[Comedy][Random][Shipping] The pre-readers wanted a cool quote to go with it, but couldn't think of anything worthy, so I grabbed a pony:
"It's...um...nice..." -Fluttershy
There you have it!
Author: Professor Shrinky Fröd
Description: Twilight has decided that it's high time to figure out what's going on with Pinkie Pie, and there's only one way to do it!Five Minutes
Additional Tags: Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie, DJ P0N-3, Spike
50 comments:
Those three tags always make for... interesting stories.
ReplyDeleteMy body is ready.
ReplyDeleteOkay, wow. That was a trip, and no mistake. One of the most deserving stories for the "Random" tag I have ever read.
ReplyDeleteMy mind couldn't take it.
ReplyDelete"The flesh was willing, but the spirit was weak."
This was so deliciously random and awesome. Really helped that it was Twinkie Pie shipping too. Thats always great.
ReplyDeleteI can think of few better way to retire to bed that reading something as ridiculously amazing as this story. Tomorrow I feel I should delve into the random tag a bit more... may Luna have mercy on my mind.
ReplyDeleteAlso, great story. The hollow leg bit had my in stitches.
Good stuff. Trippy, and quite believable for Pinkie Pie's mindscape.
ReplyDeleteI'd love to hear the actual song that was being played, though. :D
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ReplyDeleteWhat just happened and why do I feel like it somehow made sence just because Pinkie was involved?
Someone needs to make a Psychonauts crossover now with all the ponies going to psychic summer camp. Twilight can be Raz with the rest of the cast being filled with all the others. Whichever one takes the role of Lili whould be shipped with Twilight, of course.
ReplyDeleteMy brain....hurts....DAMN FOURTH WALL
ReplyDeleteSo I finally broke down and decided to read a shipping fic and WHAT THE HELL>
ReplyDeleteI completely lost it at "It tasted like grapes!"
I think the best part of this is Pinkie manipulating the sheer madness of her own subconscious without even trying.
ReplyDeleteTruly, Pink Pony Is Best Pony.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHis how I feel after reading that fic... in a good way. I don't believe it was nearly random enough but it's impossible to write down Pinkie's mind so I suppose the author did a great job xD. Now if you'll excuse me everypony... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WE'RE ALL DOOMED AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
ReplyDeleteThat was delightfully weird and unsettling.
ReplyDeleteMissed the mark on a couple things, but overall it was certainly an entertaining read. Nailed Pinkie pretty much on the head. Cheers
ReplyDeleteStupid Sexy Pinkie.....
ReplyDeleteA fanfiction that I actually saw elsewhere before looking here? I'm proud.
ReplyDeleteEeyup. I am now SURE that Shipping, Comedy, and Random are my FAVORITE TAGS *EVER*. End of story. good day sir.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that everybody's enjoying it so much! Now I just have to hope that my next few efforts can live up to expectations, despite them not being quite so... out there.
ReplyDeleteThere is a YouTube video of the song being performed live at Furry Fiesta in 2009. Not the easiest to hear everything, but....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pobms9Qp01I
Amazing.
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteI don't suppose I might be able to get some clarification on what you thought I missed the mark on? Always looking to improve. :)
Also, here's that link in a way that actually clicks through!
Five Minutes by Sub-Level 03
I lost it somewhere around the magnets line.
ReplyDeleteI don't think there's ever been a more appropriate symbol for Twilight's mind.
IT SPREADS
ReplyDeleteIT SPREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEADS
This was okay.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comedy story Seth!
ReplyDeletemagnets how they work?
ReplyDeleteInteresting story, pinkie pie didn't seem crazy enough, but that's just my take on her. Well written, and interesting idea, so keep up the good work.
With Tangerine Trees, and Marmalade skies...
ReplyDeleteSpike's reaction when he found out what Twilight was planning was perfect by itself, but the fact that it kept coming back up made me lose it.
ReplyDeleteDOOOOOMED! Oh Spike... lol
ReplyDeleteI don't get into shipping much, but this was pretty darn good.
Twilight is now grape candy.
Lucky she didn't go deep enough to find Pinkamena Diane Pie. (shudders)
ReplyDeleteYeah, I was hoping Twilight would find Pinkamena.
ReplyDeleteMaybe that's the bit you missed.
“A gateway to places beyond time and space that’ll unleash overly amorous tentacle-y beasties on all of Ponyville? Oh, that’d be the best!”
