[Adventure] "A gripping tale, portraying the sinister hoof behind our favorite background ponies."-Pre Reader #6
Author: Feedback
Description: Set shortly after the end of season one, upon discovering a conspiracy enveloping the entire world of Equestria, Caesar, a businesscolt and entrepreneur, assembles a team of ponies with the mission of ending the lie and bringing down The Game Master, its faceless ringleader. All the central characters, including Caesar, are background ponies from the series, most being fan favourites.My Little Clony (New: Act 5 Part 12!)
Additional Tags: Clone, dystopia, with, background, ponies
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ReplyDeleteneato
ReplyDeleteFinally, a story centred around the various background ponies!
ReplyDeleteYAY!
This should be good.
ReplyDeleteMeh, not interested.
ReplyDeleteWait, what'd you say? Vinyl Scratch is in it?
Open those damn links now. I've got reading to do.
@Anonymous Don't forget Derpy!
ReplyDeleteOh look, it's the roman pony again.
ReplyDeleteTrixe and Vinyl? Really? *reads ch 3* Ok... I'll run with you on this.
ReplyDeleteAre you aware there are a TON of clones in Fall Weather Friends? During the Iron Pony competition, I counted 9 or so Bon-Bons sitting in the stands at one point, and just as many of another pony.
ReplyDeleteOnce again, a writer has taken a minor glitch (if even that), and made it into a relatively straight-faced story. What separates this from Sy Clops and company is the apparent grand conspiracy, as well as the considerable intrigue.
ReplyDeleteAlso, Derpy's the game master. I'm calling it.
@ToonNinja Which Derpy? :P
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ReplyDeleteYou are probably correct. I have a feeling that the "game master" will turn out to be somepony whom they least expect, and Derpy is a likely candidate. Then again, for all we know, ANYONE could be the "game master", even the narrator himself (which would make him a very unreliable narrator)!
~AppleTank
ReplyDeleteThat explains the clones of Caesar. Back to the point, this is an awesome story. Nice plot, and that cliffhanger at chap 5. That was suspenseful. And the first game master has just been revealed. Keep on going, bro
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteI don't think he IS a game master, it seems more like he's an employee of him, or at the very least an enforcer of his rules.
Why is Derpy a unicorn? :O
ReplyDeleteI lay odds that the Gamemaster is either Princess Celestia or Pinkie Pie.
ReplyDeleteMy guess? Doctor Whooves is the GM, because his special talent is time. By which I mean, he has the mystical quicksave key and is therefore a PC.
ReplyDeleteMy guess is that the GM is someone that nobody would suspect of complex thought...someone who hides her intellect underneath a cowboy hat. blonde mane, exaggerated hick accent and yammering about how they don't need no fancy mathematics, sugarcube.
ReplyDeleteis thier going to be more
ReplyDeleteA team of badasses, I'm like where this is going. MOAR, PLEASE!
ReplyDelete*reads chapter 5*
ReplyDeleteCeaser really should've thought about trying to peg the monitors like that doctor first, rather than trying to go straight for the head. He's a smart pony; he should've figured that they'd need a way to find those who spot their clones, and that doctors (medical doctors, not THE Doctor) were well placed to do that. Ah well, even smart ponies make mistakes.
Incidentally, is this fic inspired by the movie Dark City? Because it's really similar in a lot of ways. I just hope the ending won't be as anti-climactic.
Hey, this isn't a story I'm following, but it looks intere- Great and Powerful TRIXIE tag
ReplyDelete*Immediately starts reading*
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ReplyDeleteIT UPDATED! Oh sweet Celestia it updated! Thanks goodness, it've been a shame if a story with such an awesome premise were to completely die off.
Seriously? You leave us off with a cliffhanger like that?
ReplyDeleteSo glad to see this story is being continued! :D
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