• Story: A Twilight and Trixie Story

    [Comedy][Shipping]
    >Write Progress, negating pre-readers forever
    >Use free pass to make fun of Trixie shipping
    I see what you did thar!

    Author: Andew Joshua Talon

    Description: Another "Trixie decides to make amends with Twilight and
    moves in to become her student" story... Or is it? ...Nope, not
    really.
    A Twilight and Trixie Story

    Additional Tags: Trixie, Twilight, One-Sided, Humor, Lesbian. Humor, Mock-Shipping, One-Shot

    38 comments:

    1. ummm. am I missing something here?

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    2. I stopped studying for THIS?!?






      Totally worth it.

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    3. The picture makes me smile every time I see it :3

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    4. 1.lol, have seth love your story,
      2.get around the bureuacrarcy
      3.???
      4. take over the world

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    5. Trixie is one kinky pony...

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    6. Oh Trixie. You so pervy.

      And amusing.

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    7. I admit that most of the time when I read a shipping story I end up laughing at how absurdly unsubtle everything is presented as while still attempting to be sincere.

      So to see almost every single writing convention that shipping stories tend to abuse when they are written being used for the purposes of parody (while still being written in roughly the same way) warmed my heart.


      This is like the Airplane! of shipping stories, is what I'm trying to say.

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    8. hehehe... hehe... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! And, of course, Rainbow Dash. "Oh, you think you have problems..." Priceless.




      (Still thinks Dash is a fillyfooler)

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    9. That may have been the funniest fic I've ever read.

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    10. Oh my. This is so funny, where'd you get the pic though?

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    11. Messing with shippers, always fun. Quite enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!

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    12. THAT. WAS. AWESOME. i was laughing all the way through until the end! 5/5 easily

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    13. This read like a bad porno, in a good way.

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    14. Awesome fic, I'm still laughing.

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    15. Greatest thing i have read in awhile

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    16. @ToonNinja

      True or not, Dash is still a vocal, athletic, and very rainbow-colored tomboy. She attracts lesbians the same way pockets attract lint, or the way the CMC attract failure.

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    17. I was doing homework or work work, I really dont remember. I stop doing that, read this and laughed like there is not tomorrow. This is the shipping stories I like. XD

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    18. “Even if you are a twisted, bondage-loving masochistic bisexual nymphomaniac, we still love you.”

      Anyone know how to get in touch with Fluttershy's VA, and how much she charges?

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    19. QSA: I didn't even know that Fluttershy even knew ANY of those words... O.O I don't know wy, but she is now my fav pony.

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    20. Can I fave it? Can I comission Hasbro to do an episode out of this? pleseplepsleplspleepleeessze

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    21. Worth it just for Fluttershy's comment.
      Loved Trixie's characterization. Celestia's letter was the cake, the book was icing.
      Right up there with the greats.

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    22. Twixie is one of my favorite ships... and I still found this hilarious. XD Five stars for you! (Also, I SO want to hear Fluttershy say that line...)

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    23. Someone now needs to write trixie's best-selling book.

      Seriously tho, this is hilarious. Great work!

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    24. Wow, this is the first fanfic I read, now I am going to have to read more!

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    25. ...I LOVE this new Comedy tag! It's done nothing but deliver so far, and this is no exception. :D

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    26. I didnt really feel that you were poking fun at Us Twixie fans, It was a hilarious read for sure, thanks =D

      Would Trixie's book happen to be called Twilight?

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    27. I think this was a more "wtf" than a "hilarious," goddamn.

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    28. Haha, I enjoyed reading it ;)
      Twixie work for me even better in comed'ish form.

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    29. This has the best Fluttershy line ever. This was hilarious.

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    30. hahahaha! that last line made me chuckle x3
      This would be an awesome episode and just hearing Fluttershy say that line to Twilight alone would be enough to make anyone's day!

      I so pictured and read it in each character's voice as I read that story! GOOD JOB! Funniest fanfic I bothered reading!

      And not just saying that cause it's the only 1 I ever read D:

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    31. That was funny. 5 Stars.

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    32. ...does anyone know if it's medically possible to suffocate while trying to stifle one's laughter so as to not disturb everyone within a hundred mile radius? Would be very much appreciated before I re-read this story...

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    33. Oh lordy, that was hilarious
      I'm still laughing; I need to stop laughing before I wake up everypony in the house


      Trixie, you kinky bastard...

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    34. That one was short but really entertaining :3 So many awkward moments.

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    35. Had pretty hard time not to laugh to Fluttershy's comment, 'twas so funny that I hope I didn't woke up my neighbors because of my laughter :D

      Cheers for a story.

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