• Story: Revalatory Filly Skydance (Update- Act II)

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    Author: Gabriel LaVedier
    Description: A play, seen through the eyes of the audience; and a transparent parody of Revolutionary Girl Utena. At Horsetari Academy, Skydance the pegasus and Country Roads the earth pony have a fairly standard school experience. Then Skydance meets the enigmatic Daisy Dreams and the world turns upside down.

    Revalatory Filly Skydance Act One: The Stargazer Saga

    Description: The curtain rises again on a tale of confusion, passion, desire and finding a place in the world. Skydance has defeated the full Student Council and holds the Lily Friend tightly. But forces are moving against her, dark forces. And what is revealed may be more than she can bear...

    Revalatory Filly Skydance Act Two: The Calla Saga

    Additional Tags: Acting, Utena Parody, Learning, Experiencing, The Play's the thing
    Friday, September 23, 2011 op
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    31 comments:

    1. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 12:00 PM

      FIRST

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    2. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 12:01 PM

      Second!

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    3. ShadowFox04August 8, 2011 at 12:06 PM

      The day of Gabriel LaVedier?

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    4. VinnyAugust 8, 2011 at 12:10 PM

      5th

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    5. Hio590August 8, 2011 at 12:27 PM

      Titles and descriptions continue to get more wordy.

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    6. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 12:39 PM

      Well I saw the picture and [shipping] tag and got scared. After reading the description now I'm just confused.

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    7. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 12:42 PM

      Feels..... not like the chars, because there all actin.

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    8. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 12:45 PM

      First thoughts after seeing tags and picture: Pedophile Dash?

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    9. Rainbow HashAugust 8, 2011 at 12:48 PM

      This comment has been removed by the author.

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    10. GypsyAugust 8, 2011 at 12:48 PM

      im...confused?

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    11. Mr.BronyAugust 8, 2011 at 12:49 PM

      Cereal you goofed the image (AGAIN)

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    12. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 12:51 PM

      An attempt to combine 2 great things that fails completely at effectively representing either. MLPFiM deserves better, and the brilliant work of art that is RGU deserves MUCH better.

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    13. Rainbow HashAugust 8, 2011 at 12:53 PM

      Not bad but I think most of the fanfic is departing the simplicity of my little pony with the ostentatious vocabulary and delivery.

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    14. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 1:10 PM

      ...I'm kinda confused.

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    15. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 1:29 PM

      Scootaloveabuse... confusing...

      I must say I find it very hard to read with the wrong names. Its not fun to have to look back to the top of the document every paragraph to check who was who again. Course I don't know Utena.

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    16. Gabriel LaVedierAugust 8, 2011 at 1:32 PM

      To the confused: Welcome to Ohtori Academy, mindf*** capital of the universe. If anything (and old-time fans of Utena will back me on this) this story is LESS of a mindblow, because some things actually get an explanation, the motivations are plainer and there's no incest. And it happens in a magic land of talking ponies, so the supernatual elements are less freaky.

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    17. ToonNinjaAugust 8, 2011 at 1:56 PM

      Hrm?

      ...Hrm.

      Feeling kinda Rorschach today.

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    18. StargazerAugust 8, 2011 at 1:58 PM

      o_O
      The Stargazer saga!

      /me is famous!
      lol

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    19. Emil BjörnfotAugust 8, 2011 at 2:37 PM

      There seem to be no Shipping label...

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    20. StargazerAugust 8, 2011 at 5:43 PM

      o_O
      The Stargazer saga!

      /me is famous!
      lol

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    21. Rainbow HashAugust 8, 2011 at 5:43 PM

      Not bad but I think most of the fanfic is departing the simplicity of my little pony with the ostentatious vocabulary and delivery.

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    22. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 5:43 PM

      First thoughts after seeing tags and picture: Pedophile Dash?

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    23. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 7:51 PM

      >Revolutionary Girl Utena

      NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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    24. AnonymousAugust 9, 2011 at 3:39 AM

      >Revolutionary Girl Utena

      NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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    25. Lurks-no-MoreAugust 9, 2011 at 4:30 AM

      > Revolutionary Girl Utena
      > Revelatory Filly Skydance

      YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSS! :D

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    26. MatrilwoodAugust 13, 2011 at 10:14 AM

      *Sees picture of Dash and Scootaloo* Daaaaaaaw

      *Sees [Shipping]* Wait WHAT?

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    27. Logan WarnerSeptember 23, 2011 at 2:42 PM

      @Matrilwood

      This+*ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh finally some ScootXDash shipping*

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    28. Logan WarnerSeptember 23, 2011 at 2:44 PM

      the word thinks should be in front of the omygosh part, after the first *

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    29. OhYouFoalSeptember 23, 2011 at 3:11 PM

      I'll be honest, it just feels really awkwardly worded. It's not bad, it's pretty well written in fact...

      ...But the whole 'They're doing a play' thing just doesn't really seem to work for me, it draws me out of getting engrossed in it all.

      Kinda sucks too, with all the mysticism in RGU and the fantasy stylings of FiM, this should have been a five star knock it out of the park kind of story but I just... I can't focus and get into this.

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    30. TGPFluttershySeptember 23, 2011 at 3:31 PM

      ScootDash? I'm down!
      That picture alone, which also happens to be my phone wallpaper, is enough on its own to make me read it!

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    31. dastrdlyWSeptember 23, 2011 at 3:42 PM

      I love this. o.o But I think it needs an "incomplete" tag instead of "complete" unless the author has stopped it, because it's only at intermission.

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