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With the huge lack of new episodes driving all of us insane, I guess these are inevitable! Another team has started on their quest to twist out favorite little equines into completely ridiculous versions, and hopefully receive some laughs out of it! This is their first episode, and their first actual abridged series in general, so I'm assuming they want some feedback!
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Fluttertree picture made my day.
VastaKustuta~Dark~
This was more funny than the first abridged series.
VastaKustutalol oh Pinkie Pie you and breaking the fourth wall
VastaKustutaEh, this was okay, but MLP Mentally Advanced is still the best parody by far. I'll never get over how awesome drunken Applejack is.
VastaKustutaThis was pretty good. If they need a voice actor, I'm definitely free.
VastaKustutaThat wasn't funny
VastaKustutaThese will always suck.
VastaKustutaI don't like to be harsh, but Ponies don't need to be abridged tobe enjoyable IMO.
I abridge Pokemon Black and White. Why? That show has lost truthfully ALL of it's likeability that Pokemon used to have. So I do it, because it NEEDS it.
But I digress. If bronies like pony Abridged series', that's fine, I'm just saying, it'll never stack up to the original, therefore, it seems unnecessary.
Not bad. Just needs improved microphones from some voica actors. And an actual storyline.
VastaKustutaIt was better than the other Abridged Series, I'll give it that. Camaraderie is Supernatural and The Mentally Advanced Series are still the only good attempts at abridging the series I've seen.
VastaKustutaRD is a guy, FS a stoner and PP a rapist. Sounds about right
VastaKustutaPlaece of power in abriged standards.
VastaKustuta3. Original MLP abridged
2. This abridged.
1. Mentally Advanced Series
If they get better microphones and improve the Fluttershy character, I'd definately be into it.
@Jett
I literally just spent a few minutes trying to make an argument, but I couldn't. My favorite abridged series are all based on crappy and meh anime (Yu-Gi-Oh! abridged, Naruto abridged, Code Geass abridged, Hellsing abridged, Kampher abridged), and the only counter arguement I could find was MLP The Mentally Advanced Series, but that isn't viable in this context since I'm trying to find an abridged series outside of MLP that's good while the source matierial is good as well... It's nigh impossible...
I thought that was kinda good. Not the best, but with time, I think it could be great. :)
VastaKustutaI like this one, especially the fact they all sound like girls, all the others have men voicing them which kinda takes me out of it.
VastaKustuta@ShakeBunny
VastaKustutaI personally have to disagree, if anything the one with the Elements of Parody (link at the end) was by far the best in terms of jokes, keeping to the original story, and sound quality.
To quote from the second half of the pilot, "The best parodies are those that build on the original work, and don't rely on things like gratuitous cursing or pop culture jokes. There's a reason the original show got people's attention, and paying tribute to that isn't a cop-out, it's parody!"
Okay, so maybe that very last part doesn't apply here, but the rest most certainly does.
Oh! I almost forgot the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Nv8gZ8jGAA
@Asgard, what about Dragonball Z abridged? They're certainly a great team and are updating even faster than LK now!
VastaKustutaWas kinda funny but to poorly done.
VastaKustutaHeh, that wasn't bad. I didn't care for most of it, but it had a few moments that made me laugh.
VastaKustutaI also love that pic. She's such a tree. :)
Its ok. Could use some more SFX and some music for atmosphere etc and some better mics for some of the ponies etc. Other than that nice job.
VastaKustutaI really should bother to finish mine I stopped working on. Sure it might be met with rage but it will be a great laugh for me mwhahahaha!
I like this already! :) -approved-
VastaKustuta100% what shake bunny said. Mentally Advanced is one of the best things pony fandom has brought us. This one looks like its playing it too easy, but I will say i loved the applejack apple press conference joke.
VastaKustutaps. i hate flutterguy jokes
Meh
VastaKustutaits watchable but not so funny, they didnt really use the show to their advantage.
Did enjoy the voice cast for rarity, spot on. Dash not so much.
It was somewhat funny. They just need better equipment.
VastaKustutaI remember writing that no abridged series will ever be as good as Camaraderie is Supernatural.
VastaKustutaWhat I should have written was "No abridged series will ever be good, like Camaraderie is Supernatural."
