• Story: Kindness

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    Author: Twilight Snarkle
    Description: What would life be like for a certain shy pegasus if Twilight hadn't decided to stay?
    Kindness

    Additional Tags: Solitude, Sadness, Friendship, Appreciation, Hope
    reede, 15. juuli 2011 op
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    37 kommentaari:

    1. A Terrible Person15. juuli 2011, kell 14:02

      I don't really know what this story is about, but with a picture like that I have to read it.

      VastaKustuta
    2. TenchiFreak515. juuli 2011, kell 14:08

      Decided to stay when? After the events of the second episode completed?

      I'm intrigued, but I'm backlogged by so much that I would like to know a bit more about the setting.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne15. juuli 2011, kell 14:11

      Not bad, but I don't think this would happen.

      Even if Twilight didn't stay, I'm sure either Rarity, AJ, RD, or Pinkie would visit her every so often.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Dave Mustang, the cynical Brony15. juuli 2011, kell 14:13

      Vague description.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Patty15. juuli 2011, kell 14:14

      I enjoyed reading this. The separate emphasis on how each element changed Luna was a nice touch, but it was so very sad that Angel wasn't there. :'(

      VastaKustuta
    6. kwj15. juuli 2011, kell 14:14

      stay after defeating Nightmare moon??
      or after other events??
      any way or the other i'll still read it i am curios

      VastaKustuta
    7. 7heSama15. juuli 2011, kell 14:15

      Damnit, I cried again. I think that is partly due to just reading that other story about Spike, and also playing that sappy music somelink linked in the dA comments, but I cried regardless.

      Well written.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Valmir_R0yalGuArd15. juuli 2011, kell 14:15

      Hmmm, this goes on my list of stories to read eventually Snarkle. Right now my OC is being constructed with the help of 2 artists. One of them begins work on my designs soon, the other has already completed a base armor design, I have told him what to modify on the design, as it is only a sketch. I'm so happy... I swear I'm the first paladin pony Ive ever seen or heard of >.>. Anyway, Your stores are great and I cant wait to read this :).

      VastaKustuta
    9. 7heSama15. juuli 2011, kell 14:16

      I liked the special inclusion of Angel. He is one of my favorite side characters.

      VastaKustuta
    10. A Terrible Person15. juuli 2011, kell 14:18

      Aww, this was so sad, but I loved it.

      For those of you who were wondering (very minor SPOILERS), yes, the premise was that Twilight left after the second episode was over.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Baree15. juuli 2011, kell 14:22

      Yeah, good story. Short, well written. Perhaps slightly questionable not even Rainbow Dash visits her. Since they knew each other as fillies. But its not impossible, we don't even really know if they were friends. It seems more likely from the episodes we've seen that Fluttershy and Rarity already were friends before Twilight arrived.

      Anyway, doesn't matter. Again, short but good story.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne15. juuli 2011, kell 14:22

      This makes me think of Lunashy shipping.
      Somepony get to work on that!

      VastaKustuta
    13. 7heSama15. juuli 2011, kell 14:26

      @Baree
      I agree, seems like she would have had the occasional visit from Rainbow Dash? Too busy flying up a storm I guess.

      VastaKustuta
    14. Marrock15. juuli 2011, kell 14:29

      I can't imagine them not staying in touch somehow, even without Twilight there... heck, you'd think that at least Celestia would prod Twilight to keep in contact with the friends the princess insisted she make.

      VastaKustuta
    15. A Brony Boy15. juuli 2011, kell 14:39

      with art like that, you'd think it was a shipping story.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Anonüümne15. juuli 2011, kell 14:40

      Great story with a very interesting concept. It's nice to see an AU fic that's not some variation of "Nightmare Moon wins" (though those aren't necessarily bad either).

      I wonder if the author will write about the other 5 as well?

      VastaKustuta
    17. Octavia15. juuli 2011, kell 14:52

      Aww, that was such a heart warming tale. It nearly brought tears into my eyes. It had a good plot and setting, quotes, and a very great vocabulary! I can kind of relate to how Fluttershy was feeling in this. :)

      VastaKustuta
    18. Anonüümne15. juuli 2011, kell 14:59

      Short, Sweet, and Beautiful. I loved it.

      VastaKustuta
    19. Chronicler15. juuli 2011, kell 15:08

      To clarify, yes, this is an alternate history from the end of Episode 2, where Twilight requests to stay in Ponyville. In this universe, she doesn't have the nerve to ask.
      As for the rest of the ponies, they drifted apart after a time.
      I -am- considering writing about the other five ponies, eventually. But first I have another story to complete.

