[Adventure] That is the longest description I have ever seen. He's also promising a minimum of fifteen chapters! Sounds like an epic tail. Tale. See what I did there?
Author: Mizukame
Description: With the incident of the eternal night left behind, Equestria has returned to normal, its habitats living in peace and joy. However, clouds of unknown origin start to cover the entire land, blocking the radiance of the sun and threatening the routine life of Equestria. The mane cast works together to find the cause and a solution to this. Meanwhile, Windy Rose, a young Pegasus from Cloudsdale, seeks to prove to her mother she is capable of accomplish her dreams on her own, following them even if it means going against her will. As the situation unfolds, they'll discover there's more behind the Elements of Harmony than what they know, all being put to test to reveal its mysteries.Secrets of Harmony: Prologue
Secrets of Harmony: Chapter I
Secrets of Harmony: Chapter II
Secrets of Harmony: Chapter III
Secrets of Harmony: Chapter IV
Additional Tags: Long, Epic, Elements of Harmony, Battle, Adventure
9 comments:
cool ponys bro
ReplyDeleteNot the Adventure tag?
ReplyDeletenice, y was read the pre-version and is a nice fanfic
ReplyDeleteA really good story , and actually it was mine first fan-fic that i readed ...
ReplyDeleteIf you have some free time give it a try
Kind of a slow starter but its definitely building steam.
ReplyDeleteThis, right here, is injustice. A top quality piece that somehow only got 5 comments and 16 ratings? It's just damn shameful. Mizukame, if you're reading this, I want to say that you deserve better. I don't know why almost noone has read your story, but I enjoyed it very much. I give this six stars. It may be a slow start, but there's no way this story wasn't going places. I'm sorry that one person can't motivate you very much, but for whatever it's worth I think you are an excellent writer and I do wish that you would continue your story please.
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ReplyDeleteI'm ashamed that someone (the anon above) actually got to give a fairly detailed comment, yet I only repay with nothing more than waiting.
I'm very, very sorry for keeping your hopes clinging to a rope with all this hiatus on this. My new project, Pony Emblem, really absorbed most of my free time, not to mention my editor is out doing some field work (real life > internet).
I'm afraid my grammar is not good enough for this story to get past the pre-readers so, at least until he comes back from his job, I won't be able to continue this.
I'm not planning on canceling this project, so no worries about that. Thanks everyone who took the time to read this, you readers give meaning to an writer's creation :3
@Mizukame
ReplyDeleteDo you have at least the blueprint of the next chapter?
I'm really curious as to what happens next.
Also, that last "Anon" was right, it's a real shame people didn't take more notice of this. But I agree that this story can really go places if continued. Hopefully you'll be able to throw a little time at it and shell out another chapter or two in the near future. :)
Hope to see more of this story.
---Super
I want this to be updated why is the author taking so long this is a really good fan fic!
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