[Normal] I don't know why you'd write a story about a chicken, personally.Author: nukeiffum
Description: It's Mother's Day for SCOOT SCOOT SCOOTALOO.Scootalove
Additional Tags: Mother's Day, Immaturity
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[Normal] I don't know why you'd write a story about a chicken, personally.
Author: nukeiffum
Additional Tags: Mother's Day, Immaturity
Labels: Author: Nukeiffum, Complete, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Fanfiction, Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo, Star-5, StoryShare This!
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Chant it with me!
ReplyDeleteNo more Scootabuse! More Scootalove!
No more Scootabuse! More Scootalove!
No more Scootabuse! More Scootalove!
D'aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww, this story made my heart melt
It's SO CUTE.
ReplyDeletehey cereal, I can't seem to find the post about adding new stories, so I'm just gonna leave the link here.
I didn't write it, but the author has asked me to ask you guys to put it up.
>It's grimdark
>It's a continuation of cupcakes
>They REALLY want feedback, so that's part of the reason they wants it's up here.
Anyway, it's called Apple Pie.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c1dn5jCUutSIbwrH9IG8bXK_TEIqYS_YXUofJ6lIvjE/edit?hl=en#
I object to scoots being a chicken mr. velocity.
ReplyDeletethe idea of scootaloo being adopted makes sense
*Peers at link..* Nope!
ReplyDelete@Arc Tempest
ReplyDelete1. Open the link.
2. Scroll to the bottom to see how it ends.
3. ????
4. Yeah, I don't feel like fucking up my perception of Pinkie anymore. Already feel woozy about pie >.>
@Chris
ReplyDeleteI believe in Scootalove!
@Kill me, I'm a PONY
ReplyDeletelol sorry.
TBH I don't really care if it goes up, but my friend does, and I'd like to see it up for that reason.
well written aside from a few minor spelling mistakes.
too many ppl.
ReplyDeleteSomeone get out so I can read it!
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteeveryone should open the doc. download a copy. and close it. share the doc.
@Arc Tempest
ReplyDeleteOh it's fine lol. I don't doubt that it is good, I just murdered enough of myself with cupcakes. And some other stories...
That, and I have access to pie way more than cupcakes
@Arc Tempest
ReplyDeleteI lol'd kinda
It's at the top of the page right under the banner, email it to him!
http://pastebin.com/eNdnk2qd
ReplyDeleteFor those of you who can't get to the google docs version.
Uploaded to Mediafire since there seems to be too much traffic here:
ReplyDeletehttp://www.mediafire.com/?og24angonckcnoq
@MrAnthology
ReplyDelete^^ Lol.
Awwww! ^_^
ReplyDeleteDamnit nuke YOU TOLD ME YOU WERE WRITING SCOOTABUSE
ReplyDeleteY U LIE
After this, I don't think I can support Scootabuse anymore.
ReplyDeleteHappy Mother's Day, everypony!
ReplyDeleteI liked this I really did. And I never supported scottabuse when I heared of it. And I plan on using these backstories if it's okay. It really fits the charicters well and it touching at the same time.
ReplyDeleteAnd as said above, happy mothers day everypony!
It was a cute story. But after I read it I had this thought...
ReplyDelete"Hey Applebloom, what are you getting your mom for mothers day?"
"MY PARENTS ARE DEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD"
...and then I felt bad.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteLMAO
I've actually never heard of Scootabuse. Odd.
But I liked this story. It was affectionate c:
@Arc Tempest
Oh hell yes! I'll need to remember to read that tomorrow!
Confound thees pony's! they drive me to tears T_T
ReplyDeleteAwwww.
ReplyDeleteThat was heart-warming and kinda makes sense since we never see her parents.
Course we don't see alot of their parents so I'll just say it works for the story and keep it at that.
Overall a very good story.
@Wraithwood: +1. An amazing story.
ReplyDeleteIt was... good.
ReplyDeleteI liked backstories of Rarity and AJ, and how they cope with their mothers. Also Rainbow with her 20% Cooler Wisdom was quite neat. However, as it is pointed out, ending was rushed greatly. Don't get me wrong I Really Liked It, it was sweet and cute and daww and all that stuff, but it simply happened a tiny bit to fast ;)
Good story, cute ending, I don't feel like it was rushed at all.
ReplyDeletea tear was shed
ReplyDeleteit'd be great if you put everything into just a teeny bit more detail
but damn
i loved that ending
I'm surprised a lot of you enjoyed this fic. I really rushed the ending in an effort to get it out on Mother's Day, so it doesn't really live up to my standards of quality. The conversation between RD and Scoots was supposed to be a lot more emotional, but my rushedness kinda cut a lot of that out.
ReplyDeleteAnyways, I might write another oneshot in the future about Rarity's falling out with her mother, but that'll happen whenever I get the urge to write something like that. My hooves are already full with school and that Memories story. ┐('～`；)┌
Inconsistency detected.
ReplyDelete'“We moved to Ponyville because Rarity had kind of a huge argument with our mother about her dream of being a designer, but that was a long time ago! Even if we don’t really get to see her much over in Ponyville, we always write to let our parents know how we’re doing, and on days like these Rarity sends her some sort of present!”'
Rarity went to school in Ponyville, as evident by The Cutie Mark Chronicles.
@nukeiffum
ReplyDeleteIf you eventually have the time, would you consider rewriting the last part to make it more in line with what you originally intended? You knocked my socks off with the story the way it is originally, but now I want to see what you would have made if not constrained by time, and I think others would too.
Just, if you have the time, you know. Because if you don't then we will always be left wondering what you had planned. *puppy dog eyes* Pleeease?
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteIf I laughed at this, does that mean I have to go to ponyhell? It does, doesn't it?
There needs to be reaction images on this site. I know I've said it before, but I say it again. Words simply don't do the sheer amount of D'AWWWWWWWWW in this justice
ReplyDeleteHow is this a shipping story? If anything, it's a bit sad...
ReplyDeleteD'aaawwwwwww!
ReplyDeletenot sure why this is listed under 'shipping' in the story archives... unless there's a sequel where the sight of Big Mac in a tuxedo drives every mare in 100 miles crazy. :P
ReplyDeleteso, it is clearly a normal tag, and a normal story, but the list has it in the shipping section. I really liked the story, but it would be enjoyed by more people if it was in the right spot.
ReplyDeleteI approve of the Scootalove! Scootayay! :P
ReplyDeleteOh, wow, this fandom ages interestingly. Cereal makes a not-trite joke about Scoots being a chicken, and Scootalove isn't yet a word!
ReplyDelete