[Grimdark][Sci-Fi][Crossover] "As a longtime Trekkie, I really, REALLY liked this one. It's remarkably dead on and feels both like 'MLP in the far future' and 'standard Trek episode'... specifically, it feels somewhere between TNG and Voyager. As a result, it's AWESOME!"- Pre Reader #10
Author: VozDeSuenos
Description: Years after the mane six defeated Luna with the Elements of Harmony, a new evil invaded Equestria. The ponies only hope lay in the Elements of Harmony, the princesses, and the Doctor. Unfortunately, a terrible catastrophe befell the planet. With technology inspired by the TARDIS, ponies fled to the stars. In time, a crew aboard the Alicorn finds itself far away from home, trying to survive in a new sector of space and wondering what has happened to Equestria.My Little Enterprise (All Links)(New Chapter 11)
Additional Tags: Sci-fi Crossover Madness with Ponies
130 comments:
I love you Seth.
ReplyDeleteHappy Friendship Day Everypony!
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For a second I thought Twilight was in a business suit, and the title referred to a business enterprise. *facehoof*
ReplyDeleteA Trek AND Who crossover?!
ReplyDelete*dies*
O.o Nuuuuuu! Someone else beat me too it! ;n; And I was gonna do Star Pony: The Next Friendship .....
ReplyDeleteFirst Borg and then Romulans. These ponies are NOT having a good day, are they? :P
ReplyDeleteMore please, but don't rush.
Spaaaaaaaace. The Final Frontier.
ReplyDeleteThese are the voyages of the Starship Canterprize.
Its ongoing mission: to explore strange new worlds, to sek out new life and new civilizations, to BOLDLY GO WHERE NOPONY HAS GONE BEFORE!
Twilight's log: stardate unknown
"Dear Princess Celestia..."
I wants moar!!!!!!! imideatly!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
ReplyDeleteUmm... gonna out myself as a massive trekkie here, but what the hell. Transporting the dilithium matrix out of the warp core stuck me as a strange thing to do, since doing that while while it's still in use is a sure-fire way to cause a breach.
ReplyDeleteIf they wanted a big explosion, they could have just ejected the antimatter storage pods and blown them up with a photon torpedo. Less flashy, but also less shortsighted than rendering your warp drive inoperable.
And isn't the ship still infested with Borg? Seems a little early to be calling a staff meeting when there's still drones running around and wounded that need to be tended to.
...ahem...
Finally, a Star Trek Crossover. I've had plans to make one myself since doing that picture of Twilight in that 29th century science uniform. But I want it to be a crossover with the JJ Abrams 2009 story. And it be a Humans in Equestria story too, with Kirk and the gang visiting Equestria. Although, I only have a basic premise at the moment.
ReplyDeleteHeh, good points Bronode. I had meant to handle the Borg beaming off. As for the engines, guess you just know a bit more than I do. -Voz
ReplyDeleteHey! The 'parsec' line prompted comment. Die hard trekkie, so I gotta be picky. A parsec is about 3.25 light years, which at impulse isn't a distance that can actually be traveled in any less than a few decades. You probably meant an astronomical unit or AU, the distance from the Earth to the sun, which even that takes over an hour at max impulse, but point is that it's more manageable. Good story though, I'll stay tuned for updates!
ReplyDeleteTuesdays. How do they work?
ReplyDeleteWell your ship is apparently shaped like a pegasus, Voz, so I'm prepared to accept a few departures from how Fed tech should work.
ReplyDeleteJeff, I think some reference was made to a short-range warp jump. So parsec might be doable, although yeah, an AU would make much more sense as I'd expect the scale of the nexus they're in to be on par with a transwarp hub.
Speaking as a trekkie, brilliant job so far. I look forward to seeing more of this fic.
ReplyDelete"Free will is irrelevant. Friendship is irrelevant. Resistance is futile. Bow before your Princess."
ReplyDeleteI'm still reading it and you already have 5 stars for this. Good job sir.
So, when can we expect Kirk/Picard/Whoever to show up when the reports of the Romulan fleet converging on an unknown ship in the Neutral Zone to occur? (the feds have to be who Doctor Whooves is referring to.)
