too, but I guess they weren't posted. For anyone not wanting to deal with the DA warning:

      Chapter 1
      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KtjS78bITWYT_v_SO716XL2zpsbHINo0Dm09X_DPsHo/edit?hl=en_US

      Chapter 2
      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KN5TEJ7c2RXPaXzC9EGWG_l3DPLRG7ygZfsEeOnAJYo/edit?hl=en_US

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    8. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2011 at 8:36 PM

      Soooo Twilight Sparkle can sustain LittlePip-caliber battle damage and walk through gory war-zones without triggering a [Grimdark] tag? Dammit Seth, you're worse than the MPAA.

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    9. DrakengardeSeptember 10, 2011 at 9:12 PM

      In before argument over the tags.

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    10. The_OwlSeptember 11, 2011 at 4:40 AM

      I can't really focus on this story. It's not very interesting to me, I'm not sure why.

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    11. KixuSeptember 11, 2011 at 10:56 AM

      Very nice. Well written. I look forward to whatever comes next.

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    12. Admiral SparkleSeptember 21, 2011 at 3:11 AM

      @mycutiemarkisagun
      I'm going to learn how to code things for Blogger. When I do, I'm making a like button for comments, just so I can like yours.

      LittlePip-caliber battle damage... LAWL

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    13. richfilesOctober 12, 2011 at 12:48 AM

      Keep up with this story. An origin story for Nightmare Moon, and hopefully, a true defeat... That would be cool. I sure hope that that ray of hope in Twilight's friends can pull her free enough of the Nameless to let her element work.

      I do so hate to see canon ponies suffer. Heck, I even hate when fleshed out OCs suffer. Still, I like my endings happy, and that suffering does make the defeat of evil so much sweeter. I sure hope this ends well for everypony!

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    14. NalyNovember 22, 2011 at 12:14 PM

      Need links to Google docs versions; The DA links keep going me a "403: Forbidden" error/whatever :/ I've read chapters 1 and 2 (the chapters with google docs links) and the story is really interesting so far. :)

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    15. Kuroi Tsubasa TenshiNovember 24, 2011 at 1:07 PM

      @Naly

      Sure. Glad you're enjoying it.

      Chapter 3
      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JVNob27bqqrgIrwT_xpJf6vaKcCZ9nSVB-0nm7Ygh44/edit

      Chapter 4
      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vIKLQxQ8EeWtKAiILabN0OfKRgGW1FUfwRHL7L2jyeo/edit

      Chapter 5
      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PcI-dCiFp6SYTVCHPLM7hA6nFuxEGJ7ypJ7Ii7kQbok/edit

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    16. AnonymousDecember 22, 2011 at 7:22 PM

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c4w4pEgrD7A

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    17. AxanZenithDecember 23, 2011 at 8:45 AM

      Twilight's such a bad-ass. Great read.

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    18. Kuroi Tsubasa TenshiDecember 27, 2011 at 9:17 AM

      Just in case anyone's having issues with DA again:

      The real Chapter 4 because I'm dumb and posted an outdated version:
      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lAfvIWqHIYjqlkv1FU27ScmXA_J2i1HjHAmR3LwB6WQ/edit

      Final Chapter:
      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1opr2g5KCasMVKPuFEIjOJzFfGWsIZgGO2EheWCVgcJs/edit

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    19. metapsionicDecember 28, 2011 at 8:55 AM

      Loved it! What an adventure. Thanks for sharing!

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    20. Kuroi Tsubasa TenshiJuly 11, 2012 at 2:58 PM

      For anyone who prefers FIMFic and happens to wander by, I've got it up there too: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14061/Evil%27s-Twilight

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