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Author: The Mechanic
Description: A young mare's research into the nature of Justice yields unexpected results, and shapes the rest of her life.Serving Justice
Additional Tags: Slice of Life, Justice, Legal
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16 comments:
I miss the days where people didn't fight over who was the first post.
ReplyDeleteWhy do you even mention it?
ReplyDeleteBecause his comment makes him more unique than all the other comments.
ReplyDeleteThis story needs a touch more Trollestia.
First
ReplyDeleteI wish the Brooklyn Supreme Court was like this. (I'm an intern at the DA's Office). I could hang out with ponies all day :)
ReplyDeleteFirst my grin was wide.
ReplyDeleteThen it got wider.
Then I giggled.
Then I smiled.
Then I laughed with joy.
Then I sat back in disappointment. Surely that's not the end?
The tag says "incomplete". There is more to come!
I look forward to it, dear author.
Additional thoughts:
Though it was silly of me, I expected a shouted "OBJECTION!" or "TAKE THAT!". When none were forthcoming, I was very satisfied you didn't play a meme for cheap laughs.
Glimmer was glamoured!
I chuckled.
I am curious as to how exactly the Princesses knew about Glimmer's desires... I suppose I'll put it down to them being goddesses or something.
Also, why bring the bailiff and guards out of retirement? Granted it's all a bit theatrical, but did it need to be?
In some naming conventions, her name would be a pun.
ReplyDeleteGlimmer of Hope
(Daughter's name, born of, Mother's name).
Well written, with just the right touch of humor.
ReplyDeleteFOR GREAT JUSTICE
ReplyDeleteFOR THE GREATER GOOD
ReplyDeleteBut I lol'd. Nice fic! Awesome work with twists.
I hate lawyers. That is all I will say about this.
ReplyDelete@Anonymous We're an eminently hate-able breed.
ReplyDeleteOn the other hand, Glimmer isn't, which is rare for a lawyer. I had a whole lot of sympathy for her plight, throughout, and I thought this was a particularly well-written fic, even if she did exhibit some notoriously Sue-ish traits.
Kudos to the author, five stars from me!
Gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ^^
ReplyDeleteI rather liked this one, nice, to the point and it comes from a new angle. Very nice and I look forward to more from this author.
ReplyDeleteI've yet to read it yet, but that picture can only be trumped by a picture of Minas Tirith in the same style.
ReplyDeleteJustice does not exist!!! It is an illusion
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