ReplyDeleteCelestia of Borg is still the scariest fucking thing ever.
ReplyDeleteI approve of this. Last night, I'm laying in bed plagued by stomach problems, wishing I had a Star Trek/MLP:FiM crossover. The next day: BOOM!
ReplyDeleteI outta wish for a Lamborghini tonight...
Welp.
ReplyDeleteNo reason to continue my Trek crossover now, I see.
@Chromadancer Of course there is! Why would I write one unless I wanted to read them, too?! Definitely write one!!
ReplyDeleteAs for the science stuff, I'm going to keep a closer eye on it. Bronode, if you and / or JeffBridges want to contact me somehow, I'd be glad to have y'all as pre-readers for the next chapter's science / trek accuracy. It's been a long time since I went through Memory Alpha or the encyclopedias.
@Anonymous: I'm so glad you think so. Celestia of Borg haunts my dreams now.
@Pre-Reader 10: You're my hero, that's exactly the feel I was hoping for.
@VozDeSuenos
ReplyDeleteHm, I guess on second thought I could keep going. I do have an outline and three chapters done, no sense in letting it go to waste... Mine has a different angle to it. I just haven't had the time to revise it and make it worthy of submitting to Seth...
I considered including the Borg in mine, perhaps in a sequel, but the way I've got my universe laid out it might not work out as well. Plus, Celestia of Borg is just... a scary concept. Yikes! Can't wait to see where you go with this.
Absolutely! I can't wait to read it!!
ReplyDeleteAs for the ending, it's already planned out, but I let the characters write the middle. That's the fun part!
I'll let you in on a secret. I wrote over 40 pages of a novel and lost it to a computer virus. Eventually went back three years later and finished it. It was totally worth it. No writing is ever a waste of time unless you let it be.
Oh wow, really? Sure I'd be interested. I don't really know how this pre-reader stuff works, but I know my trek and can string a coherent sentence together when the mood strikes me; and anyway, how hard can it be, right?
ReplyDeleteRight?
Besides, I've had this crapload of useless technobabble ensconced in my cranium all these years, about time I put it to some constructive use, eh?
So how does this happen? You post your email, I post mine? Blogger doesn't seem to have any means of private messaging, which strikes me as odd.
Finally, just to let you know, I'm a Brit, so I'm about 5 hours ahead of you. If that's gonna cause any scheduling problems then, well, there it is can't say I didn't warn you. Speaking of, it's 0515 where I'm at now so I'mma get some sleep 'fore I die.
@VozDeSuenos
ReplyDeleteWow, that's crazy! Glad to hear you finished it, though.
If you want to see what I've got so far on mine, feel free to take a peek and offer your comments. It reads kinda dry right now, I need to work on my descriptions. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/168/To-Seek-Out-New-Life...
This one features actual characters from TNG meeting up with the ponies, so it's a bit difficult to write properly. One of the reasons I'm taking so long on it (I want it to be just right and not feel forced). I also address the Prime Directive, but that later gets thrown out the window thanks to (SPOILERS)
Anyway, good luck on your future endeavors, can't wait to see the next installment!
@Bronode I've done a lot of voice projects where I worked with Brits, Aussies, Croats, and people all over. Time zones mean almost nothing to me. Hope you're a fan of Who, too, because it just got an even third of the plot when I was planning stuff out earlier. As for the email... lemme think on that.
ReplyDelete@Chromdancer Definitely! The first writing I ever did was an alternate history of Best of Both Worlds. Riker and Worf will be showing up in this soon.
OC Ponies? Not sure if want...
ReplyDeleteBut I'm a Trekkie myself, and I've been waiting for a good Trek/MLP crossover, so I'll give this a chance.
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ReplyDeleteSent you a mail about an hour after you posted your mail. It's been kind of a while. Didn't you get it?
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ReplyDeleteRight, mail sent. Hopefully it'll get to you this time.
ReplyDeleteHey bronies! With a little editing help from Bronode, episode II should have a link here fairly soon.
ReplyDeleteSo... Pinkie is now part of the borg? Does that mean all of the mane 6 are now borg?
