Author: OceanLord
Description: The mysterious theft of a long forgotten treasure from the capital of Canterlot begins a desperate search for the thief and a struggle to preserve life in the world. A dark threat that will require the assistance of a hero from another world.Pony Space (All Chapters) (New! Chapter 19!)
Additional Tags: Long, Adventure, Suspense, Sci-fi, Crossover
161 kommentaari:
Space, space . . . pony space . . .
VastaKustutaDang... you took my portal quote!
VastaKustutaAlso, awesome art is awesome.
This is pretty damned cool!
VastaKustutaConsidering how much /co/ responds to ponies and Isaac Clarke, I'm surprised a fic like this one hasn't popped up sooner!
VastaKustutaWell, it had to happen eventually, lol.
VastaKustutaTime to continue working on my Crossover with transformers >w<
Now I got Twinkle, Twinkle Litte Star stuck in my head.
VastaKustutaOh boy! Cant wait for more...
VastaKustuta@Sreakthefox: Transformers crossover!?! awesome!! :D
Just finished reading each chapter. The final draft could use some editing for grammar and spelling, but the author's done a good job at setting up the characters and the reader in preparation for the reveal of the Necromorphs. Can't wait for the next chapter!
VastaKustutaInteresting. Not sure how Dead Space is going to fit in with all this. My Little Pony is all about friendship and togetherness and stuff like that. Dead Space is more about isolation, paranoia, and the feeling of dread when you know something is waiting in the shadows that really, really wants to kill you. Doesn't quite mesh.
VastaKustutaI did a video crossover lol
VastaKustutaA good start that look's like it's gonna be epic. Pitty I've never played Dead Space though.
VastaKustuta@ultra8
VastaKustutaIt's basically Silent Hill in space, with zero pacing after the first enemy encounter.
Is it bad that I heard the entire Twinkle Twinkle little star in my head from just two lines of it? Plus I started getting the shudders too, game had a tendency to make me constantly on edge.
VastaKustuta@Anonymous
VastaKustutaA better description of the game might be a cross between Doom 3 and the movies Event Horizon + Alien. Really the only original parts were the areas where you played in zero gravity.
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VastaKustuta@Anonymous
VastaKustutaThat and the Markers are man-made (minus the fist)
>stretching back into the days when gods and angles shaped the land.
VastaKustuta>the days when gods and angles shaped the land
>gods and angles shaped the land
>gods and angles
>ANGLES
OH YES, I LOVE WORSHIPING OUR OCTAGONAL GOD AND HIS MANY ANGLES.
I don't know why that bothers me, usually I don't even notice spelling errors.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
VastaKustutaIsaac better be as loco as when we last left him. Also pony Nicole!
VastaKustuta*Megatron*Yeeeeesssssss*Megatron*
VastaKustutaThis has potential, but there were some glaring spelling and punctuation mistakes. Might want to fix those.
VastaKustutaAlso, Isaac is human right?
I sense an incredible improvement in writing style and descriptive imagery, but again, the grammar and spelling errors here and there lower the integrity of the final product. I'd suggest a beta reader or two just to polish up future chapters, especially now that the story's getting pretty good.
VastaKustuta"I also want to say that I intend to put some shipping into the story, but I'm not sure what relationships to pursue."
VastaKustutaWhoa, whoa, what?
Shipping? In MY Dead Space? I don't think that's a good idea, bro.
"Also, Isaac is human right?"
VastaKustutaHe was but Twilight messed up the spell and turned him into a pony.
Chapter 5 is probably the best yet. I'm actually enjoying this more than nearly any other crossover fic because it has several chapters of build-up to actually make you feel like something lead up to the crossover event itself.
VastaKustutaI'm glad to see that this story's updated, but the author needs to work on "showing" rather than "telling". In other words, he's providing as much information as possible to the reader, rather than letting the characters and situations speak for themselves. Maybe I'm just frustrated that such elaborate descriptions of what almost every character is thinking at one particular moment slow down a plot designed to be fast-paced and action-packed...
VastaKustutaWas it necesery to turn him into pony? It would still be cool if he remaind human.
VastaKustutaThank you to everyone who has given feedback on my story. I appreciate your responses and I do listen. I hope everyone is enjoying it. There have been some criticisms made and I will try and address them as best I can in later chapters.
