[Shipping]
Author: Squeak
Description: Caramel can't seem to do anything right. When he finds he has a crush on a certain purple unicorn, this proves doubly true!Caramel's Light (Update Part 10!)
Additional Tags: Caramel Grampa Jonagold Toffee Apple
155 comments:
I haven't seen this ship before, congrats on being different.
ReplyDeletemuahahaha >:D
ReplyDeleteaw >:'
ReplyDeleteAww, poor Caramel is awkward!
ReplyDeleteStraight shipping? Now that's...uncommon
ReplyDelete<.< CaramelSparkle?
ReplyDeleteI'm divided on reading this, I normally avoid straight ships like the fucking plague.
What the heck is in there(wants to be safe) it's DR. OCTOGONAPUS! bLAGH!!! (but seriously)
ReplyDeleteWhat is going on in that pic? Why is there a star over Caramel's junk? Oh shit I just remembered what "Dropping" refers to in equines.
ReplyDeleteWhat IS in there?
ReplyDeletethings like in the image are the reason i avoid straight ships. <.<
ReplyDeleteHmmm... Should I read this?
ReplyDeleteOh God...
ReplyDeleteStupid sexy Flanders!
And it's obviously letters in that bag, guys. Get your minds out of the gutter.
ReplyDeleteWhat else could it possibly be!?
I've read this on FiMFiction. It's pretty well written. I highly recommend it.
ReplyDelete@Whitbane
ReplyDeleteI'm trying to get my mind out of the gutter. >=(
This show rescued me from becoming even more of a sick fuck than I already was...
@Whitbane(pops out of the sink) What gutters? I'm in the pipes! (yes I know what you mean)
ReplyDeleteI find it strange how...strange...everyone seems to find straight shipping. I mean...come now everypony, it makes sense does it not? Not EVERY filly in the show can be a Lesbian...that's Rainbow Dash's gig.
ReplyDelete@M1Abrams
ReplyDeleteFrom what I have seen, Twilight is as big of a lesbian as Rainbow Dash.
@M1Abrams
ReplyDeleteI operate under the thought that ponies lack genitals.
*shudders at thought*
I hate shipping anyway, but I just had to comment... Is caramel even a canon character? He seems to pop up in tons of shipping fics, but I've never seen him anywhere else.
ReplyDelete@M1AbramsI concur. Oh and don't forget Bon Bon and Lyra, they seem to be shipped quite a lot.
ReplyDeleteHeterosexual Caramel?
ReplyDeleteIs that even allowed?
Leave it to the internet to destroy the purest show currently in existence.
ReplyDeleteWe have to try harder!
@Whitbane
ReplyDeleteWe 'destroyed' this show long before the second episode was out.
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ReplyDelete-reads odd anti straight ship comments-
ReplyDelete-wonders about reaction to straight Rainbow in plotted fanfic-
@Party Favors
ReplyDeleteyou're working on a straight Dash ship fic?
I avoid straight fics for irrational fear of straight sauciness. <.<
Yeah, that's soul-crushingly apparent. Still, you block out the crap and focus on the awesome.
ReplyDeleteOr stare at your hands and wonder about the monster you are...
Not sure if I should read this. I usually avoid shipping like The Plague.
Don't need ponies portrayed in that perspective.
@bronydash I'm surprised you didn't know that, I've seen you frequenting the site and figured you had watched all of the episodes by now.
ReplyDelete@Party Favors Rabble rabble rabble, Dash is gay rabble rabble! jk I think Dash can be shipped with anypony and it'll work.
@bronydash
ReplyDeleteHe's mentioned by sight and name in Winter Wrap Up, actually :P
"Uh, AJ?"
"Oh good gravy, Caramel lost the grass seeds again, didn't he?"
"Eeyup"
@DPV111
ReplyDeleteIts a torn bag.
Get your mind out of the gutter
oh wait, that's not caramel that's Braeburn, I always get those names confused, my bad, but yeah, winter wrap up
ReplyDeleteHetero shipping makes baby Jesus cry.
ReplyDeleteDarn it.
ReplyDeleteAlright I have to admit... when I saw "Caramel" and "shipping" I had my hopes up for some CaraMac.
Before i read this: Caramel and twilight? watever
ReplyDeleteAfter i read this: DDDAAAWWWWWW i love it!