ReplyDeleteNot necessarily *evil grin*
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeletePinkie Pie and the other 5 are *mares*, not fillies.
Unless Voz mistyped. ;P
MUST HAVE MORE! XD
I may have, it's kind of ambiguous where the mare / filly distinction is. Mares just seems like it's much older (~30-35 human years) to me.
ReplyDeleteEither way, soon! Although Seth hasn't posted it, Episode II is linked in Episode I. I will be taking a small break, though. I'm currently writing a short fic for the Happy Luna contest. As soon as it's done, I'll begin Episode III. :]
Spock? oh god!
ReplyDeletequick! we need more stars, we haven't enought to contain the awesomeness
I've taken a bit of a hiatus to work on my FiM Fanfic podcasty thing and finish the fic for the Happy Luna Contest. Now that all that's over, I've begun work on Chapter 3!
ReplyDeleteOhmahgosh!!! I have been in here to check regurlary if episode 2 is up and now when i take time to read the comments I see it's actually allready up xD I am defenitely going to start reading these regurlary from now on :P
ReplyDeleteYeah, sometimes Seth prefers to wait for two or three chapters to re-post about it in the feed. Because of my fan fic readings and the Happy Luna contest, I'd taken off a little more time than I meant to for Episode 3.
ReplyDeleteAhhh!! You remade the document and added an episode 3 text :D does this mean episode three is coming soon??? :D:D
ReplyDeleteIt does indeed! It's on Google Docs, but I've got one more edit to make, then it will be up. Hopefully today or tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteAaand up! Once the next chapter is written, edited, and goes up, I'll bug Seth about putting it in the feed again. :]
ReplyDeleteAwesome chapter 3 :D altough i am not really that interested in the mane cast in this story:/ i personally would prefer that the story focused more on the crew of alicorn but thats just a personal preference :) please keep up the good work i am going to keep checking for updates as often as i can :D
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it! I know, but ponies don't always like OC ponies and the mane 6 tie into the story anyhow.
ReplyDeleteWhen I write, I create a beginning and an ending, but let the characters get there themselves, which is what's going on here. There's between 5 and 20 chapters left depending on them (and the chapter size) and at least a few more characters to introduce. :3
haha between 5 and 20 xD now i know exactly :P well I can't wait for the next one :D
ReplyDeleteLike I said, depends on the characters and who dies or doesn't! I think it's around 10-12, but I could be wrong. ^_^
ReplyDeleteMidway through Episode 4 and really excited about it.
ReplyDeleteSPOILER: The title is "The Dead of Sto 'Vo 'Kor"
Okay i didn't get the spoiler :( could be because i'm not a trekie but oh well i bet it will be awesome anyways ;D
ReplyDeleteI didn't expect much of anypony who wasn't familiar with Trek to pick up the story, you've made my [exceptionally long] day! I hope you enjoy it, this chapter is almost exclusively OCs and has a sci-fi mystery / paranormal feel to it.
ReplyDelete(Sto 'Vo 'Kor is the Klingon afterlife, a bit like Valhalla, though I'll explain it in the chapter, too)
When it goes up, that is... >.>
ReplyDeleteThere's still another 1-2,000 words left to write and then edit.
Nice thanks :D Maybe I'll check out star trek sometime :) I loved the latest movie with the new cast and all that but whenever i've tried to watch the old shows it has just seemed silly :P Cant wait for your next chapter though :D
ReplyDeleteThe latest movie was amazing! Next Gen, Voyager, and Enterprise were always my favorites, I never cared much for TOS or DS9 (let the flame war begin). If you choose to watch them, keep in mind the graphics budget increases with each new series and the graphics themselves don't age well... That's why The Next Generation will always be my personal favorite, its writing ages better imho than the others.
ReplyDeleteMan, this is turning out to be a much longer chapter than I expected. If I get enough done today, the full edit should be up tomorrow night. :]
ReplyDelete@VozDeSuenos
ReplyDeleteNot to mention, TNG introduced Q. And the Borg, but mostly Q, because Q is crazy-awesome.
Also, OH GOD THE SOUND OF DRUMS. That freaked me more than Celestia of Borg, I tell you.
