• Story: The Night's Rebellion

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    [Adventure][Grimdark]

    Author: Levatis
    Description: A thousand years is a long time for history to be obscured. Just as the saying goes 'to the victor goes the spoils' so do the quill and parchment. As the muddy waters of the past are swept clear by new tides all that will be left behind is truth. Guilty or innocent, learn of the tale that Princess Luna was banished for.
    The Night's Rebellion

    Additional Tags: Long, Epic, tragedy, Adventure, fantasy
    Thursday, July 14, 2011 op
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    11 comments:

    1. A Terrible PersonJuly 14, 2011 at 2:04 AM

      This looks fun. So many good-looking things starting up lately, it may be enough to break me of my aversion to incomplete fics.

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    2. Dave Mustang, the cynical BronyJuly 14, 2011 at 2:08 AM

      MLP fanfic cliche #5, LUNA IS INNOCENT, CELESTIA IS A BITCH!

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    3. MrTanokkiJuly 14, 2011 at 2:13 AM

      @Dave Mustang, the Cynical Brony:

      Cliche as it is, at least it still usually leads to an Affably Evil Large Ham Trollestia.

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    4. AnonymousJuly 14, 2011 at 2:41 AM

      Councilmare for females and Councilpony for males may have been better terms, or some other form thereof, as filly and colt directly point at the equivalent of children. Any council of import should not be made up of 'kids'.

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    5. Mysterious, Disembodied VoiceJuly 14, 2011 at 4:05 AM

      But as Mayor Mare said in Celestia's introduction, "fillies and gentlecolts".
      While they do use 'mare', everypony always ends-up a filly or a colt. And that does go against Lauren's saying they're all grown adults, since fillies and colts are still ponies.
      Unless it's still true that sis has a cloning facility hidden in the old castle ruins and the majority of ponies all appear to stay the same age forever.

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    6. AnonymousJuly 14, 2011 at 4:25 AM

      @Dave Mustang, the cynical Brony

      You honor your title, that's for sure^^

      So far, we have but the description of the story to infer Tyrant Celestia, not the story itself.

      I'm curious how this will unfold; Will it be the cliche setup Dave noted, or something else?

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    7. AnonymousJuly 14, 2011 at 10:36 AM

      @Luna

      "Fillies and gentlecolts" is used to directly riff off of "Ladies and gentlemen". "Mares and Stallions" wouldn't have the same cadence and "Stallions and gentlemares" would be slightly confusing.

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    8. AnonymousJuly 14, 2011 at 11:56 AM

      @Dave Mustang, the cynical Brony

      i would like to see the full numbered list you have of those, it would be informative :D

      and this looks interesting. will read

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    9. AnonymousJuly 15, 2011 at 11:53 PM

      @Sir Leadhead

      Seconded. This would likely be of some help to aspiring writers...

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    10. AnonymousJuly 15, 2011 at 11:54 PM

      Somehow it sounds strange when I tell my buddies the first poster was "a terrible person" XD

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    11. AnonymousJuly 25, 2011 at 7:59 AM

      Update pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasee :)

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