VastaKustutaI like how this story is shaping up and while the pacing is a little iffy due to the amount of "telling" the author is doing I don't find that to be really all that bad. I tend to like the amount of detail work he is giving showing us how this people are reacting to a situation far out side their comfort zones.
VastaKustutaAlso Pony Issac is cool cause he is in power armor and that makes anything 20% cooler.
Hm, was that subtle hint of Twilight/Isaac shipping going on there?
VastaKustutaI can't believe how long it took me to finally read this thing, I'm so glad I did though. I hope to read more soon.
VastaKustutaThis is awesome. Especially the newest chapter. I loved Twilight/Isaac conversation. (Loved so much that I felt annoyed by necromorphs appearing so fast) Twitcher using unicorn magic - great idea. What is next? Pegasi puker?
VastaKustutaAlso. Please do not ruin it with shipping...
you want dead space 2/MLP:FIM?
VastaKustutahttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pMRDaEVETj4
Is it bad that I was sad he lost his plasma cutter and was left only with the pulse rifle (Loved pulse rifle, but Line gun and plasma cutter were best guns of all time.) Also, loving the story and look forward to the next chapter :D
VastaKustutaMy doctor says I'm not getting enough equine undead in my diet. Could you help me out and write another chapter already?
VastaKustutaprobably my 2nd favorite crossover after Dungeons, Dragons, and a Little Friendship
VastaKustutaBut Isaac better either get his weapons or his human form back at some point soon, if not both since he can't use any of them if he's a pony.
Come on. You just got to the action. Another chapter, Please!
VastaKustutaThy no make anymore chapters...
VastaKustutaFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Amazing, I really do hope you continue the story as many of us love reading it :3
VastaKustutaI have not given up on the story and I am still writing. I just got a little too ambitious with the size of the current chapter. So I'm going to break it down into smaller chunks. I'll have something posted either today or tomorrow, time permitting.
VastaKustutaAs long as this story in MLP is completed, my life will be complete
VastaKustutaPleasepleasepleaseplease
VastaKustutatell me when the next part is coming out XC
He said 2 comments ago that he'd release it in a day's time, besides, I don't want it to be rushed. It's an awesome series.
VastaKustutaSo... Chapter 6?
VastaKustutaYAY! TY SO MUCH GOOD SIR! :P
VastaKustutaChapter 6 is up.
VastaKustutaThis deserves 6 stars. Nuf' said.
VastaKustutaAnother chapter, hurrah!
VastaKustutaI can't wait until we get to see some proper interaction between Isaac and the mane cast, maybe away from a situation where they're not in imminent danger of being hacked to pieces.
I'm hoping Isaac gets his RIG fixed too, purely so we can see everypony's reaction when all the components slide together over his head, and I'm guessing we're gonna see a unicorn variant of the plasma cutter.
So, anypony wanna take bets on who the mare that'll inevitably stab him in the back is going to be?
Only now do I realize how many functions are lost without power to the RIG. The jets, the HUD, radio, and so much more, and yeah, hope he gets it fixed. He is an engineer after all.
VastaKustutaYay. I updated!
VastaKustutaWho needs magic when you've got stasis, kinesis, and a jet pack?
VastaKustutaSo how is Issac going to hold his weapons? Is it going to be like kinda like the Preditor?
VastaKustutaI guess kinesis has been relocted to the head
>Twilight Sparkle was dead
VastaKustutaNo, fuck you. I'm not reading this anymore.
...
*keeps reading*
Oh, never mind.
Simply awesome, when's the next chapter?
VastaKustutaMy first time reading a crossover fic and it was amazing. Very nice read.
VastaKustutaOn another note, this inspired me to start working on my No More Heroes pony crossover again.
One question, is Isaac wearing the advanced suit?
VastaKustutaYeah, I was kinda wondering what RIG is he wearing.
VastaKustutaAlso, WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?
It better not be an engineering suit, that one just looked dumb, the advanced suit looked awesome and deadly.
VastaKustutaWelp, gonna be replaying the Dead Space series now.
VastaKustutaWhen you think about it, Isaac Clarke has the worst life imaginable. (SPOILERS) His girlfriend dies, he gets nightmares and hallucinations, an army of necromorphs is trying to kill him, most of the people he meets either fails or betrays him, and he has to endure suffering no one should have to endure. Awesome story though, best one I've ever read.
VastaKustutaHow the hell did the RIG even get it's power in the first place?
