• Story: Vengeance and Fashion (Update Part 4!)

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    Author: Tumbleweed
    Description: When a very...special individual comes
    to Ponyville, Twilight volunteers to manage Rarity's shop. Hijinks
    ensue. What else could happen?
    Vengeance and Fashion (All Links!)(New chapter 4!)

    Additional Tags: Comedy Hijinks Vengeance Fashion
    Tuesday, June 7, 2011 op
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    34 comments:

    1. AnonymousMay 30, 2011 at 12:19 PM

      what a twist

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    2. RapidashMay 30, 2011 at 12:22 PM

      Lolz, fantastic story so far! Can't wait to see how it turns out!

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    3. AnonymousMay 30, 2011 at 12:23 PM

      I'm looking forward to what happens next, I love hijinks.

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    4. AnonymousMay 30, 2011 at 12:39 PM

      I like where this is going

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    5. BronyMikeMay 30, 2011 at 12:40 PM

      Is that an Electric Six reference as the title?

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    6. BBMay 30, 2011 at 12:41 PM

      "So she can seduce him!"
      hehe ok I like it

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    7. TenchiFreak5May 30, 2011 at 1:04 PM

      The use of the dictionary in the second chapter ws great.
      First because I can easily see Twilight reading a dictionary to note changes between editions, and because I can easily see Spike looking up words in the dictonary to use as insults.

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    8. ToonNinjaMay 30, 2011 at 1:05 PM

      Oh, THIS oughta be good. Looking forward to further installments. Also, I'm still waiting for a fic to try to justify Prince Blueblood's douchey behavior, but I guess he's way below most writers' standards. We can sympathize with Trixie and Gilda, but nopony will give the time of day to Blueblood.

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    9. AnonymousMay 30, 2011 at 1:06 PM

      I require more. More, I say!

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    10. DJ Rainbow DashMay 30, 2011 at 1:10 PM

      I came in here just to compliment the Electric Six reference.

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    11. Lurks-no-MoreMay 30, 2011 at 1:55 PM

      Okay, this was a damn fun read. There were numerous laugh-out-loud funny lines, but Applejack's comment "Ya do know I'm named after liquor, right?" was the best for my money. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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    12. Raz_FoxMay 30, 2011 at 2:01 PM

      Yes. Yes! YES!

      I will be following this fanfic with great interest.

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    13. Shellsh0ckerMay 30, 2011 at 3:52 PM

      "Ya do know I'm named after liquor, right?"

      PFFAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

      Oh, man, this is great stuff. I REQUIRE MOAR.

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    14. Parallel LogicMay 30, 2011 at 4:33 PM

      :D Ahaha, excellent read, I look forward to reading more =p

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    15. TheWiseWolfMay 30, 2011 at 5:07 PM

      Great story, looking forward to the rest.

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    16. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 1:20 AM

      Its great to read this in their voices. Can't wait to read more.

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    17. KkatJune 1, 2011 at 2:52 AM

      Oh this is wonderful! I can't wait for more!

      Everyone is enjoyably in character. I can really hear their voices when I read.

      The Cutie Mark Crusaders are absolutely adorable. Dry-cleaners are... not so much a go. reLeavingNowBye!

      I'm eager to see how Spike's actions unfurl.

      The continuation of Applejack and Rarity's special friendship from "Learning Curves" is warming and delightful. I loved that story, and anything that follows in it's subtle hoofprints is going tug at my heartstrings.

      Thank you for a wonderful read. And please update soon. ^.^

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    18. AnonymousJune 1, 2011 at 4:40 AM

      I like where this story is going.

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    19. Doc SteedlyJune 2, 2011 at 12:00 PM

      AHHHAHAahew . .. i really like where this is going . . . . I hope to see more soon. Its got its own charm and i fell for it LMAO. I kept a smile the whole time . . . an the little tidbit with flutterhsy BAHAAHAHA!!!

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    20. AnonymousJune 7, 2011 at 11:57 PM

      Part 4 was awesome.

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    21. MaximillianVeersJune 8, 2011 at 12:12 AM

      lulz were had

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    22. ultra8June 8, 2011 at 2:00 AM

      Radium dust!? Okay...what fashion book was she reading?
      Still awesomely funny.
      Spike get's an extended vocabulary, Prince Blueduche get's put in his place and pinkie shows up for no other reason than she's Pinkie Pie and with snacks no less.

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    23. blacksevenJune 8, 2011 at 5:34 AM

      Is this complete? Either way, it was a great read!

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    24. AnonymousJune 8, 2011 at 5:40 AM

      "Now Spike, just put these lead lines gloves on-"

      5 stars author. Well done.

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    25. TenchiFreak5June 8, 2011 at 11:24 AM

      "Those ponies are so random."

      Amazing that not only was it Pinkie Pie that said it, but that it made perfect sense in the context it was used.



      So many fantastic moments in this chapter.

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    26. BareeJune 8, 2011 at 1:43 PM

      This whole story was kinda random.

      But it was also rather entertaining. Most enjoyable, nothing else to say ^^

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    27. AnonymousJune 11, 2011 at 1:49 PM

      Somepony just has to draw Captain Jack Harness.

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    28. AnonymousJune 13, 2011 at 12:13 AM

      Just hilarious! I really, really hope the story isn't over yet.

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    29. AnonymousJune 15, 2011 at 4:55 AM

      @DJ Rainbow Dash

      Me too! Nice to see some other Electric Six fans out there!

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    30. EdinponyJune 17, 2011 at 1:14 PM

      This was absolutely brilliant. Hysterical, well-characterized, and really reminiscent of the joyful energy of the show.

      I honestly think this is one of the best MLP fan fictions I have ever read.

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    31. Electric Six fanJune 18, 2011 at 7:02 PM

      I'm a man, and I'm torn between vengeance and fashion!

      Anyways, it was pretty good. It started out slow, but it picked up with the CMC. My favorite part was the bit with the Twilight putting radium in Blueblood's suit.

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    32. KkatJune 20, 2011 at 5:41 PM

      Best. Comedy. Story. EVER!

      Every single line in the confrontation was just golden!

      You've made me very happy. Thank you!

      And I would love to see more of your subtle Applerare fanfic!

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    33. DoubleclickJune 20, 2011 at 8:29 PM

      I actually read this because Kkat recommended it, and I don't regret it at all. The characterization was spot-on; I could easily hear in my head the lines being said in the voices we've all come to love, and the first three chapters made me smile. Chapter 4 though is the one that had me laughing out loud; the back and forth between all the characters was the perfect culmination to the crazy events prior! Bravo!

      (Personally though, I favor Applejack/Fluttershy, Twilight/Rarity, and Pinkie/Dash if one was to ship the whole mane cast, but then I never said I wasn't weird.)

      Anyway, thanks for the laughs!

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    34. RoxorAugust 3, 2011 at 4:23 AM

      Radium in the suit? Telling Spike to use lead-lined gloves? Yeah, I'd say that's a not-so-subtle hint that Twilight and Blueblood have met before, and that whatever happened, it went badly-enough that this meeting has pushed her over the edge.

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