@Proginoskes
ReplyDeleteI was actually just saying to Bronode earlier today that I felt the need to introduce Q / Discord later on. I do so love Q.
Yay! I actually gave someone chills with the drums. Glad somepony picked up on that. Episode 4 will be up soon and we'll be getting back to the Doctor and Celly come Episode 5.
Yaaaay :D long chapter :D
ReplyDeleteYaaaaaaaay :D:D:D:D:D:D you have posted chapter 4 :D:D:D
ReplyDeleteHahaha, yep! Hope you enjoy it. It's a nice long one, roughly double Episode 3.
ReplyDeleteYeah it was really nice :D I like the idea with some minor stories aside from the main one :D hope you make more :D:D:D
ReplyDeleteThat's what I was planning! I like the main story and want to tell it, but there's just so much room for the occasional one-shot in there, especially when it can help the main story. Plus, it actually fits really well with Star Trek to have a main plot with regular interruptions. As long as I don't lose focus ;]
ReplyDeleteWow I had to dig dang deep in the pile to find this. Seth should really be updating.
ReplyDelete@DPV111 Yeah, I've been sending him messages and he always says it's gone in the update queue, but it never seems to get posted. It's why the chapters have links back and forward now.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you should post it on fimfiction
ReplyDelete@Natr1x
ReplyDeleteI'm going to give it one more try when I release Episode 5, then I'll probably just start putting them on DA. I've got so many accounts already, I don't really need another -_-;
Now the original Battlestar Gallactica and Stargate need to be mixed in...
ReplyDelete@thegamefilmguruman Hah, I'm sure I could, but it'd end up terribly. Never watched the original BSG, only the new one, and I'm only familiar with the Stargate movie.
ReplyDeleteStill, Episode 5 will be up very soon (a couple days at most), and add a whole new level of WTF.
@VozDeSuenos
ReplyDeleteNBC has all the original BSG online for free. Just say'n. :)
@thegamefilmguruman Haha, maybe next time. MLE only has 5-10 more chapters left and, after Episode 5, it's not allowed to involve any more arcs.
ReplyDeleteWhen seeking approval to trash Episode 5 and start from scratch, my editor vehemently denied it saying: "Okay, you know what? Yes. A thousand times, yes! Okay, things are gonna be rivalling the human circulatory system for complexity, but -[SPOILERS OMITTED]- tying everything together is just too delicious. So again I say; YES. As long as everything's woven together properly and relevant to the parts that have already been explored, then this gets my Bronode seal of approval... okay, I don't actually have one of those. Hmm, maybe I'll make one."
Seriously. When he says 'human circulatory system,' he means it.
As Ambassador Spock would say..."Fascinating"; I just wonder what's going to happen when the Doctor and Ditzy reappear. Will Picard use his experience with the Tamarians to act as her interpreter or what?
ReplyDelete@DreadedCandiru2 You'll have an answer to that soon enough, just may not be the one you're hoping for. Mwahahaha!
ReplyDelete@VozDeSuenos
ReplyDeleteYou mixed Ponies... with Star Trek... and Doctor Whooves... I love you... in a creepy stalker way! :D
If you do mix in Q, could you please make the same Q/Spock connection established in the Q vs Spock recordings? That would be so full of awesome I don't think I could handle it. I'm loving Borg Celestia, great writing all around!
ReplyDeleteWell its awesome.
ReplyDeleteLooks like the mane six are pretty dead though. Timey wimey dead too if my suspicion's correct.
@Hey! Oi! Never heard of those, but there's still time. Quick, send me a way to find it!!
ReplyDelete@Hawkeye92 Episodes 5 and 6 will clear that up when they come out. ^_^
SPOILER: DisQord will be a major part of the story starting in Episode 5.
Trevor, the very dedicated Trekie, has decided that this story is amazing! Trevor expects another update posthaste! *Asking/expecting with all due politeness and respect.*
ReplyDelete~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
check this out http://ak71.deviantart.com/art/The-Next-Ge-neigh-ration-258498227 this may turn out to bo something realy good
ReplyDelete@The GREAT and POWERFUL Trevor Due to my work schedule, the updates are usually two or three weeks apart, luckily, I waited until I was nearly done with Episode 5 before bugging Seth again. It may not go in the feed until 6, though. So be sure to check back in a few days!