Hmmm...ouch. I can't think of any positive criticism. Sorry.
VastaKustutaA warning for other watchers, stick to the mentally advanced series
Nice. Pretty funny for a first episode.
VastaKustuta@Jett
VastaKustutaAme- amen, brother.
Actually that nightmare moon shit was awesome!
VastaKustutaThe Applejack and Fluttershy parts made this. Although, I think the main problem is everypony starts with the first two episodes. I think the Mentally Enhanced Series and Camaraderie is Supernatural have the right idea in doing the normal episodes. I really think the community is tapped out of jokes to put into the same two damned episodes.
VastaKustutaApplejack is Steve jobs and Rarity says "Squeee"
VastaKustutain b4 rage. Honest critiquing here.
VastaKustutaVery mediocre voice acting. The quality of it was literally painful at parts--cheap microphones with awkward feedback as well as going from not being able to hear one pony to OHFUCKMYEAR to the next one that was 10x as loud.
The no background music/sound is something that is also very distracting and brings focus to said voice acting.. It'd bring a lot more to the show and keep people interested if there was any sort of music or even basic sound effects.
What's great about abridged series is they're usually an episode's "content" in a brief few minutes. This is more like a straight up parody. While I appreciate originality and the "plot" is definitely.. unique.. I don't like how people have to rely on over-the-top "crazy" to try and fish for laughs. You lost me completely with the Fluttershy thing. I get the reference.. it's just really awkward and rather jarring.
TL;DR:
-Keep things short and to the point. A quick joke is more entertaining than something that's dragged on. And if it's bad, it's a lot less painful for the audience.
-Have some sort of bloody quality control with the sound. Mostly volume, but also talk to your voice actors about having character. Half of the time they sounded dead and reading a script awkwardly in a basement.
-Long awkward black screen pauses between scenes should be cut out o.o;
-Watch Yugioh the Abridged for ideas on how to make things successful. >.> LK is a comedic genius in terms of parody.
Things you did well.. The Rainbow Dash thing was pretty entertaining, as you were touching at something pre-existing in the community, and the scene with Apple Bloom was clever, again because the series had already alluded to the "Apple" product line with Big Macintosh. Stick with more intelligent/tactful humor, or at least stuff that makes sense. I'm so tired of people thinking they're comical by using cheap methods as seen with Spike's letter--whatever derogatory comment he made towards Twilight (something involving bitch.)
There's a lot of great potential if you just go slowly and tweak things a bit. Overall I'd give it a 3/5.
Much love, Film Critic Brony.
@ Quicksilver
VastaKustutaI thought CiS started with the two intro episodes.
@PirateKing2000
VastaKustutaI apparently mixed up two different series. I was thinking Friendship is Witchcraft, which did A Perfect Swarm.
The point is- Including the two-parter as one, there are twenty five stories in the series. So why is only the first one being attacked? Even after every logical permutation of events has been covered barring making the characters bad-crazy or returning to immature humor.
Awesome.
VastaKustutaJust awesome. Freaking. Hillarious.
@Jett
VastaKustutaThis. Abridged series don't work for genuinely good shows or comedies. It's only funny when the show that's being abridged takes itself too seriously.
To quote Twilight Sparkle ..... "okayyyyyyy........."
VastaKustutaYey! It's up! =D
VastaKustutaThanks for the constructive criticism for those who gave it. Yeah, some music in the background would do it some good, but i can't seem to find any files of background music other than the vocal-free videos on Youtube. also, i can't seem to find any decent sites with good sound effects... They all seem like powerpoint defaults from 98...
Glad everyone seems to like Rainbow and Applejack's scene, i gotta say, we enjoyed them too.
As for Fluttershy, I promise she'll be better in episodes to come... She's Flutterhigh in our minds, and sometimes she's not high on the Poison Joke, so i think in future episodes she'll get better.
As for microphone quality, yeah, we all kinda had varying qualities. I kinda rushed it at the end to get everything done, since we had been slowly working on it for a while, and i really wanted to push it out more quickly...
I promise we'll improve things as they go along, and i hope you guys support us when we get more episodes out ^^
That was fun!!!! More!!!!
VastaKustutaPersonally I like Friendship is Witchcraft the best.
