• Story: Come to Your Senses (Update Part 7!)

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    [Normal] Western time!

    Author: Taren
    Description: Two days before the Founding Festival in Appleloosa, a stallion by the name of Desperado stops in town. Staying with Braeburn until he can get a train out, the stallion must help out the Appleloosans in their hour of need, while also confronting the flaws in his lifestyle.
    Come To Your Senses Part 1
    Come To Your Senses Part 2
    Come To Your Senses Part 3
    Come To Your Senses Part 4
    Come To Your Senses Part 5
    Come To Your Senses Part 6
    Come To Your Senses Part 7 (New!)


    Additional Tags: Western, Action, Friendship, Cowboy, Rustlers
    teisipäev, 6. september 2011 op
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    22 kommentaari:

    1. Scribejay19. juuli 2011, kell 23:03

      *Crosses finger* Clint Eastwood pony. Clint Eastwood pony.

      VastaKustuta
    2. QuillDipper19. juuli 2011, kell 23:06

      Breaburn!

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne19. juuli 2011, kell 23:10

      YAY! CLINT EASTWOOD PONY!

      This one was kind of short! I honestly don't feel like I've read enough of a story to give any useful criticism. Still, looking forward to seeing it continued.

      VastaKustuta
    4. La Barata19. juuli 2011, kell 23:14

      Don'cha play the Queen of Diamonds, boy, she'll beat you if she's able. The Queen of Hearts was always your best bet...

      VastaKustuta
    5. Delta Pangaea19. juuli 2011, kell 23:19

      '...See, my mule don't like people laughing... He gets the crazy idea they're laughin' at him.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Scribejay19. juuli 2011, kell 23:27

      Somehow I think the author loses points for actually giving the pertinent pony a name. Also...

      "What are you doing?"
      "Moving."
      "Don't you know all our ponies sleep here with us?
      "Well that's all very cozy, but I don't find you ponies all that appealing."

      VastaKustuta
    7. Gypsy19. juuli 2011, kell 23:43

      immedietly i remember a back to thefuture scene where marty is in the western bar and meets mad dog ahaha

      VastaKustuta
    8. Gabriel LaVedier20. juuli 2011, kell 00:19

      No Little Strongheart? I am disappoint, as they say. About the only somewhat canon straight coulple in season one. Still, this looks promising.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne20. juuli 2011, kell 00:24

      @La Barata
      Inorite?
      Gratuitous Eagles reference spotted.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne20. juuli 2011, kell 00:24

      > Come to your senses
      > Desperado

      I C wut U did thar.

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0BwOXlGbW6Q

      VastaKustuta
    11. Gypsy20. juuli 2011, kell 00:34

      LULZ WHY IS THERE NO LITTLE STRONG HEART SHIPPING?!?! to young?

      VastaKustuta
    12. Gabriel LaVedier20. juuli 2011, kell 01:15

      @Gypsy

      I just assumed it was a case of Equestrian buffalo sexual dimorphism and she was small but as old as the Mane Six (or at least Pinkie Pie).

      VastaKustuta
    13. Wisecat20. juuli 2011, kell 06:34

      You get my interest here, author. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

      VastaKustuta
    14. Colt.4521. juuli 2011, kell 02:22

      Not much to go by, but I look forward to its continuation. The pony with no name? Colt Eastwood? Nah, I'm sorry, that last one was bad.

      VastaKustuta
    15. Anonüümne21. juuli 2011, kell 03:03

      Let's read on, and see if chapter two will fulfill my wishes of a Broke Back Mountain scenario. One can only dream ...

      And no, "sway-back mountain" with FEMALES wasn't the equivalent.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Saint Dane21. juuli 2011, kell 03:05

      OH MY GOD I JUST GOT THE TITLE.

      Desperado... Come To Your Senses... I feel like an idiot now. I'm way too big an Eagles fan to have missed that.

      Anyways, I'm liking it so far. I can't say theres anything thats making me say OMG AWESOME FUCK YEAH but I'm definitely lookingforwards to more.

      VastaKustuta
    17. Victrix21. juuli 2011, kell 04:21

      EAGLES REFERENCE FTW.

      VastaKustuta
    18. Gabriel LaVedier21. juuli 2011, kell 08:40

      OC Pony super-crush. Seamless rural electrification. An overly friendly pony with no name with a name. What am I reading?

      VastaKustuta
    19. La Barata21. juuli 2011, kell 12:09

      Quite good so far. Only problem is it drags like a mule team. Come on, lad, are you going anywhere with this? Yes, we've established that it's a very nice place and that he's Clint Eastwood as a pony, but are you planning to throw a plot at us anytime soon?

      VastaKustuta
    20. Risky6. september 2011, kell 14:20

      I am loving the Dangerous Business reference. IDBGOYD is my fav fic on the site, and I love that is so popular its setting is practically canon.

      also, damn, shit just got real! poor Braeburn. I eagerly await more! I'm lovin me some Desperado, and can't wait for Eastwood style flank kicking

      VastaKustuta
    21. Baree6. september 2011, kell 15:41

      That last scene was unnecessarily violent. If they want him out cold, that's easy enough. If they want to violently kill him, this should be a grimdark fic. I'm not sure why you are trying to be somewhere in the middle here. If its "just business", there is no reason for the behaviour. If he is enjoying being so violent, maybe let that shimmer through a bit.

      Desperado went from a mysterious stranger who might be up to no good to a bit of a Mary Poppins. Not sure how well that works.

      Other then that though, still enjoying the story enough.

      VastaKustuta
    22. Risky28. november 2011, kell 15:42

      Holy hell it LIVES! Yay!

      I missed this one. It was because of this fic that I discovered and now love The Eagles. (there, have an anecdote)

      Oh, and its a pretty decent read no less.

      VastaKustuta

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