ReplyDelete@Rasly OOoo!!! I saw that image a few days ago. Is there a fic coming? Huh, huh, huh???
I'll be honest, I didn't think this story would work.
ReplyDeleteI love it when I'm proven wrong
Current ad banner is MST3K Meets Star Trek II The Wrath of Khan. That's awesome.
ReplyDeleteMan, I wish I could draw. I would SO be drawing a Klingon Pony right now, complete with Cranial ridges and a Bat'leth cutie Mark. Heghlu'meH QaQ jajvam!
ReplyDeleteHaha looks like you got a bit more attention now that the story was finnaly posted :D
ReplyDeleteJust found and read, thanks so much to Seth for reposting it! This is so awsome! Great up with ST, saw so much more voyager than anything else. This is just spot on. Good job. You've got me hooked.
ReplyDeleteJust one question: Why did I have to find this when it's not done yet? ><
@Natr1x Eeyup! ^_^
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the warm words, guys. It definitely adds fuel to the creative fires!
@VozDeSuenos
ReplyDeleteRight....Companion....almost as death-prone as a redshirt or Venture Brother.
Other lifestyles that would be more survivable than Ditzy's include "Monarch henchman", "battle droid" and "Storm Trooper".
ReplyDelete@DreadedCandiru2 Haha, so true. Lucky for the Doctor, I like Ditzy a bit too much to kill her. Hopefully, my characters will cooperate with that logic.
ReplyDeleteFellow bronies, my editor is extremely busy with classes and stuff. In the twin names of fiction and impatience, I bring you Episode 5. There's usually only a small change or two made from the second to third edits, so hopefully not much is missed, though I'll update it when possible.
ReplyDeleteAlso! Episode 5 is a bit of a departure from the story thus far, but fear not, Episode 6 will be a return to your regularly scheduled pony-ing. :]
YES! Trevor shakes you warmly by the hoof for letting one know that chapter 5 was up! Trevor didn't notice many mistakes, but them again, one was trying very hard not to, so who knows?! XD Anyhoof, Trevor hopes you can keep up the amazing work! Trevor awaits chapter 6 eagerly!
ReplyDelete~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
Yay! Glad to hear it. Apparently, I was being too polite and Bronode was busy, there were only a few minor edits which are up now. Thankfully, no real bad tech like in the first episode or continuity errors.
ReplyDeleteSTILL! There is now one thing you may want to see TGAP Trevor, a translation of Ditzy's speech. I've got a fair bit of knowledge about theoretical physics (though not the math) and it's not just gibberish she's spouting. It's translated at the end of the doc for anypony who wants to see it.
Also throwin it up on DA now.
Haha loved chapter 5 :D keep up the good work :D
ReplyDeleteWhere is part 5???
ReplyDeleteThere are links in the chapters at the top and bottom. Just click on Episode 4 and then click "Episode 5>>" in the header.
ReplyDeletewat
ReplyDeleteJay :D episode six :D (that was fast :D )
ReplyDeletegr8 job m8 :D:D
Man, you are just on top of things, aren't ya?
ReplyDeleteOh my god... so many continuities, so little time. While I find this fic to be completely awesome in so many ways, in other ways it is in fact more confusing than the fic Dubble Rainbow. Good job, ol' sport! Keep up the good show!
ReplyDeleteNo offense, but you REALLY need a(nother) pre-reader. I mean, really? You can't even spell Ma'am properly? You have a GREAT story, but there's jut so much that still needs work grammatically and spelling wise.
ReplyDeleteWell, you did promise that the first human being that Ditzy encountered would not be Picard; that being said, Patrick is going to totally hate brony fandom when it's brought to his attention after this mess. Given that he'll also have to contend with Rassillon of Borg, The Master and The TARDIS Trixie, he'll be done with Whovians like dinner.