VastaKustutaMy Little Pony: Friendship is Abridged is by far the funniest in my opinion
VastaKustutahttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2vAEOuwFxzg
As a video, it wasn't too bad. Could have used some better sound quality, but some of the jokes were pretty funny.
VastaKustutaHowever, it was really more of a straight parody than an actual episode of an abridged series. I still prefer "Camaraderie is Supernatural" and "Friendship is Witchcraft."
Well, it's certainly not Friendship is Witchcraft caliber, but it definitely shows potential. Anime fangirl Rarity is definitely an interesting twist. I also liked how the booze was drugged, that is absolutely classic!
VastaKustutaWasn't the best, but the Pinkie working for Doctor Horrible joke was humorous.
VastaKustutaIt's... nice.
VastaKustutaReally, though, I like it. It could stand to be a bit more 'abridged', as some of the scenes felt like they went on longer than they needed to be, and some audio equalization would be nice.
I give it a solid B+.
To be on top it needs to be about 20% cooler.
@*sigh*
VastaKustutaTotally agree with you on that one. Thanks for linking me to that serious, it really is quite well done.
I'm glad you guys have the work ethic to actually make something. That's a lot better than most.
VastaKustutaNow, on to the soul-crushing critiques!
First off, sound.
Sound control needs to be consistent. Rarity's VA was too soft. Also, music. Most of the time there should be Background music to keep us entertained when there isn't even anything happening.
Jokes.
While there were several times when you had jokes that literally made me lol. You must realize that above all, an abridged series is there for entertainment. A good Abridged Series is a stream of good and (at least occasionally) satirical humor that leave the audience in a good mood. Look at the original show. For me, there is never a moment when I'm not smiling with childish glee. That's because the show makes me happy.
(PROTIP:People like being happy.)
Please don't give up like FiMAbridged. Learn as you go along. If you try at it, you should be top-notch pros by the time season 2 comes round.
Or you could just quit.
Remember that other person who quit? Yeah, nobody does.
Of course, have fun!
P.S. I love the pop culture references.
@Asgard
VastaKustutaGo on youtube, search "Friendship is Witchcraft."
It's so good, I'll even say that it rivals or even surpasses the Mentally Advanced series.
Give it a watch, it'll be more than worth your time.
It was nice but not great.
VastaKustutaIt's all about the pacing and stress in the voices.
VastaKustutaMake it sound natural, yet try to show exaggeration on scenes that need it, but not too much.
I can say this is one great example of good use of the voice-actor's arsenal.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wdQ95cMjXhY
You can hear his mic isn't top notch, just enough that it doesn't give feedback, and that the volume doesn't rape our ears. Good mics are not needed, but bad mics shouldn't be there.
MUCH better than the other one. Thankfully a lot less adult and alcohol jokes in this one too. Still love how its Flutterguy :D
VastaKustuta''opens mouth & raises finger'' he cancels it,''moves his head left and right''...
VastaKustutaNo...i won't write any long ass review...Just...for gods sake watch these series with DBZ abridged and then come back to me with actual knowledge before i tie you to a chair and get a bunch of dogs to ravage your face off, and cut your ballz off and GIVE THEM TO YOUR FAMILY FOR DESERT...k...i'm done...YOU PIECE OF SHIT
http://www.youtube.com/user/TeamFourStar
I don't understand the concept of abridged American cartoons that are not a single season long plot.
VastaKustutabut I do like the music that comes out of it regardless, like the first fimabridged has muffinproof. 500% better than that episode they did.
Nostalgia Critic? THE Nostalgia Critic?
VastaKustutaI still had Fun voice acting with it. It's fun to try new things every once in a while.
VastaKustutaNot bad, made me laugh quite a bit.
VastaKustutaFinally a Rainbow Dash VA that doesn't make me cringe. :)
Its alright, but I like the Mentally Advanced series more.
VastaKustutaAnd besides, NO ONE CAN TOUCH LESBIAN CARWASH!
WHAT it with Pinkie Pie hopping up and down all the time? Its like she's trying to get into the music video "Rise Up"!!!!!
VastaKustuta(HuffytheMagicDragon)
@asgard
VastaKustutaSgt. Frog abridged by TheMidnightFrogs