I likes me some Twilight. Caramel's just the brand new icing on the cake. I'm thoroughly interested considering I can finally read one about Caramel. (Not that I'm homophobic, just not my preferred reading material.) I find it funny that Twilight's not the socially awkward one in this story. At least in the first chapter. I'll get to the other ones later.
ReplyDeleteMeh, I'm cool with all shipping, any which way. It's my headcannon that Equestrians are predominantly bisexual anyway. If Friendship is magic then Love is Divine and love must be allowed to exist without the fetters of things like gender and sexual orientation.
ReplyDeleteI just don't like Caramel.
...I used to think that being a fan of this show had nothing to do with being homosexual, but after seeing the comments towards this, I'm starting to have my doubts...
ReplyDeleteI can only hope most of those anti-straight comments are just people being facetious.
what... what is happening in that picture? can't quite make it out, and I have one foot in the gutter.
ReplyDeleteThis looks interesting. I like the idea of twilight not being socially awkward in terms of relationships (honestly, other than in look before you sleep, she isn't awkward at all), as I imagine she wouldn't take them as seriously and would just be glib about it. onward to not sleeping tonight!
It wasn't bad, but there was no explanation for why Twilight likes Caramel. That's about Trevor's only complaint: no back-story/reason that Twilight likes Caramel.
ReplyDelete~ magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
@ShadowsPony
ReplyDeleteI find it to be odd because i've read over 80 lesbian ship fics.
Ummmmmm... it seemed sorta directionless (pun intended) and lacking detail. It's ok I guess.
ReplyDeleteAnd don't think I hate straight fics, they are just rare, some are pretty good (though most I've read where 2nd person...)
I liked this story. The ending had a nice level of dawwwwwww to it. Well done.
ReplyDelete@wackyteen
ReplyDeleteLike I said, I figured most of it was just like: "What? Straight ponies?!? This is unheard of! lol."
It's just a little... I dunno, unsettling, maybe? Honestly, I just avoid shipping most of the time.
I think the problem isn't that ppl are against straight relationships in the show. The few I have read are easily as adorable as the F/F ones. "Getting Lucky", "Progress".
ReplyDeleteThere just aren't enough likable male characters in the show. For me it's just that I don't feel any of these guys are "worthy" of the Mane gals.
Is there a bit of idealism there? Jealousy? Overprotectiveness? Maybe? Doesnt' change anything.
@ShadowsPony
ReplyDeleteWhen 90% of the characters (major, minor, background, etc) are female, it tends to lead to a noticeable lack of ships involving male ponies. As such, upon seeing an M/F pairing, or rarer still, an M/M pairing (that isn't CaraMac), it's a notable deviation.
Long story short, it's folks joking about how few straight ships there actually are.
@DPV111
ReplyDeleteI agree, if there were more developed male characters maybe I would read straight ships but there just aren't.
"For me it's just that I don't feel any of these guys are "worthy" of the Mane gals.
Is there a bit of idealism there? Jealousy? Overprotectiveness?"
I agree with ALL of this. Hit it right on the spot, lol.
Well, I guess I feel better knowing it is mostly just people being facetious. (Honestly, I shoulda deduced that in the first place. Maybe I should stop browsing Equestria Daily and go to bed.)
ReplyDeleteHeh, that was pretty cute. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThis story is cute and innocent, you assholes flaming about shipping and sexual content before you read it are pissing me off. Bravo author! keep up the good work, This story is incredibly cute and innocent and I enjoy reading it despite the rubbish critics.
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ReplyDeletePIC ORIGIN RIGHT HERE PEOPLE!!!
ReplyDeletehttp://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/18023
http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/18023
http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/18023
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D'awwwww.
ReplyDeleteIt was a pretty good read. (and I lol'd at every situation. Even I am not that hopelessly awkward)
@Eclipse
ReplyDeleteDawwwww. now it makes sense and is so cute.
cute fic in general really. that ending was just adorable. Poor caramel... but he got the girl so yaaay~
I really hope season two gives a bit of screen time to more backgrounds. the fandom is already so attached. we could use more Vinyl Scratch and Octavia fan made favorites
aww, you've melted my heart like mercury in the palm
ReplyDeletethank you
Very well written on all accounts, definitely a nice, innocent story that fits very comfortably in the FiM world.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely worth a 5/5 from me, good job.
@DPV111
ReplyDeleteWhat?! No! Gah! His saddlebag is torn (the star looking bit) and the bouquet inside fell out behind him.
http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/18023
Geez.