ReplyDelete“Pin- What?!?” Twilight asked, turning to look at her bouncing friend, who had somehow found the time to dress up in a white blouse, blue skirt, and matching scarf while she wasn’t looking. “Pinkie, stop doing that!”
“Gomen,” Pinkie pouted.
I spat my drink out at that, I was laughing so hard. I wasn't expecting that at all.
Random and fluffy and awesome. I love the statue of Pinkie and the magnet.
ReplyDeletePinkie is best pony. Me gusta
ReplyDeleteAh, yes, as I've stated before, good stuff! I had a blast reading it.
ReplyDeleteSUB LEVEL 3.
ReplyDelete"Five minutes" is a song title reference to sublevel 03.
Just want to say that I caught it, as soon as I saw the lyrics.
...who the hell listens to sub level 03, though?
Poor Twilight, she will never be the same again.
ReplyDeleteWow. I never expected to see a MLP fic inspired by a Sub-Level 03 song! I'm still reading it, no rating yet, but you do win 20 Internets for referencing SL03. :D
ReplyDeleteOK, that was highly entertaining, and the imagery fit with the lyrics very well. (Did I mention this is one of my favorite songs? <3)
ReplyDeleteTwiPie isn't one of my usual ships, but it worked very well here! (Frankly, I can see 'friends with benefits' being the typical extent of Pinkie's relationships; she seems the type who would party with anypony. ^^) All my stars, you have them.
Cuddle Barn. I think that's all I need to know. I wondered about the inclusion of Vinyl Scratch, that seems completely out of nowhere, so I'm glad there was at least a late explanation.
ReplyDeleteQuantum cupcakes! Someone needs to make this happen. You write crazy fourth-wall-breaking Pinkie spookily well. I'm absolutely astonished at this story's free flow despite the chaotic and utterly surreal events occuring in the dream sequence. I think even if I wasn't enjoying this, I'd have to give it 5 stars for craft alone!
This was really cute as hell. I think it's the first TwiPie fic I've ever read, and it worked out really great in the end. Like I said, kind of blown away by the writing on top of that.
@ItsTheWhinyGuys
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks very much for your advice! :)
I did try to tone Twilight down a smidge in the beginning; seems I'm the only person who sees her going full mad scientist. ;)
Dude. Proper name for the ship is obviously "Twinkie" or "Twinkie Pie".
ReplyDeleteBetter than "Pielight Sparkle."
While I usually tend towards more involved, longer fics, this was exactly as long as it needed to be to do what it meant to do.
ReplyDeleteAs for what that WAS? Pinkie Pie. That's the full answer.
No seriously though, lovely little nibble-fic!
I'M JUMPIN OUT THE WINDOW WITH THIS ONE
ReplyDeleteSpoiler! Beware!
ReplyDeleteThis was great! just... holy crap that was funny. I'm always very weary of "shipping". in fact, this is the first one I've read, but it wasn't the creepy thing I'd thought it would be! Twi is my fav character, Pinkie a debatable tie for second, and you nailed the characters! (made me go re-watch fav episode 15)
However, someone explain this to me: “A gateway to places beyond time and space that’ll unleash overly amorous tentacle-y beasties on all of Ponyville? Oh, that’d be the best!”
“Pin- What?!?” Twilight asked, turning to look at her bouncing friend, who had somehow found the time to dress up in a white blouse, blue skirt, and matching scarf while she wasn’t looking. “Pinkie, stop doing that!”
“Gomen,” Pinkie pouted.
Whaaaat?
So this story was so delightfully funny and random I can't wait for more! Keep up the good work! I lost it at,"First we need to jump out the window!" "Wait what?" I could just IMAGINE Twilight's expression when saying that lol.
ReplyDeleteMe gusta.
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteIt's a reference to Japanese hentai ("pervert") anime. They typically feature demonic creatures that have large numbers of tentacles which they use in an... overly-amorous fashion (to use Pinkie's terms) on Japanese schoolgirls. The outfit Pinkie is wearing here is a Japanese high school girl's uniform. And "Gomen" is Japanese for "Sorry."
“A gateway to places beyond time and space that’ll unleash overly amorous tentacle-y beasties on all of Ponyville? Oh, that’d be the best!”
ReplyDeletePFFFFHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
@Silverspot
ReplyDeleteGot it in one!
And the outfit is supposed to be the pony equivalent of the stereotypical Japanese schoolgirl uniform.