[Dark][Adventure]
Author: Kuroi Tsubasa Tenshi
Description: When unforeseen weather disrupts the Winter Wrap Up effort, Twilight is left to fend for herself. She stumbles upon a once in a lifetime experience, but everything has a price to pay.Evil's Twilight Part 1: Chills
Evil's Twilight Part 2: Inklings
Evil's Twilight Part 3: Revelations
Evil's Twilight Part 4: Echoes
Evil's Twilight Part 5: Convictions
Evil's Twilight Final: Farewells (New!)
Additional Tags: OCs Are Not Bad Mkay?
20 comments:
This story has the best additional tags yet and I shall read it just for that reason.
ReplyDeleteI think I've read these tags before somewhere! XD Will read soon.
ReplyDeletetwilight sparkle is ebil
ReplyDeleteMkay, I shall read.
ReplyDeleteReally really good o.o needs a chapter 3 though :3
ReplyDeleteGoddamnit, DA. Why the hell can't I read this?
ReplyDelete@P. Pony Ponyson
ReplyDeleteHuh, well I provided Google docs links too, but I guess they weren't posted. For anyone not wanting to deal with the DA warning:
Chapter 1
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KtjS78bITWYT_v_SO716XL2zpsbHINo0Dm09X_DPsHo/edit?hl=en_US
Chapter 2
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KN5TEJ7c2RXPaXzC9EGWG_l3DPLRG7ygZfsEeOnAJYo/edit?hl=en_US
Soooo Twilight Sparkle can sustain LittlePip-caliber battle damage and walk through gory war-zones without triggering a [Grimdark] tag? Dammit Seth, you're worse than the MPAA.
ReplyDeleteIn before argument over the tags.
ReplyDeleteI can't really focus on this story. It's not very interesting to me, I'm not sure why.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Well written. I look forward to whatever comes next.
ReplyDelete@mycutiemarkisagun
ReplyDeleteI'm going to learn how to code things for Blogger. When I do, I'm making a like button for comments, just so I can like yours.
LittlePip-caliber battle damage... LAWL
Keep up with this story. An origin story for Nightmare Moon, and hopefully, a true defeat... That would be cool. I sure hope that that ray of hope in Twilight's friends can pull her free enough of the Nameless to let her element work.
ReplyDeleteI do so hate to see canon ponies suffer. Heck, I even hate when fleshed out OCs suffer. Still, I like my endings happy, and that suffering does make the defeat of evil so much sweeter. I sure hope this ends well for everypony!
Need links to Google docs versions; The DA links keep going me a "403: Forbidden" error/whatever :/ I've read chapters 1 and 2 (the chapters with google docs links) and the story is really interesting so far. :)
ReplyDelete@Naly
ReplyDeleteSure. Glad you're enjoying it.
Chapter 3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JVNob27bqqrgIrwT_xpJf6vaKcCZ9nSVB-0nm7Ygh44/edit
Chapter 4
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vIKLQxQ8EeWtKAiILabN0OfKRgGW1FUfwRHL7L2jyeo/edit
Chapter 5
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PcI-dCiFp6SYTVCHPLM7hA6nFuxEGJ7ypJ7Ii7kQbok/edit
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c4w4pEgrD7A
ReplyDeleteTwilight's such a bad-ass. Great read.
ReplyDeleteJust in case anyone's having issues with DA again:
ReplyDeleteThe real Chapter 4 because I'm dumb and posted an outdated version:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lAfvIWqHIYjqlkv1FU27ScmXA_J2i1HjHAmR3LwB6WQ/edit
Final Chapter:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1opr2g5KCasMVKPuFEIjOJzFfGWsIZgGO2EheWCVgcJs/edit
Loved it! What an adventure. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteFor anyone who prefers FIMFic and happens to wander by, I've got it up there too: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14061/Evil%27s-Twilight
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