VastaKustutaI understand, that it might be hard to write such an epic fanfic, but come on, you said, that you have some of the next bits partially done. What is taking you so long?
VastaKustutaGood things come to those who wait.
VastaKustutaTwo weeks passed since the last update.
VastaKustutaAnd during that period, I was checking this page at least 10 times per day.
...my life is so pathetic...
I check this more than 15 times a day, but the story updates are worth it.
VastaKustutaWhat are these updates you speak of?
VastaKustutaChill out, the next chapters will be out soon enough.
VastaKustutaThe greatest story ever made. Son, I am not disappoint
VastaKustutaSo when's the next update?
VastaKustutaIt might be a while before the ED moderator updates, so I thought I'd warn you that chapter 7 is up right now.
VastaKustutaHOLY SHIT THANK YOU.
VastaKustuta*Sees chapter 7* I'm content now.
VastaKustuta:O The wait was worth it. We wanted a story that was awesome and you delivered one. Thank you.
VastaKustuta*scrolls mindlessly through the archive, looking if any fanfics upda- hells yes this one did!*
VastaKustutaInteresting concept, it is clear that this is well written and thought out, and you seem to have knowledge on the dead space universe. Anyways, I can't really see any flaws in the story, you seem to have perfected it, but I have just two questions: How the hell is Isaac supposed to use his weapons and what is the variant of the infectors in this story?
VastaKustutaWonder how even if he did have all his weapons, how would he hold them? Also, the story is amazing, you nailed down everyone's personality correctly, and made it entertaining to read too. Now THIS is a fanfic worth reading, that's for sure.
VastaKustutaThis is nice, not sure how a game about dismembering necromorphs fits in with MLP but you made the story actually make more sense than the dead space storyline.
VastaKustutaWith holding weapons I imagine that Isaac, being Tony Stark's illegitimate spawn, will whip up a smart targeting weapons mount for his rig that's connected to his helmet. Attach pulse rifle to said mount, aim through helmet with targeting software...stuff, think "shoot!" (IE: Fuck that thing and everything near it!) and let the plasma fly!
VastaKustuta...Or he could just use magic. Whichever.
But he's an earth pony, only has the pulse rifle, and said pulse rifle has no pulse rounds.
VastaKustutaHe has Twilight, Luna, Rarity, Celestia, Zecora and whomever else that can help out.
VastaKustutaDialogue's wonderfully in-character, but the writing style could use a little more economy. Not every thought and feeling has to be explained for every viewpoint character, especially if building suspense is your primary goal. I did like Twilight's description of everything except her death; that was well-timed and efficiently written.
VastaKustutaAw damn, he should get the contact beam back, or at least the plasma cutter.
VastaKustutaEnjoying the story, but why are you targeting Fluttershy with an evil, and apparently, madness inducing book? Also, you weren't foreshadowing Derpy's demise were you? Anyway, doing a good job, just please don't turn the main characters (and side characters like Derpy, Zecora,etc) into necromorphs. I won't be able to continue reading if they ended up as those horrible, satanic creatures.
VastaKustutaPLOT TWIST: Fluttershy is a unitologist.
VastaKustutaWait, how do you remove any of the suits in Dead Space?
VastaKustutaYou don't. You need to use the shop.
VastaKustutaFew things that annoy me, sorry for posting Anon.
VastaKustutaFirstly, you said his suit has no power, yet he can use night vision? You also say since it has no power it's like a dead weight, yet me manages to haul himself (mostly) up a gantry.
Other than that though, fantastic work! I'm loving every minute and have started playing Dead Space again (too bad I've never played Dead Space 2, I'm too poor to buy it)
I almost closed the page and started crying when Twilight died though, glad to see she came back.
No, I mean, have you ever used the shop to take off an armor? Like leave you standing there in normal clothes? You can't. You can only switch from one armor to another.
VastaKustuta"you said his suit has no power, yet he can use night vision? You also say since it has no power it's like a dead weight, yet me manages to haul himself (mostly) up a gantry."
VastaKustutaTwilight and Luna are using light spells to illuminate the area. Provided he doesn't look directly at the source of light his eyes would naturally adjust to the darkness. Which is why he was temporarily blinded when Luna's attack spell crossed his path.