ReplyDelete@The GREAT and POWERFUL Trevor Actually, he and I had a long discussion about Mam vs. Ma'am and couldn't really keep straight which we were using. I'll probably be changing it back to Ma'am, since I prefer that anyhow. As to the other stuff, well, I'd edit this to novel quality, but each chapter would take 2-3 times longer to come out. *shrug*
ReplyDelete@DreadedCandiru2 Possibly, but that all depends on how it ends up for him!
@Luhood the Zebrony Thank ya! I know, though. As of right now, there's only a thin strand threading it all together. Need to make sure I don't lose that string in the cosmic void.
I really hope you have a plan with all of this, because while its great so far, it has the potential to become an unrecognizable mess of everything fast. By adding in Patrick Stewart and referencing the series Star Trek and Doctor Who, you just fundamentally changed the way the multiverse works. Good luck, I love it but I'm also concerned about possible directions this could go in.
ReplyDelete@Ponies!!! Believe me, I know. I've got a plan, hopefully I'm skilled enough to tie them together well. :)
ReplyDelete@VozDeSuenos
ReplyDeleteNope! U FAIL!!! >:D *trolololo*
Actually, I'm loving this multiverse insanity. Though I have to wonder what DisQord is up to this time. He seems a wee bit more malevolent than usual. It's been a mind-play of mine ever since Season 2 began, thinking of the possibility of Q and Discord really being one and the same, that 'Discord' might simply be one of the games Q plays over his eternity, his ability to be defeated merely due to self-imposed rules depending on whatever world/universe he's gallivanting about it. One thing to note, though, and I hope you remember this about Q's nature: he may torment, afflict, twist, and otherwise make a nuisance of himself; but he never directly kills. However, as his introduction of the Borg to the Enterprise crew points out, his most serious lessons for those he decides to 'teach' are not free from the potential for death and destruction. He's a complex entity, and clearly the most involved of his kind with the mortal realm. This has very interesting internally conflicting possibilities, as the rules he's set for his Equestrian self come into contact with those he's created for other realms. Will he simply abandon those rules?
And I can't even begin to comment on what the Doctor entering in could do! This invites ALL the Doctor Who races in as well! Borg vs Daleks (recall, the Daleks think every other form of life is inferior, plus they are heavily armored and protected by powerful force fields)? Cybermen vs Borg (they'd seemingly get along swimmingly, I think).
And now the Master and Rassiborg? O_O Good god man! What are you setting us up for!! D: What's next, the Nightmare Child?
Wait... Nightmare Moon... Nightmare Child... oh god.. OH GOD!!! D: D: D:
@Alondro Quite a show, one would hope.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutlely, Q has never been malevolent, only tricky and bored.
As for the Nightmare Child, it definitely crossed my mind, but I don't *think* it will happen. We'll have to see how the next few chapters progress, but I think you can see all the parties involved right now unless Master pony and Trixie do something /really/ stupid.
Oh well that's ok then! I mean, what are the odds of Trixie doing something REALLY stupid! Ha ha ha.. ha... ha...
ReplyDeleteWe're utterly boned...
Sorry, didn't get your request for the Spock vs Q thing till just now. Hope it's not to late!
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WdowgUOaV2s
@Hey! Oh Luna, I meant to reply to this days ago. No, you're not too late, though Spock seems to becoming less important to the plot. We'll see how things progress. :]
ReplyDeleteEither way, thanks for the link!
@The GREAT and POWERFUL Trevor All right, sir, you've offered to be a pre-reader. Chapter 7 is in need of some serious editing, you want in?
ReplyDeleteAlso, to the rest of you: This is going to end up only being another few chapters at most. I'm giving consideration to tweaking the end so it continues with more of a TNG / exploration and not-deadly-universe feel after the main arc is done. Thoughts?
It's super relevant to my interest but incomplete...
ReplyDeleteHey there Voz. Just wanted to say I'm really enjoying this fic now. You can see my previous comment above as "Macintosh Apple Brony" from reading the first chapter. I was expecting just a bunch of OC Ponies in a Star Trek setting with some ST, Who, and Mane 6 cameos here and there. Not my cup of tea. But I gave it a chance, just catching up and WOW. THESE are the kinds of stories I love reading. Fun "What if they meet" crossovers.
