• Story: Powerful

    [Normal] Like anyone could ever hate that face!


    Author: Larathin Bradley
    Description: They say living well is the best revenge, but after Twilight destroyed her reputation Trixie is struggling just to get by. And while she may not be Great and Powerful anymore, she's powerful enough to get her revenge...
    Powerful

    Additional Tags: clinic, revenge, magic, Trixie, Manehattan

    16 comments:

    1. Good oneshot.

      The only problem I had was how quickly she inverted her opinion of rage to acceptance.

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    2. I may actually have to read this, and this may actually get me to accept Trixie into my arms... THE HORROR!

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    3. Really enjoyed the story. My only issue with it is the last 2 sentences. Made a 5 star story change to a 4 star story to me. It was just such a sudden change of behavior for no real reason.

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    4. "There are currently too many people viewing this document. Please try again later."
      This fanbase is WAAAY too big.

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    5. Pick option D. I dare you. Oh wait.

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    6. Powerful indeed. Good show Larathin :D

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    7. Trixie really can't blame Twilight for anything.

      No revenge to be had, it's just Trixie swallowing her pride.

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    8. As i commented on Fanfiction.net I like this story more than the standard "Wobbie Trixie" fare because it does have Trixie realizing as she tells the story of what happened that she can't blame Twilight for her humiliation, her own egocentric behavior was responsible for her fall, not the fact Twilight cleaned up the mess.

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    9. amazing story, I feel for trixie living that kind of life. so many emotions are bouncing inside my head right now. great story
      5/5 stars. keep righting buddy :)

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    10. Wow this might be the best written fan fiction I've read.. Great job. Keep up the good work.

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    11. Very good, quite touching and I can feel the change that turn Great and Powerful Trixie into Just Trixie. Bittersweet and 5 stars from me for that.

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    12. Could use some minor revisions, but a very touching and enduring story that adds a lot of depth to Trixie while acknowledging and building off of her canon.

      If there's one thing I'm adamant on, though, it's that the last two words should instead be "Take that."

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    13. Just Trixie is best trixie.

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    14. Great little redemption fic for Trixie! I don't think I could take this kind of setup for Gilda, but for her it works fantastically.

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    15. This story deserves more comments. I have to say, I would love to see this continued.

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