It's a bit short, and there are a few little grammatical mistakes, but other than that, the writing is solid. The characterization is good too. Awkward Caramel is adorable, and the ending made me D'awwww so hard my face is still stuck in a stupid grin.
ReplyDeleteUgh, I hate Carmel, little bastards been portrayed as so much I an going to avoid him like another commented said the giving plague
ReplyDeleteA part or two of the story seemed rushed, or out of left field. And I'd have liked to see some reasons why Twilight took a liking for that particular pony.
ReplyDeleteNevertheless, it was a sweet store with a cute couple. Nice to see some sympathetic pony work things out in the end.
This was incredibly well done. But I hate to see it ending on only chapter 4. The author could of gone so much further with this...
ReplyDeleteHetero shipping is just...yuck. Its a lifestyle choice that I don't agree with.
ReplyDeleteXD
Very cute, a little predictable, but very cute.
ReplyDeleteAlso needs some more proofreading, I found a lot of small errors.
That was just full of d'aaaaaw and warm fuzzies <3
ReplyDelete@wutdo
ReplyDelete"This story is cute and innocent, you assholes flaming about shipping and sexual content before you read it are pissing me off."
Well fucking said, bro.
To the author; a job well done, keep it up. Loved it!
I am SO HAPPY to see some shipping that is of the straight variety. I'm so sick and tired of all the weird pairings that people obsess over. Don't even get me started on the Combinatorics project. That story has weird by the truckload! I get the Lyra + Bon Bon thing. I've read the arty hasn't ended, and I admit, I liked it. There aren't many colts and stallions in the show, and is is definitely nice to finally see them paired with fine young mares!
ReplyDeleteI have to admit, I am a big TwiMac fan, though CarmelSparkle is cute and absolutely adorable too (PLUS it makes room for LunaMac or FlutterMac! yay). It's almost even more cute! I love how they are so shy in this story.
I will also NEVER EVER EVER EVER understand the fascination with CaramelMac. WTF people? It's already gay, which does weird me out big time, but you gotta make it KISSING FREAKING COUSINS TOO!!! I'm just gonna call that straight out and say YUCK!
@richfiles
ReplyDeleteCousins? You’re probably mistaking him for Braeburn from “Over a Barrel”. Caramel is just one of many background ponies who got the attention of the Fans because a) we know his official name and b) he appeared in one scene right next to Big Macintosh and that’s enough to get shipped in this fandom.
Yes Bronies are weird and I love it.
Anyway straight Caramel is as common as a sober Berry Punch. This could be interesting and it’s something new, so I’ll give it a try.
@ Yonasomun
ReplyDeleteUmmm... Read this story anyway, cause in this story, he's an Apple.
Regardless... I give it 5 stars for MASTERING the art of weaponized Dawwwsome and for giving some straight Carmel.
ReplyDeleteAlso... Since when did love need a reason. This story has all the reason needed for two ponies to want to enjoy each other's company... Just because they feel like it. :D
Also, I'm well aware of Braeburn from Appleoosa. I know Carmel is the plow pony from WWU who lost the grass seed. I always assumed Apple family relation as well, given the amount of interaction happening on the farm and with Big Mac and AJ, and since other's seem to have reached similar conclusions. This story did not raise a single flag in terms of his Apple family status when I read it, so it seems fanon enough to me.
ReplyDeleteThe fact that others find his inclusion into the overall Apple family tree acceptable still makes all the CarmelMac shippnig ULTRA CREEPY to me!
Besides, even if it weren't so, I still follow the Ghostbuster's philosophy...
"Don't cross the streams"
@richfiles
ReplyDeleteThanks, you just reminded me why I shouldn’t post any comments before actually reading the story. I never imagined Caramel as a member of the apple family because he lacks an apple related name (plus there’s already an official “Caramel Apple” who’s a mare).
Anyway, everything we read about Caramel, except his name, is pure Fanon. He can be Big Mac’s boyfriend in one story and his cousin in another one. I’ve no problem with that as long as he isn’t his cousin AND boyfriend in the same story.
the end?
ReplyDeleteTHE END?
I WANT MOAR!!!
See I liked this ship.
ReplyDeleteDon't end it! Pleaaaase!
ReplyDeleteCaralight is like the F/M of Twixie!
A very sweet story. Well written, plus it contains my favorite bookworm.
ReplyDeleteAlso i enjoy straight shipping (even when i prefer the same sex in real life) because its different.