      Thanks to everyone here for their input and kind words.

      VastaKustuta
    20. Anonüümne15. juuli 2011, kell 15:09

      Bawwwww

      It would've been nice to get something about why Rainbow Dash or Pinkie Pie, in particular, didn't drop by every now and then, but.... bawwwwww

      VastaKustuta
    21. LlamaLlumps15. juuli 2011, kell 15:47

      WeLl pLlayed, weLl pLlayed indeed. Llama approves and recommends.

      VastaKustuta
    22. Valtz15. juuli 2011, kell 17:28

      Short and sweet is right. I almost cried.

      Now i'm wondering if we'll see a series of stories of how the others ended up doing if twilight returned instead of staying. Twilight herself would probably try to make new friends. Though not have was as close as the others were.

      VastaKustuta
    23. Chronicler15. juuli 2011, kell 17:50

      @Stephen Cawking
      Without becoming mega-grim, that's close to what I imagine. Remember, it took ALL of Pinkie's friends to help her out of Pinkamena mode. What happens when the group has drifted apart, and she begins to doubt? Anyway, this is neither the time nor place...
      Llama, Stephen, Valtz - Thank each of you, sincerely.

      VastaKustuta
    24. TenchiFreak515. juuli 2011, kell 19:29

      I'm not sure about how much I believe that the ponies would all drift apart, but on the other hand I'm not sure of any particular reason why it isn't possible.



      The story was quite good, though. I liked the inclusion of Angel, and I'd give it 5/5.

      VastaKustuta
    25. lesserpoet15. juuli 2011, kell 19:52

      What a lovely vignette. Short, sweet, and with a finish of soft tears. Bravo!

      Thank you.

      VastaKustuta
    26. Darth Equus15. juuli 2011, kell 20:00

      The appearance of Luna was a teensy bit of a Deus Ex Machina, but very well executed, so I can't complain there.

      Loved the description of how Luna was affected more deeply about the Elements of Harmony than simply being broken out of being NM, and the way she approaches F-shy and explains everything makes her feel mature. Simple and beautiful.

      Liked Celestia's conclusion.

      Doesn't have to be a mega-epic story to be good. Well done.

      VastaKustuta
    27. Present Perfect15. juuli 2011, kell 20:51

      This is pretty much the perfect story.

      I can't say anything more, except that I would LOVE to see what happened to the other four under the same circumstances.

      VastaKustuta
    28. Friendly Uncle15. juuli 2011, kell 21:57

      You made me wibble, you jerk. :P

      Seriously well done. The depth of sadness was impressive, and the relief I felt when Luna showed up was enormous. Short and sweet.

      VastaKustuta
    29. Saddlesoap15. juuli 2011, kell 22:46

      This was quite a touching piece.

      I found FS's delivery a bit off - she seemed too wordy or stilted at times - but the whole picture was still well-painted, so to speak.

      I could certainly imagine similar AU stories with the other Mane Ponies sans-Twilight.

      VastaKustuta
    30. Ray J16. juuli 2011, kell 03:35

      I liked it alot. Well done.

      VastaKustuta
    31. Anonüümne18. juuli 2011, kell 17:50

      I shed a tear or two, it's very well written. Thanks!

      VastaKustuta
    32. Chronicler18. juuli 2011, kell 18:43

      Thank you all.
      I worried about the Deus Ex, but then I thought who better to help Fluttershy, and who most likely to be listening, than Luna? And I felt better. =)
      I like sad, sweet stories, but I think my next one will be different. I'm working on the Pinkie and Twilight angles at the moment, and will be sure to share them later.

      VastaKustuta
    33. Ditzy Derp19. juuli 2011, kell 04:14

      That was perfect and I must admit, I shed a tear towards the end. I can understand just wanting a friend for friendship's sake which made the story so much more beautiful.

      VastaKustuta
    34. Anonüümne5. august 2011, kell 03:31

      Angel? Dead?... Yessssss....

      VastaKustuta
    35. danegraphics9. august 2011, kell 11:18

      Wow... this touched my soul... thank you. :)

      VastaKustuta
    36. Chronicler9. august 2011, kell 15:13

      Ditzy Derp - Thank you. Most of my stories have a personal seed.
      Anon - uh... you're welcome? *backs away*
      danegraphics - *hugs*

      VastaKustuta
    37. Nick R.12. detsember 2011, kell 08:16

      Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta

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