As for the suit itself, I imagine that it would be lighter than it appears because its made of a futuristic synthetic material. While it would certainly weight him down it wouldn't imobilize him. Remember the suit is suppost to be used in space for ease of movement and although there is no weight in space, there is mass. The thrusters built in would be useless on a suit with a higher mass.
Pretty sure the material the advanced and elite advanced suits are made from is carbon fiber, which is very light so yeah, you're right.
VastaKustutaYou're mistaking 'dead weight' with 'half-a-ton of dead weight'. It's not a MJOLNIR armor, the user has to be able to lift it without any strenght augmentations mostly because they're too expensive, unnecesarry and would waste suit's power.
VastaKustutaWait, elite advanced suit is made from carbon fiber and advanced suit is made from synthetic material that is light, but flexible and thick.
VastaKustuta-OceanLord
VastaKustutaIs Twilight turning into an Infector, I thought this because the bile she had after she was "revived" in chapter 6.(this is in some logs in the first dead space[look in dead space wiki]) Infectors can form from somebody/pony living (Dead space: Martyr).
-SDM (AKA: Flour)
Story is nice and all, but the first chapters were literally explanations. We appreciate the detail, but there are times when it's just too much.
VastaKustutaIs stasis and kinesis unavailable due to the lack of power?
VastaKustuta...Uhm... Yes? That's kinda obvious, isn't it?
VastaKustuta@Anonymous\
VastaKustutaI would belive so
How the hell did Isaac not stock up on pulse rifle ammo? Doesn't everyone do that?
VastaKustutaWell, if I recall correctly, he ran out of ammo during the boss fight.
VastaKustutaAnyway, he's with Twilight. She will propably magically create him some ammo or something.
I know he ran out of ammo, but why doesn't he have his signature weapon: the plasma cutter? Actually, scratch that, He'll probably build one in equestria by using spare parts, a flashlight, and a tissue laser. Just like old times.
VastaKustuta@Anon:
VastaKustutaHe will propably make it run on apples too.
@Takuanuva
VastaKustutaThat would be the best thing ever.
Fuel the pulse rifle with magic, the plasma cutter with apples, and the contact beam with rainbows. Hells yes.
VastaKustutaI really love this story, for what are essecially the polar opposite you have driven them together very well,
VastaKustutaHowever it feels like things are starting to sound slightly rushed and I will be dissapointed if the next chapter the marker is activiated and all hell breaks loose.
I would at least like some time given to Issac to help get used to this new world he has found himself in, so it's that much more horrible for him to see it being torn apart.
How I would like to see it run out:
VastaKustutaIsaac gets acquainted with the mane 6, along with anypony else the author sees fit, Pinkie throws a party, at climax of party lights go out, then back on again to find one of the fan characters (you know, Lyra, Derpy, Octavia etc.) to have become a Slasher, Isaac beats it to death with his DAMN BARE HANDS, and yeah, the rest is up to the author
Bare hooves you mean.
VastaKustutaI'm still working on chapter 8. I should have it finished either on the 3rd or 4th of August. Thanks for your patience.
VastaKustutaYes... I check this fic everyday for new comments... Still working on getting a life but at least it's an awesome story.
VastaKustutahmmm how about in one of the chapters necromorphs invade twilight's house while princess celestia princess luna twilight sparkle and isaac clarke are still inside the house having a meeting
VastaKustutaChapter 8 is posted. A little later than I'd hoped, but I'm sure you'll like it.
VastaKustuta...reference to THAT comercial?
VastaKustutaYou sir, are the best writer ever.
Also:
VastaKustutaHooo-ly sh*t that story is going down the grimdark slope with extreme speed. Keep it that way.
ho shit why havent i commented on this badass piece of crossover yet?!? I WANT TO SEE ISAAC FUCKING OBLITERATE! i also want Isaac's crazyness to be seen by the mane6 because just thinking bout it gets me gitty wuth anticipation
VastaKustutaChapter eight is up?
VastaKustutaDitzy Doo NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Damn I cant wait for the next part. Its truly awesome and I cant stop myself from shaking in happiness. The best part was I was able to play out Isaac's voice in my head. He still sounds epic pony or not he will always be an awesome hero.
VastaKustutalol vomit rainbows
VastaKustutaI sense Twilight/Isaac ship.