Well, that ended rather abruptly. Its cute and all, but yeah. You don't really give yourself enough time to explain and/or build up this crush for either of the two involved. At the start or at the end. Well, I guess I enjoyed it enough.
ReplyDeleteYAAAY STRAIGHT SHIPPING!
ReplyDeleteLesbo fics just creep me out, honestly. I don't care how common they are.
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE WRITE MOAR OF THIS.
ReplyDeleteIt was nice to see Caramel catch a break!
ReplyDelete@Yonasomun
ReplyDelete@richfiles
To clear it up:
In THIS story, Caramel IS an Apple.
In canon, Caramel Apple is a mare that showed up at the Apple Family reunion.
So no, in other stories, CaraMac is NOT incestuous. And being gay should not have any bearing on how well/poorly she ship works.
At least, until there is canon evidence, like Rarity's attraction to Prince Blueblood.
"Why am I so delicious?"
ReplyDeleteHeheheheheheheh hahahahahahaha!
Um....ok?
ReplyDeleteThis story doesn't quite...seem....done? I dunno. The ending feels so tacked on. And it's supposed to be a Car/Twi ship but is more about Caramel's, well, issues. And then it touches on what he might actually be good at (which one wonders how it's related to his cutie mark) but doesn't explore it at all?
I dunno. It's pretty well written technically but it...just....feels...so...weird.
And once again I boggle at other comments.
@bronydash Eeyup. There is a mention of a Caramel Apple in the scene in the first ep which introduces the Apple Clan. However, I'm not sure if Caramel's gender had even been decided at that point; the pony introduced as Caramel Apple looks an awful lot like a filly, and seems to have the wrong cutie mark, which is rather obvious as the camera is focused right on the pony's flank. On the other hand, it is a large crowd scene, and the "correct" pony might have been out of frame.
ReplyDeleteHe also appears in "Winter Wrap Up," in a very brief dialogue-free appearance in which he, as noted in the story, loses the grass seed. However, this time we can at least be sure who he is, that he is indeed a stallion, and that he has the proper cutie mark.
So, he has one definite and one questionable appearance on camera. Which, for a stallion in Ponyville, is rather an accomplishment. You have Big Macintosh, that colt with the hourglass cutie mark that has a couple lines of dialogue while being harangued by Apple Bloom, and Caramel. That makes, what, three confirmed sightings of a male pony in Ponyville.
No wonder there's so much lesbian shipping. ;-)
This story is very... adorable. In Caramel's case, adorkable.
ReplyDeleteThough I do rather support AJxCaramel, this looks interesting. Might, no, WILL read.
ReplyDeleteCan it be?! STRAIGHT shipping involving TWILIGHT?!!! You deserve a medal, doc.
ReplyDeleteAlright, I’ve finished the fourth chapter time for the (biased) review.
ReplyDeleteLike a few other people already said, there aren’t many straight ships and most of them involving Big Mac or Soarin’. So this is probably the first Twilight/Caramel story, which means it’s a new ship with new possibilities.
And let’s face it: Sometimes it gets a bit boring to read about the same couples again and again. You can only write so many original stories about Twixie, Appledash or Flutterdash without entering the OOC territory.
For me this is a solid 3 star story. I definitely liked it, but it didn’t create this warm feeling I get from reading a really good Shipping Fics. The Shipping – for a lack of a better word – “just happened”. There weren’t any really cute moments and not enough chemistry between Twilight and Caramel to create a good romantic feeling.
Also there was no real climax. Sure there were some tense moments in the last chapter, like the part in which he forget about the date, but everything was solved so fast and easily.
All in all it was a nice read. And maybe it encourages people to write more straight ships. Diversity is always a good thing.
I loved every moment of this fic. I really hope you write more.
ReplyDeleteThis was really cute!
ReplyDeleteA good story, but I think the actual relationship needs to be explored a bit more.
ReplyDelete@wackyteen
ReplyDeleteWell that sounds kinda easy.
I mean, most of this fandom is, like, 100% sure that every single pony in the show is gay.
@Zamoonda
ReplyDeleteAhem. May I just say:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MaH4wFL7P8c
I think I found a new favorite ship. I like this adorkable X adorkable. Organized Twi seems like a great match for forgetful Caramel; however, I don't know enough about fanon Caramel to see what he would contribute to the ship so Twi would take interest in him...
ReplyDeleteWhatever the case, I liked this story. It didn't feel done, though. I'd have liked to see some stuff from Twi's perspective, or maybe see how their date went.
