• Story: Justice Society of Equestria

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    [Crossover][Grimdark] Whats that? Morning crossover time? Lets do it!

    Author: Lord Hierarch
    Description: The Mystery Mares and Stallions of the Justice Society were keeping the lands of Equestria clear of threats the Equestrian Guards could not handle. At their height a secret government organization forced them to disband. Now a new enemy is taking out surviving members, and its up to past and future heroes to stop this before any more are lost.
    Justice Society of Equestria

    Additional Tags: Justice Society, long, heroes, battle, history
    reede, 17. juuni 2011 op
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    8 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne17. juuni 2011, kell 11:24

      Wait... How is Twilight a member of the Sinestro corps? If there's ANYONE who should be a member of the Sinestro corps it's Gilda...

      VastaKustuta
    2. ZAquanimus17. juuni 2011, kell 12:02

      Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta
    3. ZAquanimus17. juuni 2011, kell 12:15

      Welp.

      Theres potential with this one, quite a bit.

      The problem is that the grammar is... subpar at times and there are actual contradictions in scene description. It took me a bit to realize, after rereading a few times, that the couple werent a pair of fillyfoolers.

      Submitted too early in my opinion.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Anonüümne17. juuni 2011, kell 14:16

      First Thor, then the Avengers and now the Justice Society. Confound these ponies, now we just need the JLA and maybe the Power rangers and will be all set.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Anonüümne17. juuni 2011, kell 14:21

      No, no, no, no, no.

      Gilda is not Sinestro Corps.

      Gilda is most definitely a Red Lantern

      Twilight ought to be a Green Lantern

      Derpy? Blue for you.

      Give Trixie the Yellow Ring.

      VastaKustuta
    6. kriss198917. juuni 2011, kell 23:30

      You crazy? Ring spectrum NOW!

      Rage Red - Gilda
      Avarice Orange - Red Dragon
      Fear Yellow - Ursa Major (that thing certainly scared me)
      Will Green - Twilight Sparkle
      Hope Blue - Pinky
      Compassion Indigo - Fluttershy
      Love Violet - Derpy (mother's love for daughter, duh. And muffins.)
      Death Black - Nightmare Moon
      Life White - Celestia

      VastaKustuta
    7. kriss198917. juuni 2011, kell 23:44

      Also, the DCU equivalent of SHIELD when it comes to dealing with superhumans is Cadmus.

      I have to agree, a lot of grammar errors, the passing is wrong, and the characters could be replaced with cardboard cutouts, they have no depth.

      VastaKustuta
    8. wasd99918. juuni 2011, kell 19:52

      Why is Egophiliac's artwork being used here?
      I payed for it, seems unfair without permission
      to use it I'd say.

      VastaKustuta

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