• Story: Continuum (Update Part 3!)

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    Author: Lady Moondancer
    Description: Twilight and her friends are lost in a strange land. This is a tale of leaky faucets, secret parchments, exploration, and a volcano full of dinosaurs which will henceforth be known as "Sir Volcano-Full-of-Dinosaurs-Not-Appearing-in-This-Story."
    Continuum Part 1
    Continuum Part 2
    Continuum Part 3 (New!)

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    Additional Tags: Adventure, Humor, Wandering
    Wednesday, August 3, 2011 op
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    31 comments:

    1. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 2:00 PM

      ehh? first?

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    2. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 2:03 PM

      second!!!

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    3. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 2:03 PM

      Third.

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    4. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 2:05 PM

      ...fourth?

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    5. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 2:06 PM

      Sounds like a monty python parody.

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    6. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 2:11 PM

      sixth

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    7. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 2:24 PM

      seventh

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    8. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 2:26 PM

      eigth lol

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    9. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 2:26 PM

      You guys should stop playing the counting game and read the story. It's actually pretty good.

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    10. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 3:00 PM

      LM is actually one of the best MLP fanfic authors around. Her stories usually involve rather, ah, interesting takes on G1 or G3 ponies. This is her first work with MLP:FiM. If it approaches the level of her other works (On FF.Net) then this will be one amazingly awesome fic indeed!

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    11. ThattagenJuly 31, 2011 at 3:11 PM

      Two winter fics in a row today? I'm starting to feel a bit of a chill...

      This is really good. I'm looking forward to more!

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    12. Iczer-fourJuly 31, 2011 at 5:59 PM

      Nyaa!

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    13. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 6:19 PM

      Am I the only one that noticed the Monty Python reference in the description?

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    14. Al-1701July 31, 2011 at 6:46 PM

      I'm still bummed we get no more dinosaurs.

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    15. C. Theron VulpinJuly 31, 2011 at 6:58 PM

      Equestria and Dinosaurs. Good waste of a perfectly good plot device there.
      Still, I like the dry humor in this tale. Maybe I should research this fellow's other stuff.

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    16. Colegate55July 31, 2011 at 7:03 PM

      Dang, this prose was good. Enjoyable story so far too.

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    17. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 8:15 PM

      @Anonymous
      I'll agree to that. This is one of the most well written, interesting, and just all around really freaking good fics I've ever read!

      I can't get over the writing! its just so stupendous! Its prose at its finest, beautifully written (did I mention that?) and considering the context, this gets a big 'ol 5/5 any day, on good writing alone, not just it being MLP!

      More! UPDATE! go!

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    18. banjo2EJuly 31, 2011 at 9:50 PM

      Great story so far. Reads almost like a Terry Pratchett novel.

      ...

      ALL IN FAVOR OF NAMING THE DINOSAUR THAT FOLLOWED THE MANE 6 "PTERRY" SAY I

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    19. AnonymousJuly 31, 2011 at 10:36 PM

      Enjoyable story so far, but still quite early in the scheme of things for me to judge and rate.

      Keep it up :D

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    20. PattyAugust 1, 2011 at 8:45 AM

      Great work so far, and I'm definitely watching out for updates! I hope everypony's alright. D:

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    21. AnonymousAugust 3, 2011 at 1:57 AM

      Yay! It keeps getting better. Also, did I detect Pratchettness? I thought I detected Pratchetness, but I could be mistaken.

      The plot would be perfectly fine without the great humor and delightful prose; the fact that all three have been combined pleases me no small amount.

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    22. CirrusAugust 3, 2011 at 10:12 PM

      Moar pony wants moar!

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    23. C. Theron VulpinAugust 3, 2011 at 10:18 PM

      Oh, this is very much a Prachett-style work :D

      So much said and yet so little accomplished in Chapter 3... Ah well, I think I can put the pieces together to fill in the gaps.

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    24. AnonymousAugust 3, 2011 at 10:40 PM

      oh dear god its brilliant!
      Chapter 3 may have been short, but it was worth every second!

      Why, oh why does this not have a comedy tag! this is funny, well written stuff! Write a damn book already Lady Moondancer, I need to buy it!

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    25. AnonymousAugust 3, 2011 at 10:46 PM

      This is excellent

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    26. ThattagenAugust 3, 2011 at 10:52 PM

      I hope to see more of the clever prose I saw in chapter 3. I liked it better than the other two chapters combined! It has a distinct Pratchetty flavor (which tastes a lot like biscuits).

      The exchange with the pterodactyl was first ordinary, then hilarious. Immediately followed by straight foreshadowing. Love it!

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    27. Mather MaddoxAugust 4, 2011 at 12:52 AM

      I don't really understand all of it (perhaps it's because I've never read a Pratchett novel and don't plan to), but I do like it very much. Well-written and humorous. I expect great things from this story.

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    28. AnonymousAugust 4, 2011 at 1:24 AM

      Adventure! Comedy! Drama! Suspense!
      WONDERFUL story; I very eagerly look forward to the next chapter.

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    29. nemrynAugust 4, 2011 at 2:24 PM

      Pedant Alert: You probably mean 'concurrently' instead of 'consecutively', when describing the pterodactyl's side of the conversation.

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    30. ClockworkchaosAugust 6, 2011 at 10:47 AM

      Interesting, I look forward to reading more, and I have to admit, this line.

      Second, that pterodactyls have a very efficient language.

      Is what sent it straight to 5 stars

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    31. JoeyH3September 24, 2011 at 8:31 PM

      I like this story. Will there be any more chapters, or is it over?

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