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Author: Fireant
Description: How it is to fly with lightning chasing behind you? How risky it is to be in the group of the best stunt crew in entire Equestria? How you became one of them? Spitfire, current leader of the Alpha Team have a solid collection of memories about her training, her friends, her teachers and who else can tell us the hardship of being a Wonderbolt than one of the best of them?
All the Pretty Little Sparks
Additional Tags: Wonderbolts, Recalling, Memories, Fear, Sentimental
15 comments:
Everyone is too busy reading Past Sins to read this.
ReplyDeleteI hope the story is better written than the description...
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ReplyDeleteMaybe, but its definitely going on the short-list :D
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteThey usually are for some reason.
Authors always slack on the description!
Such a lovely and warm story. I really like the idea of having a lightning after you. And yes, it's written much better than the description! :)
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ReplyDeleteYeah, mostly because its like: "Yeah, done, time to send it, where is this post that tell me what is needed to be typed in the mail... name, tags. What? Description? What the hay is this? What should I do here, a freakin' blurb? I am working now for Celestia's Sake, I don't have time to write anything goddess damnit! Blast, I will type some random herp-a-derp *click click click* Here, description made, send that bad boy! *send*"
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Good story; I quite enjoyed it! :)
ReplyDelete@fireant
ReplyDeleteThat's... about right, actually.
@fireant
ReplyDeleteYou did really, really good. This was an exciting read! It was the perfect length to: not too long, but just the perfect length for the character story to develop.
I really can't give specifics, but this is just a really pleasant read.
hmmm... A nice little story, I give it a 4/5, wasn't the most amazing read ever but it was a nice short story that was interesting to read.
ReplyDeleteIt'd be terrible to think people may be turned off by the errors in the desc, because this is very well written. I mean, presentation matters, really.
ReplyDeleteBut enough about that; loved it. Some more backstory and elaboration on the Wonderbolts in the form of a wad of powerful memories? Just what I ordered! It flowed well, not once did I look away from my screen.
Just, dang, not sure what more to say. It was great.
I really liked this. The scenes in the classroom had the same type of effect on me as they had in the story, and the later scene during Spitfire's first "mission" did a good job drawing me into her character.
ReplyDeleteThe only problem with it is that there were occasional spelling problems, but nothing to keep it from being 5/5 stuff.
ding dong.
ReplyDeleteVery nice story. Liked the characters and the stories told in the flashback. It flowed well and had me hooked from beginning to end.
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