[Sad][Shipping] Short story morning I guess! Also I'm cheating and using an image from the drawfriend later today, cause I'm out of Luna/Cele images. You guys write way too many stories about these two!
Author: AmberWings / AmberAustin90
Description: On the longest night, a thousand years ago, Nightmare Moon was banished. However, she wasn't always known by that name. One colt, who lit one light, and his love that shown for a thousand years for the one he knew as Princess Luna.The Legend of the Lights
Additional Tags: Love, loss, endurance, remembrance
28 comments:
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ReplyDeleteAHHHHH!!!! I'm crying!!!
ReplyDeleteThat was pretty sad. It conveyed its message pretty well, although not quite as well written. Overall, 4 stars.
ReplyDeleteNo one is truly dead so long as someone remembers them...
ReplyDeleteSad Face :(
ReplyDeleteShort & Sweet, very nice.
I would have given it 5 stars if I started crying, but I didn't so it only gets 4. Still a good story though.
ReplyDeleteShown*
ReplyDeleteShouldn't that be shone or am I misreading this description?
This was quite an amazing story. It shows that fillies and colts alike loved the night that Luna brought, and missed her whilst she was banished. I myself am more of a night owl, so I found this story quite touching and able to relate to in a sense.
ReplyDeleteGreat story. The only thing that took me out of it was a typo. Flayed to rest.
ReplyDeleteINCEST!
ReplyDelete@Casper
ReplyDeleteWincest?
I has a mega sad.
ReplyDeleteManly Tears
ReplyDeleteI love these stories. I love you guys.
I'm sorry, I can't see through the tears.
ReplyDeleteSo touching
ReplyDeleteWell to me a good short story has about the same impact as a good long one. The story, no matter the length, is still a story. As long as it can cause an emotional response from the reader(s), thats all that matters. I will save this for a later read, I'm wrapped up in 5 diff stories at the moment, waiting for more chapters to them. I'm a sucker for these kinds of stories, but I'll have to suck it up and wait to get to this one. I just don't know if I can take any sad stories right now . . . just after re-reading nightfall to catch up to a chapter I missed somehow. Oh how i hate them . . . and its only from the emotional tearing I feel while reading them, but each chapter is great.
ReplyDeleteSO, i say keep the short stories coming. Im at the point, where i don't care any longer about the content. Pony story is Pony, thats all I need to know. I still have a few lines i draw at, guys gotta have standards you know.
A 'Complete' tag on a luna shipping, THAT MUST BE A MISTAKE, will start reading.
ReplyDeleteI don't get it.
ReplyDelete*cries near a lone light on a moonless night when it can show even brighter*
ReplyDeleteWell, damn. That was a short and powerful little piece.
ReplyDeleteWait, they... flayed him to rest? Tell me that's a typo.
ReplyDeleteThis was cute, though that's all I can really say. It's a wonderful idea, at least.
I must say, as an avid reader of classical literature, you captured the spirit of the classic story teller very well in this story. From the way you described the scenes to the allusions of Greek mythology you did a supurb job. Also might I say you have a very great vocabulary! Anyway I absolutly loved the story, and the way you handled it. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteIt was beautiful. I cried. I don't know what else to say.
ReplyDeleteamazingly written. im crying, its a beautiful story.
ReplyDelete@CasperThere is Princess Luna, and there is Princess Incestia, lol, but the story was short, but sad, and also taught a lesson about life, which is that ponies do everything, apparently, even making stars.
ReplyDeleteThis is, by far, the most beautifully written short story I've seen yet. I loved it. :)
ReplyDeletethat last line Luna said... Just got me right there.
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