• Story: Doctor Whooves: The Worst of Times (Update Part 2!)

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    [Normal][Adventure] So much Dr. Whoof! And still 2 more in review right now. You guys are nuts.

    Author: Maverick Vox
    Description: After narrowly escaping the total destruction of Earth, the TARDIS malfunctions, stranding The Doctor in a world unlike any other. Can he adapt to his new form and make it back in time to save everything he ever loved, including himself?
    Doctor Whooves: The Worst of Times
    Doctor Whooves: The Worst of Times Part 2  (New!)

    Additional Tags: Doctor Whooves, Adventure, Regeneration, Adjustment, Time Lords
    Wednesday, June 22, 2011 op
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    31 comments:

    1. AnonymousJune 2, 2011 at 10:18 AM

      The image seems a tad bit suggestive...

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    2. SilverspotJune 2, 2011 at 10:58 AM

      "Call of the Cutie" voice actor be damned, I read all of the Doctor's lines post-regeneration in Matt Smith's voice and it fit perfectly. You have a knack for writing both Ten (however short his appearance was) and Eleven, without completely resorting to the clichés (for example, "That's a cool name" instead of the oft-used "I'm a pony now. Ponies are cool."). Though it was nice to see some clichés, like "Doctor who?" "Just... the Doctor," and I have to wonder if somepony's going to say "It's bigger on the inside!" when the TARDIS is done repairing itself and they finally get to step inside, or if the Doctor will be disappointed. The title is an nice reference to The End of Time, what with the fic starting out on a "Bad Ending" of that special.

      I haven't even quite finished this part, and I'm already ready to rate it. Five stars for you!

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    3. SilverspotJune 2, 2011 at 11:26 AM

      Wait, "two incarnations ago"? "Restarted the universe"? I spoke too soon... this is after "The Big Bang," isn't it? Somehow Eleven got sent back to "The End of Time" except the Master wasn't around, and because of that he couldn't stop Rassilon. I think.

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    4. T'larenJune 2, 2011 at 1:10 PM

      Yeah, this was too dang short... more! More! Must have awesome!

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    5. AnonymousJune 2, 2011 at 1:29 PM

      Oh god, Colgate is the Rani.

      I think. I actually have almost no knowledge of the series pre-Eccleston.

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    6. AnonymousJune 2, 2011 at 2:23 PM

      I will admit, this has me very interested; However, I question the ease in which both the doctor revealed some information about himself as well as the ease that rarity accepted it.

      Regardless, I await the next part.

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    7. ZombieFobbyJune 2, 2011 at 2:33 PM

      Here's hoping Colgate is Romana

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    8. kriss1989June 2, 2011 at 5:01 PM

      Option #2, Colgate is a Time Lord of Gallopfree, this universes punified version.

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    9. justsomeponyJune 2, 2011 at 6:30 PM

      Great story so far, love it! Need more!

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    10. AnonymousJune 2, 2011 at 7:08 PM

      Not bad. There have certainly been worse Whooves fics. In any case, you've managed to entice me enough to want to read the next chapter, so that's a good sign.

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    11. AnonymousJune 2, 2011 at 9:24 PM

      Rarity as the Doctor's companion? And Colgate as Ramona or another Time Lord?
      MORE GODDAMMIT MORE!

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    12. AnonymousJune 2, 2011 at 10:13 PM

      I want know what happens next tell me! tell me! this is brilliant you really gotta continue this

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    13. AnonymousJune 5, 2011 at 4:00 PM

      Awesome story. Definitely in character all the way. Yes, it reads in matt smith's voice and it works very well.

      Now then MOAR I SAY MOAR! Thanks in advance

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    14. AnonymousJune 6, 2011 at 12:35 AM

      That was frikkin awesome!

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    15. B.June 11, 2011 at 6:28 AM

      I like this.

      I need to watch more Dr. Who. :/

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    16. Tick Tock StepJune 14, 2011 at 3:46 PM

      That is so good. A was laughting really hard. It's great. This style... So~ 10nantish <3.! Please write what happened next D:. Please :<.

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    17. B.June 22, 2011 at 1:32 AM

      This chapter was positively excellent. Eagerly awaiting more.

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    18. NikaScott (Biały Kruk)June 22, 2011 at 4:39 AM

      It wasn't as funny as the first part but I really like it... Even though I wish it wasn't the 11th Doctor personality ^^. Can't wait for the new part <3.

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    19. SilverspotJune 22, 2011 at 8:00 AM

      This time, he read as more of a mix of 10 and 11... maybe it was all of the "Brilliant!" exclamations, which were a definite Tennantism. Poor Doctor, never can keep a hat... if it's not River, it's Rarity. XD

      I foresee extreme jealousy when he sees Applejack's Stetson.

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    20. SaddlesoapJune 22, 2011 at 8:49 AM

      This certainly captures the feel of D.W. quite nicely - the whole "I'm planning complicated things - follow my insane instructions!" thing is the Doctor to a Tee.

      At the same time, I like that the Ponies are fairly suspicious for the most part, and reluctant to trust a loony from the sky.



      Also, "It's smaller on the outside"...I lol'd. :D

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    21. bubsAKAverminJune 22, 2011 at 9:04 AM

      >Pony Doctor walking in on human Doctor with Time Lords

      DOCTOR TROLLFACE IS TACTICAL GENIUS HUHEUEHEUE

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    22. ToonNinjaJune 22, 2011 at 10:17 AM

      Wow. The Doctor just can't get away with rocking a fez. Poor guy. Also, "smaller on the outside" triggered a good old-fashioned facepalm of win.

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    23. MadfishJune 22, 2011 at 8:51 PM

      The Doctor has just seriously messed with his own personal timeline, that's got to have consequences.
      Still want to see what's next though : )

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    24. AnonymousJuly 26, 2011 at 5:42 PM

      Haha, brilliant! I loved the "smaller on the outside"-line! More PLEASE!

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    25. AnonymousSeptember 27, 2011 at 5:37 PM

      Never seen any Doctor Who yet, but a friend recommended the story. Reads great from an outside universe point of view.

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    26. TweakOctober 29, 2011 at 10:50 PM

      Are you going to finish it?!

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    27. ShinyMew112November 10, 2011 at 5:49 PM

      Its GR8 plz finish it

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    28. NeoridgebackDecember 14, 2011 at 1:33 AM

      FINISH THE STORY OR FACE INTERNET WRATH!

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    29. NeoridgebackDecember 14, 2011 at 1:45 AM

      Doctor Whooves is the perfect blend of matt smith and david tennat's personalities and idiosyncrasies making the comedic banter between him and the ponies very entertaining. All the Characters are written perfectly too a T making for natural fluid dialogue. This honestly feels like an actual proper doctor who episode with pony twist. I am personally looking forward to the next chapter of the series. GET ON IT Maverick VOX

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    30. 20%pinkierFebruary 9, 2012 at 8:59 AM

      The Doctor...? Ponies...? Rassilon...? Wha?..why...? Dammit, just take your 5 stars and be done with it.

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    31. DerevoJuly 27, 2012 at 9:47 PM

      And Year have passed...

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