I loved it such a sweet and loveable story from two loveable charecters good job.
ReplyDeleteAd'awwable ;P
ReplyDeleteNot Bad and its kinda cute :D
ReplyDeleteThe most adorably sweet straight shipping story ever.
ReplyDeleteHey, It kept going, awesome!!!
ReplyDeleteOne of the few straight shipping stories of EqD, and a very good one may I add, sure, sometimes Caramel's insecurities got on my nerves, but still, the way he managed to overcome them was very satisfying, and although I felt that it's first open ending was good enough, now I couldn't be more happy to now its going to continue!
PS: I guess the "incomplete" label should be put back.
The fifth chapter was great. I actually laughed a few times.
ReplyDeleteI think why I love this so much is BECAUSE Caramel (as portrayed in this fiction) is so horrible at talking to the ladies. I can kinda relate.
Plus, it's so adorably sweet. And cute shipping really is best shipping, in my opinion.
A part 5? I thought this wrapped up already?
ReplyDeleteMOAR!
ReplyDeleteSurprise updates are the best updates!
ReplyDeleteI like this story; it's funny, cute and relatable.
That was adorkable. Some of the spelling/grammar mistakes did bug me, though. They seemed especially thick in the 3rd or 4th chapter.
ReplyDeleteQuit using the word dork. For some reason it's pissing me off.
ReplyDeleteYou know, why should you care if it's pissing me off? Because of the other definition of this word and the fact other people's minds seem to pair the word with it's worse definition automatically.
ReplyDeleteOh and I love the story.
ReplyDeleteseems like caramel got some "compeceted" girl problem in the Google doc version might wanna fix that.
ReplyDeleteon another note i'm happy to have moar!
Yay for more Caramel!
ReplyDeleteOh my sweet Celestia it updated. Oh God. Yes. Made my day.
ReplyDeleteOh fuck yeah, it updated!
ReplyDelete@DPV111 Whoa, now, relax, it's actually supposed to be a ripped saddle bag that some flowers fell out of. That's a scene in the story this picture is illustrating. But, I don't blame you for thinking that, it does look like some kind of censoring.
ReplyDelete@wackyteen If you are referring to the ripped saddle bag that looks more like a censorship of his junk, I don't blame you. But, not to worry, just a not so well drawn ripped saddlebag that some flowers were supposed to be in.
ReplyDeleteThis story is sweet. I'm not one for shipping normally, as 90% of the characters are female and that doesn't leave a lot of straight pairing options. Not that I'm outright homophobic, but for some reason I don't mind so much when it's ponies, so I've read and enjoyed a few 'fillyXfilly' shipfics. What can I say, I'm a romantic softie, so sweet stories like those(and now this one) appeal to me.
ReplyDeleteI am thrilled that you are continuing this, the first 4 chapters, while good on their own, really didn't explain or touch on Twilight or Caramel's feelings and backgrounds. Like others have said, the ship sort of just 'happened'. Now that you are going more in depth, I'm loving this even more, keep it up!
Huh, and here I thought this ship would be a bit saucy. Honestly, its cute and I like that.
ReplyDeleteTHE CUTENESS IT BURNS MY EYES
ReplyDeleteseriously though this is the only shipping i like
This is unbearably cute. I think this is just about the only rational ship fic I've ever besides MAYBE It's Always Sunny.
ReplyDeleteYou actually establish and develop characters, have them interact realistically, and have their relationship grow at a freaking reasonable pace! This is unheard of! this is glorious! this is too freaking cute! this is SPARTA!
seriously, do want more. this doesn't get the attention it deserves.
Chapter one.... This seems nice.
ReplyDeleteChapter two.... Getting better
Chapter three - six.... Crap now I'm hooked and have to wait for the next one. :D
I loved the first four chapters when they made up the story by themselves. You're really going to have to do something amazing to keep up that kind of quality and make it into a longer story, but if chapters 5 and 6 are any indication, you're on the right track! I can't wait to read more of this adorable romance. Thanks for sharing it. :)
ReplyDeleteCan't seem to find my comments, ah well. Again, This is an amazing story and my first fanfiction to ever read. I thought before that it ended on part 4 (which would have been fine) but I'm amazed that it's now continuing on a regular basis. Keep up the awesome work!
