• Story: The Perfect Cupcake

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    Author: A.J.
    Description: With some help from Pinkie Pie, Twilight learns to make the perfect cupcakes for her beloved assistant, Spike.
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    Additional Tags: Describe it how you wish

    37 comments:

    1. Cupcake time. With twilight.

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    2. wait. dose it make me a horrible person that when i read the description i thought it said "from her beloved assistant, Spike"

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    3. @lugthor
      no, no...you're not the only one. O_O

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    4. I thought this was "cupcakes", but with twilight... thank god.

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    5. GAH NO NOT CUPCAKES...
      STAY AWAY!

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      Oh thank god.

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    6. Reads title D:
      Reads tags :D

      Might check this out when I stop being so lazy and finish some other stories I'm following.

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    7. Inb4 cupcakes jokes. Wait... too late

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    8. OH GOD NOOOO

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      Oh good.

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    9. NOT MORE CUPCAKES!!!!!!!!!!!

      oh this isn't grimdark. well. NEITHER WAS PAST SINS!

      I'm not reading this cause it says CUPCAKES!!!!

      RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    10. Well, that turned out better than all the panicky maniacs above were fearing, although I do agree that it's a somewhat unfortunate title/description.

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    11. Imagine, if you will, a world where nopony automatically associated cupcakes with, well, Cupcakes. I dream of that world every night.

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    12. Read it, was a fun little read. Lives up to it's tags, don't worry guys.

      For now, just enjoy the non-grimdark cupcakes fic :]!

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    13. A nice and sweet story.

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    14. Was a bit on lookout for anything bad when Pinkie appeared, but it ended all well.
      Must say dat was a lovely story.

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    15. Fun little dialogue with a bit of d'aaww added. Worth the few minutes to poke me head in and read. Nothing world changing, just a natural little scene.

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    16. My sensors were registering "d'aww" 300% above normal.

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    17. I seriously enjoyed this, but given the title, this was destined to be given a serious shitstorm.

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    18. I can't even walk past a bakery window now without recalling the horror...

      Not that I'll let that stand between me and this fic. Next on my "to read list" for tonight.

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    19. *Sees cupcakes in the title*
      *expects the comments section to be alight with cupcakes flashbacks*

      Yup, I was right.

      Also, maximum d'aaaaaaaw levels!

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    20. That was lovely =3
      Well written Pinkie Pie, and the last few paragraphs gave me cavities.
      We need more stories like these! <3

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    21. The guy that wrote cupcakes must be damn pleased with himself with the mark he left on the fandom.

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    22. Description needs to be fixed.

      "With some help from Pinkie Pie AND RAINBOW DASH, Twilight learns to make the perfect cupcakes for her beloved assistant, Spike"

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    23. Pinkamina Diane PieAugust 11, 2011 at 4:16 PM

      D'awwwww! Such a cute and sweet little story. Very touching at the end.

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    24. Two cheery Twilight/Spike stories in two weeks. I'm loving it!

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    25. A really cute and touching story. One of the more well written stories on the site, Its just the right length and the mood is actually like the show. I personally dislike Grimdark and the like. Unfortunately, so many people won't be treated to this due to Cupcakes, a fanfic I despise, due to OOC and many other reasons, which I shan't list here.

      Good job to the Author.

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    26. Stories of Spike and Twilight together are some of my favorites. This was a nice little story.

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    27. @FluffyWuffs
      @Twix
      @Anonymous
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      *Boot to the Head*-extravaganza !

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      @Anonymous
      ...I do too... Oh by the 'gods' that I do too...

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      And now, on with the story.

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    28. It was very natural. I liked it.

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    29. >They should call you Tasty Sparkle, or Twilight Pastry!
      -In a parallele universe, she must be a baker ;)

      >Twilight giggled. Pinkie Pie was always such a bouncing ball of pure joyous energy.
      -Yay! That's why people just love her. :)

      >She smiled, stroking his spikes with her hoof. >"My very first friend."
      -*Insert : Awwww* :)

      >"We're friends, Twilight, and we'll always be friends. No matter what."
      -Awwww #2

      ... Heh, ''Goofy Gator'' ;) ...

      It's was a nice little story to read.

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    30. I think this story could use some SPRINKLES.

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    31. No thank you, I'm allergic to love.

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    32. Awwww . . . so sweet. I wish more people would write on the relationship between Spike and Twilight.

      But what's up with Twilight not putting any frosting on the cupcake? That's the most important part! Lol!

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    33. [Simpsons mode on]
      According to the gas chromatograph, the secret ingredient is... LOVE?! Who's been screwing with this thing?
      [Simpsons mode off]

      I for one don't consider the title unfortunate, because it does exactly what I wish more bronies would: let cupcakes be cupcakes. I'm happy to see the word "cupcakes" attached to such a sweet, light story, and used simply to refer to actual cupcakes for a change.

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