• Story: Cloudsdale Chronicles


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    Author: Roboshi
    Description: The Day of the “Best Young Fliers” competition was very special to Rainbow Dash. But she was not the only pony to discover something about herself that day. This is the tale of 3 other ponies and their own self discovery.

    Cloudsdale Chronicles

    Additional Tags:
    Cloudsdale, Rainboom, Background ponies, collection, destiny

    20 kommentaari:

    1. Looks interesting. Will give this a read.

      VastaKustuta
    2. I am shocked that Roboshi is capable of more then just faving pics on ponibooru...

      VastaKustuta
    3. @Pegasi

      Sounds like you haven't read his story where Pinkie gets Twilight's horn and magic.

      VastaKustuta
    4. I really liked the Scootaloo one, not all that into the other two.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Hmmmmmm.....a Cupcakes reference and Ditzy deciding to stay in the one timeframe. Interesting but not as interesting as Scootaloo deciding which pony she wanted to be most like. (That being said, I'm waiting for "Pretty in Pink" to arrive; for those of you not in the know, it's sort of the anti-Cupcakes.)

      VastaKustuta
    6. Also really liked the scootaloo one but did not like the first two too much, they are well written and I can't quite place WHY I disliked them but I did. I wasn't very fond of the cupcakesesque reference either but thats not why I disliked it.

      Probably just the portrayal of characters not fitting what I like so im not going to rate it down as it is well written and that would be unfair of me.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta
    8. So, what, Ditzy is Scootaloo's mother in this timeline? Makes sense.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Shouldn't this have a crossover tag?

      VastaKustuta
    10. @DreadedCandiru2

      Nope the two stories are unrelated, Scootaloo's mother is a background pony you can look out for.

      Ditzy's foal is gonna be dinky. and even a dr who-esk explanation for why she's a unicorn.

      VastaKustuta
    11. @DreadedCandiru2

      You mean this?

      http://www.fimfiction.net/story/455/Pretty-in-Pink

      VastaKustuta
    12. When Scootaloo is recording all the performances, she writes down what number 3 did twice.

      VastaKustuta
    13. ^adding on to that, why doesn't Scootaloo know who Rainbow Dash is? Or Rarity? Or Pinkie Pie?

      VastaKustuta
    14. @Dubs Rewatcher

      Scootaloo hadn't met rarity OR Dash by this point the only ones she could have met were at the cutsiera party.

      And Pinkie spent most of it in the back baking for that party.

      By this point scoots hadn't met all the mane 6 yet.

      VastaKustuta
    15. Pretty cute, but why would you reference cupcakes?

      VastaKustuta
    16. @Wierdplatformer

      I honesty referenced cupcakes as I wanted to write my own little antidote to it, calling cupcakes an alternate future averted by Doctor whoof and pinkie herself.

      I think Cupcakes is just something you need to get used to or deal with in your own way. I think I found mine.

      VastaKustuta
    17. Ha. Super strong butterflies.

      These were pretty good stories, though. I approve.

      VastaKustuta
    18. Number 3 changed gender partway through his/her act.

      VastaKustuta