Author: Freestyle Fiasco
Description: In the City of Chicacolt, Nightmare Moon has built a throne of corruption, but to do something about it, Twilight Sparkle will need the Elements of Harmony: a secret task force ready to risk anything if it means ending the Nightmare. Because no one pony should have all that power....The Chicacolt Code
Additional Tags: chicago, police, drama, crime, city
27 comments:
Definitely did not see this crossover coming.
ReplyDeleteWhat a twist!
ReplyDeleteHa, Chicacolt! I just got it!
ReplyDeletewhat is this a crossover with?
ReplyDelete@D'Artagnan Rossfeld The Chicago Code.
ReplyDeleteAh, Chicago. My favorite City. Home of Deep Dish Pizza, Lights on the Lake, and the Cows still scattered around the city. Love it, love it, love it.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has nothing to do with the story, I just like Chicago.
No one mare should have all that power. Great
ReplyDeleteMore please, I loved the characterization for this and really really want to know what's happening next.
ReplyDeleteI came into this expecting it to be only slightly enjoyable and not worthy of a full read.
ReplyDeleteThe grip marks on my chair intensely dislike you right now, Freestyle Fiasco.
This was an incredible read, and I'm glad I took the time to give it the respect it deserves. Would love to see more if you're up to it.
Absolutely LOVED this story, please please please please please moar????
ReplyDeleteSeriously awesome, I'd love to see more of this!
ReplyDelete@Darkhawk1
ReplyDeleteI want to give you a hug.
That took FOREVER to read but...
ReplyDeleteIt was totally worth it.
...I'm actually sad it stopped there, though.
I know nothing about whatever this is based on, but...wow. You don't get fics like this every day...
ReplyDeleteThe only complaint I have is that it was sometimes hard to tell who exactly was narrating some of the sections.
And that it wasn't long enough. *wants more*
ReplyDeleteThat was a long read but way worth it. Makes me want to watch the show, too bad it's canceled...
ReplyDeleteNo pony can stop Chicacolt Ted.
ReplyDeleteOne hour
ReplyDeleteONE WHOLE HOUR
FOR THAT FUCKING SHIT ENDING?
ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?
THAT'S AN HOUR I'LL NEVER GET BACK
I'm a little disappointed with this story, but not on my own behalf. I never saw The Chicago Code, so I'm coming in fresh. You have a great writing style, and I'm totally interested to see more! I'm just kind of disappointed that you're borrowing the plot and dialogue pretty much word for word from a TV show. I think you could do just as well writing your own plot, you know?
ReplyDeleteAs noted earlier, it's hard to keep track of who's speaking at times. You could probably use a bit more "stage direction".
Aww, I wanted to read more of this but Goodle is messed up. D:
ReplyDeleteYo! Freestyle here!
ReplyDeleteNo idea what's going on with my G-Documents account. Apparently it got shut down and then I fixed that only to find The Chicacolt Code had been flagged or some junk like that. Anyway, just wanted to let you guys know that I'm working on it. Sorry for the interruption!
Trollestia has been reporting random stories again...
ReplyDeleteI hate you
ReplyDeleteno, i mean i HATE you
ReplyDeleteyou write an insainly compelling fic that is about to reach an amazing climax, and then you just stop
ReplyDeleteno sequel, no part two, not even a teaser regarding what will happen next, and most importantly no hope in ever finding out what happened.
ReplyDeleteI think its cool you ended it on an open note, sort of llke the pilot of an actual tv show, but why did you only write one
I will live the rest of my life bearing the tearable curse which is this incomplete story.
It was such a good story, and there character were so well developed, WHY COULDN'T YOU JUST FINISH THE STORY
no i have to try and forget this awesome fic or else its lack of an ending will drive me insane
i hate you so much :)
btw great story
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