• Story: Powerful

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    [Normal] Like anyone could ever hate that face!


    Author: Larathin Bradley
    Description: They say living well is the best revenge, but after Twilight destroyed her reputation Trixie is struggling just to get by. And while she may not be Great and Powerful anymore, she's powerful enough to get her revenge...
    Powerful

    Additional Tags: clinic, revenge, magic, Trixie, Manehattan
    Sunday, May 8, 2011 op
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    16 comments:

    1. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 10:25 AM

      Good oneshot.

      The only problem I had was how quickly she inverted her opinion of rage to acceptance.

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    2. Pseudo FauxMay 8, 2011 at 10:26 AM

      I may actually have to read this, and this may actually get me to accept Trixie into my arms... THE HORROR!

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    3. PaperponyMay 8, 2011 at 10:29 AM

      Really enjoyed the story. My only issue with it is the last 2 sentences. Made a 5 star story change to a 4 star story to me. It was just such a sudden change of behavior for no real reason.

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    4. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 10:36 AM

      *slow clap*

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    5. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 10:51 AM

      "There are currently too many people viewing this document. Please try again later."
      This fanbase is WAAAY too big.

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    6. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 10:55 AM

      Pick option D. I dare you. Oh wait.

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    7. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 11:06 AM

      Powerful indeed. Good show Larathin :D

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    8. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 11:17 AM

      Trixie really can't blame Twilight for anything.

      No revenge to be had, it's just Trixie swallowing her pride.

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    9. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 12:09 PM

      As i commented on Fanfiction.net I like this story more than the standard "Wobbie Trixie" fare because it does have Trixie realizing as she tells the story of what happened that she can't blame Twilight for her humiliation, her own egocentric behavior was responsible for her fall, not the fact Twilight cleaned up the mess.

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    10. Brett TurnerMay 8, 2011 at 12:32 PM

      amazing story, I feel for trixie living that kind of life. so many emotions are bouncing inside my head right now. great story
      5/5 stars. keep righting buddy :)

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    11. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 3:29 PM

      Wow this might be the best written fan fiction I've read.. Great job. Keep up the good work.

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    12. FireantMay 9, 2011 at 1:35 AM

      Very good, quite touching and I can feel the change that turn Great and Powerful Trixie into Just Trixie. Bittersweet and 5 stars from me for that.

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    13. AnonymousMay 9, 2011 at 11:23 PM

      Could use some minor revisions, but a very touching and enduring story that adds a lot of depth to Trixie while acknowledging and building off of her canon.

      If there's one thing I'm adamant on, though, it's that the last two words should instead be "Take that."

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    14. AnonymousMay 11, 2011 at 2:46 AM

      Just Trixie is best trixie.

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    15. Present PerfectMay 14, 2011 at 9:36 AM

      Great little redemption fic for Trixie! I don't think I could take this kind of setup for Gilda, but for her it works fantastically.

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    16. WierdplatformerAugust 17, 2011 at 6:44 AM

      This story deserves more comments. I have to say, I would love to see this continued.

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