Author: PitViperOfDoom
Description: There is no harmony in hate. A spark of love once ignited them, and now a spark of hatred and jealousy will ignite a terrible war. Truth will be questioned, kindness threatened, laughter stifled, generosity strained, loyalty tried. Friendships tested.Sparks Flying (2 Parts)
Additional Tags: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Friendship, War
6 kommentaari:
When did my sister start writing fanfiction???
VastaKustuta@mbulsht
VastaKustutaYour sister's name is Pit Viper of Doom? You must have some odd parents then... Thank Celestia I got a regular name!
"Just a note: there will be no shipping in this fic. Aside from the whole Spike-Rarity crush thing, of course. Okay, so no non-canon shipping. Sorry to disappoint."
VastaKustuta'Dances around in circles'
I am loving this! Please, continue! I wish I could provide feedback or critique, but we are only 2 chapters in, and everything seems fine so far. Keep it up!
@Anonymous
VastaKustutaanonymous is a weird name... really distant if you ask me
these thoughts aside, the story leaves me wanting for more
I read the first chapter and went "eeehhhh" but then I read the next chapter and enjoyed it much more. also, the last image of twilight comforting spike is absolutely adorable in my mind.
I expect nothing but greatness from this story. (hard to live up to, i know. lol)
Either this is going to be a very short war, or the author is going to introduce some deus ex machina plot device that gives the griffons a fighting chance. After all, if the princesses really can keep the sun/moon from reaching the griffons, I can only see something similar to the angry sun in mario/the moon in LoZ Majora's Mask.
VastaKustutaIf they can't really control the sun/moon like that (then, what CAN they do, since the author already confirmed that Celestia can at least raise the Sun, unless it is merely a figure of speech taken from lesser ponies that she uses...), the the ponies, apparently, still have basic magic over the griffons. Or, at the very least, weather magic (the extents of which have been illustrated by the show).
tl;dr Pinkie senses deus ex machina bullsh*t or a very short war (in favor of the ponies)
Don't get me wrong, I like the story, my previous comment is just me highlighting what I think will play out
VastaKustuta