ReplyDeleteReally looking forward to more chapters. One question though as I'm a bit confused. So "John DeLancie" was really Q/Discord the whole time or did he just pose as the actor and shadily made that "deal"? If he is, I hope you can go more in depth as to posing as a regular human actor playing himself on a TV show (man Q-Ception). If not, IGNORE ME! Keep up the good work either way!
@choppasmith Thank you!
ReplyDeleteYes, well... *evil grin* There will be an answer to that, just not here in the comments.
How to read it? The link takes me to chapter 6 and the link to next chapter is greyed out...
ReplyDelete@Braininthejar Hmmm, so it is. That's why I prefer Google Docs, but they seem to like DA, I'll fix it soon!
ReplyDeleteThis is up to chapter 9 now.
ReplyDelete@DPV111 Indeed it is. It should be finished by now, but Chapter 10's been in editing limbo for about three weeks now and it's kind of kept me from writing 11. I had meant to release all three at the same time, but... *shrug*
ReplyDeleteyay, after all this time... I thought this was dead. Too bad I found it at 1AM. I can't wait to read it.
ReplyDelete@Braininthejar It very nearly was. Between my weekly reading of fan fics on YouTube, painting, work, lack of motivation from some harsher comments, comparing myself to Somber, and Chapter 10 being stuck in editing limbo for the better part of a month... Still, only one chapter left, so it should be finished... eh, sometime? XD
ReplyDeleteI must admit, this looks like a pretty awesome story. I'll probably read it.
ReplyDeleteThanks for finishing. I swore I've commented here, but I don't see any comments by my username??? Oh well... Still, thanks!
ReplyDeleteSo AWESOME!
ReplyDeletePonies in SSSSPPPPAAAAACCCCEEEE!!!!
ReplyDelete@richfiles It took way too long, but I'm glad I could. I hope it was worth the wait. :]
ReplyDeletelol can anyone else image pinkie or twilight going all like "Space gotta see it all SPAAAAACCCCCEEE!!!"
ReplyDelete@Brian Waterman Bronode and I actually edited that out somewhere... Mostly because it didn't fit the tone of the fic, but I can definitely see Pinkie shouting SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE~!
ReplyDelete@VozDeSuenos DisQord returns to his little pocket world, giggling madly oevr the chaos he created and the countless lives turned upside down.
ReplyDeleteBut somepony's in his throne... "Hello DisQord. I'm P, and you've been veeeeerrrry naughty."
P banishes DisQord to MLP 3.5 FOREEEVEERRRR!!! >:}
@Alondro Bwahahaha, that's amazing. That's absolutely where Q belongs.
ReplyDelete@VozDeSuenos *P wipes cosmic cube dust off his hands* Well, I couldn't let him get off scott-free after such a massive transtemporal interdimensional fiasco, could I?
ReplyDeleteYou have no idea what a pain it was to plaster up all the cracks in the quantum fabric of the multiverse and undo the knots in the web of fate afterward!
I was kind. You should have seen what the rest of the Q continuum wanted to do to him: Force him to watch "Twilight" while Justin Bieber's "Baby" played in the background. *shudder* I'm simply not that cruel.
@Alondro Oh man, you really do want to torture Q, don't you? XD
ReplyDeletePoor, poor Q. Would a dimension like that actually shock him sane?
Dear Princess Celestia
ReplyDeleteI learned a very important lesson today. Actions are what define someone, therefore people who cannot act, like those who are crippled or disabled, are worthless. I'm not sure anymore why we even keep them around.
I also learned that the Doctor is the best person ever, because his actions are the only ones that really matter. Everyone else's actions are just extensions of his own schemes and plans since he has ensured that we will all do what he needs us to do. This is why every mare that knows him is totally in love with him. He's totally the best.
Your Faithful Student
@icekatze Dear icekatze, FINALLY somepony gets it! You have no idea how long I've been trying to get ponies interested in eugenics! We must purify the pony races!
ReplyDeleteEspecially of those filthy mud ponies.
Sincerely,
Princess Trollestia. >:3