• Story: The Glue Maker

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    [Crossover][Random] So... Bill Clinton was on NPR a while back and mentioned a villain, and now he finally has a story.   All welcome Krastos the Gluemaker!

    Author: Walkinix
    Description: On an unprecedented adventure, Harry the Bear finds himself interlocked in a fateful journey with Fluttershy to help save her friend Rainbow Dash from forces unknown from within the Everfree Forest.
    The Glue Maker

    Additional Tags: "Sometimes, mistakes happen for a reason"
    Sunday, July 17, 2011 op
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    28 comments:

    1. AnonymousJuly 17, 2011 at 10:01 PM

      first?

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    2. AsgardJuly 17, 2011 at 10:02 PM

      *Looks at title* Did he re- *Reads description* Yes... Yes he did... Bill Clinton has created something far more evil than he has anticipated...

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    3. AnonymousJuly 17, 2011 at 10:03 PM

      Oh god.

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    4. Dave Mustang, the cynical BronyJuly 17, 2011 at 10:05 PM

      Why is that bear dressed as Hunter S. Thompson?

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    5. A Terrible PersonJuly 17, 2011 at 10:05 PM

      What...
      Oh, I have got to rEad this!

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    6. BasharoonskisJuly 17, 2011 at 10:07 PM

      Ahaha, I love Krastos' little pink apron thing. Hilarious concept, definitely gonna give this a read.

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    7. moerkoetJuly 17, 2011 at 10:08 PM

      GLUE IS SUCH AN EVIL WEAPON

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    8. AnonymousJuly 17, 2011 at 10:14 PM

      Glue making

      Cupcake making

      Which is worse?

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    9. SlyWitJuly 17, 2011 at 10:16 PM

      @Anonymous

      Dress making, easy.

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    10. AnonymousJuly 17, 2011 at 10:27 PM

      Bill Clinton: Great Brony or Greatest Brony?

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    11. DSNesmithJuly 17, 2011 at 10:29 PM

      Harry the bear makes an appearance? I love the author already.

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    12. Chester the cynical grownupJuly 17, 2011 at 10:30 PM

      NOBODY LOVES ME :(

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    13. Retired FC1July 17, 2011 at 10:32 PM

      Actually, it was the writers for "Wait, Wait, Don't Tell Me" that created that villain. Bill's comment was, "Well, if he isn't, he ought to be!".

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    14. AnonymousJuly 17, 2011 at 10:34 PM

      Oh dear Celestia...

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    15. AnonymousJuly 17, 2011 at 10:36 PM

      Considering the topic this was actually a pretty good fic.

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    16. Mather MaddoxJuly 17, 2011 at 10:38 PM

      Meh, it was okay, if a bit verbose.

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    17. PathoJuly 17, 2011 at 11:13 PM

      Yes! I've been waiting for something like this. :D

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    18. Amethyst AirJuly 18, 2011 at 12:01 AM

      Love the ending!!!

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    19. Silent SolaceJuly 18, 2011 at 12:16 AM

      Oh shit.... Krastos is back.... Well back to the bunker.

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    20. YuriJuly 18, 2011 at 12:37 AM

      Harry is a true Gentlebeare!

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    21. ShoutingRyanJuly 18, 2011 at 7:32 AM

      That was just... the best ever.

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    22. WalkinixJuly 18, 2011 at 8:39 AM

      @Asgard, Anon 5
      Hahaha I couldn't let something like this not resurface in the Brony Community!

      @Dave Mustang, the cynical Brony
      I didn't draw the picture, but I do enjoy it! Props to @neko-rei on deviantART :)

      @A Terrible Person
      That's the appeal I was going for: Surprise the audience just enough so that their curiosity drives them to read hahaha. But I'd like to thank you for reading it :)

      @Basharoonskis
      I know I do too! Thanks for reading, my good fellow!

      @Marcoooootje1, Anon 3
      I'd say it's a few steps below cupcakes hahaha!

      @Slywit
      icwutudidther :P

      @Anon 4
      I'd say greatest: He likes ponies AND he hooks up with the ladies! He's got the best of both worlds!

      @DSNesmith
      Thanks, I love you too! It's bronies like you that drive me to write!

      @Chester the cynical grownup
      hugs?

      @The Dread Pirate Roberts
      That's good enough for me :)

      @Anon 6
      I like it when people tell me they enjoy my work! Thanks a bundle!

      @Homfrog
      Everyone's entitled to their own opinion, but I do appreciate your criticisms!

      @Wayde
      Hahaha yeah, I'm really surprised I was the first one to jump on the bandwagon!

      @Amethyst Air
      Thank you! I tried to be as suspenseful as I could, but I think watchers of episode 25 knew how it was to end ultimately, hahaha!

      @Silent Solace
      That's right: Shit's goin' down!

      @Yuri
      I know! That's what I loved the most about writing his character: He's just such kind-hearted soul!

      @Shouting Ryan
      I am truly humbled to receive such powerful praise on my work! Thanks a million! I love bronies like you!

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    23. Present PerfectJuly 18, 2011 at 8:48 AM

      First thought: KRASTOS YES. Second thought: HARRY THE BEAR ARE YOU KIDDING ME. So, my interest is piqued!

      Umm, so why would Celestia kidnap a bear? I'm pretty sure she could just ask him to come along, it seems remarkably out of character. Absolutely nothing she's doing in this opening scene makes sense.

      This is not doing anything for me. Harry's a decent character, but the story's taking too long to go anywhere and the writing's a little pedantic, what with carefully explaining everything and all. Except, you know, why Celestia kidnapped a bear and then dropped him in the Everfree instead of just ASKING him for help. Not even trying to ask!

      The "chicken goes into the forest" plot has already been done. Same chicken, even.

      I can't finish this. The writing is setting my teeth on edge. The story just needs to be completely rethought, in my opinion. I'm sad that this is the first attempt at making Krastos a fanon staple.

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    24. MelodiaJuly 18, 2011 at 9:32 AM

      As soon as I saw that Harry's cave was more like a house, I laughed. And then I read. And I laughed.

      And any story with Elizabeak has to be a good one.

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    25. MarrockJuly 18, 2011 at 10:25 AM

      @The Dread Pirate Roberts And Lauren Faust agreed with him.

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    26. ItsTheWhinyGuysJuly 22, 2011 at 2:23 PM

      I love how well-read and educated Harry sounded. Man, this was awesome!

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    27. A Terrible PersonJuly 25, 2011 at 3:22 PM

      Finally got around to reading this (I was busy when I made that first comment, but i did fulfill my promise!), and it was... well, decent. It could use some editing, and a few parts could probably have been rewritten. I still enjoyed the story immensely, though, even with those faults. Mad props for using Krastos and Harry both in a story.

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    28. La BarataAugust 5, 2011 at 11:15 PM

      WHY IS THIS NOT 6 STARS.

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