ReplyDeleteAll of my "D'awwww" is not enough! The remind me of my own first romance, so adorkable it hurts =D
ReplyDeleteYay! More of the sweetest ship I've seen yet. I like how you've gotten around to explaining a bit of what Twi sees is Caramel.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I now see how Caramel can contribute to the ship. He can help keep Twi from going crazy!
So sweeet! I think it's great how you've continued the story from what it was before, and now Caramel and Twilight are becoming closer. Eagerly awaiting part 7.
ReplyDeleteMUST. HAVE. MOAR.
ReplyDeleteThis one is actually quite enjoyable. Looking forward to more.
ReplyDeleteJust finished part 6, and I am enjoying it ALOT! There's something very endearing about this one. I think it's the extreme levels of adorkable-ness. It's a story about two socially awkward ponies in an innocent and charming relationship; If that's not d'aww, I don't know what is. Looking forward to part 7 :)
ReplyDeleteWow, chapter 7 was great! It's nice to see Caramel sticking up for himself!
ReplyDeleteAwesome, an update! Reading now, Squeak.
ReplyDeleteSo apparently Carmel-Twilight makes me giggle like a three year old.......please don't stop writing this.
ReplyDeleteCh. 3: Well, I have diabetes now. TOTALLY WORTH IT.
ReplyDeleteAh god read all 7 chapters today, so gooood! Dont take too long on the next part!
ReplyDeleteCh. 4: Guuh, it's just too cute.
ReplyDeleteCh. 5: Spike teasing Twi. Twi getting all worked up. Double adorkable. MY DIABEETUS
Awww, I love these stories!!
ReplyDeleteCannot wait for more! *Squeak*
Looking forward to more :)
ReplyDeleteThis is still so much fun to read.
ReplyDeleteTwi: I'm sorry, I have to go iron my dog.
ReplyDeleteAJ: But Twilight, you don't even h---
Twi: BYE! gallops off
Thanks again for making CaraLight my OTP.
Any ETA on the next chapter?
ReplyDeleteG'aahh!!! MUST UPDATE!!!!!
ReplyDeletePlease, I ask you, don't make us wait another month and a half for an update, this story is too amazing.
ReplyDeleteIm with Oryutzen on this one, such a great story but the chapters are so short and the updates so infrequent!
ReplyDeleteWhy does this say it's complete?
ReplyDeleteChapter 8 is too short!
ReplyDeleteI was having Caralight withdrawal symptoms
ReplyDeleteThese chapters are too darned short! But hey, the fact that we want more means it's a good sotry :D
ReplyDeletemore now!
ReplyDeleteI concur with the above posters that there just isn't enough chapter. D:
ReplyDeleteNeed more of the best ship evar soon, please! I don't know what you put into this story, but it's so sweet and addictive. Is it moon sugar?
I'm enjoying this story. This chapter was a bit lacking in progression; feels like you cut a single chapter in half.
ReplyDeleteThat being said, I absolutely adore the story within a story. It hit the nail on the head. It had a spot on rhythm. Please finish it! It's already giving me artistic ideas.
Finally got to chapter 8. I parrot the above that not that much seemed to happen in this chapter, but what did happen was pretty cute.
ReplyDeleteSince this story was written/started, canon Caramel got a girlfriend: A light blue pegasus with a yellow mane: http://youtu.be/0WCbSo5cqMw?t=39s
ReplyDelete@Jordan
ReplyDeleteI think you may well be the only one who cares.
@Squeak
Still loving this story. Keep the adorkable romance coming! I loved the part where Twi stood up for Caramel.
Poor Twi---Ponies are going to start thinking she's a burgundy mare that occasionally goes pale, with all of the blushing she's doing.
Would anyone care to explain to me what the tag 'shipping' means?
ReplyDelete@appleslinky
ReplyDeleteA story that contains a romantic pairing. In this fandom, most shipping stories concentrate on the lead-up to one character confessing their feelings for another, but some concentrate on the pairing actually being in a relationship.
Also, this updated at last! Please don't leave us hanging so long for the next chapter!
Bout time... :)
ReplyDelete@Jordan
ReplyDeleteNo one cares.
Anyway, it was great to finally see that mess between Jonagold and Caramel/Toffee come out in the open; and the rest of the chapter did a good job keeping the diabetes-level of adorableness going from earlier chapters. All told a good entry in the story.
Wow. This has become one of my all time favorite fics. Twilight + Caramel = Cutest Couple Ever. I;m really liking this story so far. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteThis story has not been updated for a while now. ;(
ReplyDeleteWhat happened?