VastaKustutaI'mokaywiththis.jpeg
I wanna see Isaac lay into Secret cherry and the diamond dogs with some sort of machete. she doesn't deserve to live after what she did to Ditzy
VastaKustutaDitzy......Isaac....Isaac you are da man I know you would not just give up like that you are gonna march straight up there and blast everypony there with a plasma cutter and a pulse rifle. Then throw the survivors into Necromorph infested areas and let them be slaughtered. They cant do this to Ditzy
VastaKustuta@Anonymous Yea if I remember they actually mention it later on
VastaKustutaAbout the advance suit I remember they mention it later on
VastaKustutaHurrah! An Evil Dead 2 reference!
VastaKustutaJust read to the end.
VastaKustutaForget building the plasma cutter first; somepony (and a few dogs) have a date with the business end of a ripper.
here's how I want Chapter 9 to have:
VastaKustutaRarity is on a dinner date with an unwilling Isaac when BAMF, an Infector appears out of nowhere and turns one of the waiters into a Slasher. Isaac then grabs the Equestrian equivalent of a steak knife and proceeds to turn said Slasher into meat paste. Rest is up to author.
I like the plot twist that you introduced in the end. I can't wait to see how this continues. Keep up the good work!
VastaKustutaI really hope that scream is from one of the diamond dogs getting messed up be angel and not Ditzy Doo
VastaKustutaRead this story with this in the back ground:
VastaKustutahttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=irnSaMbsb4w
Epic chills.
An update! Keep them comming!
VastaKustutaWow! I've been getting a lot of great feedback on chapter 8, most of it in response to the scene at the end between Cherry and Ditzy.
VastaKustutaI do listen to a lot of music while writing, so I though I'd share with you the piece of music I replayed again and again while writing that part.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KpW8W9Yi4u8
Again, thanks for reading. I'm already hard at work on chapter 9.
i liked the story man very awaesome but did you have to have derpy's eye taken out i mean great story by far but cmon its derpy's eye its a little unfair i think
VastaKustutaGreat interaction between Twilight and Isaac. Must've been hard to write, and great job with that scene at Fluttershy's house... Awesome.
VastaKustutaSpoilers!!!
VastaKustutaIts good to see that you are willing to do bad things to your characters.I mean,Twilight DIED,Fluttershy been kidnapped, with all her animal friends dead for real, and Derpy has had her eye ripped out. And we really haven't reached a "bad" point yet, at least compared to how bad we know it can get.It really wouldn't be dead-space if terrible things didn't happen.
Hell, if you wanted to go with a "traditional" Dead-Space ending, Issac and Twilight would be the only survivors, teleporting away right after making the elements of harmony go critical or something blowing up all of Pleasant valley, Ponyville, and a good chunk of the ever-free forest for good measure.
Then they would find themselves in some barren wasteland surrounded by necromorphes,or back in the hands of Earth Gov. or the Unitologists.
They would be low on supplies, of course, and the story would fade out as they prepare to make a last stand, Clark making some snarky comment about how "the universe just hates Isaac Clark" except and now twilight can get in on all his "fun".
Of course, since this is a Pony/Dead Space fic, some sot of happyish ending is allowed,though I feel at least half the the main cast should be dead or horribly injured:)
Or you could finish this story and cut off my random musings, cus there's more on the way!
(If you don't like this kind of random guessing let me know!)
I don't mind at all if readers want to give suggestions / guesses / random musings, I love reading all the feedback.
VastaKustutaI just can't promise answers to plot related questions since I don't want to spoil the story.
If Isaaac can build a plasma cutter out of a flashlight and tissue laser, then he can probably make 10 with magic.
VastaKustutaCan't believe I didn't think of this before, but if you want to get a hold of me and have a chat, or play some multiplayer, over 'Xbox360 Live' or 'Steam' my user ID is: Oceansama.
VastaKustutaYou're probably gonna have a ton of new friends because from the size of this page due to comments, I think this story is fairly well known.
VastaKustutaIf plucking out Derpy's eye wasn't rated mature, then holy hell, I don't know what to expect in the next chapter.
VastaKustutaI have to admit I love the grasp you have on Isaac's personality.
VastaKustutaThat being said, I can't help but feel like there is a lack of urgency to the plot as of this last chapter. Everyone seems just a bit too carefree.
But I do love the character development that was present and hope to see much more of it. On a related note, is there any shipping planned or under consideration? Because I couldn't help but notice Twilight and Luna both have a rampant interest in him (though to be fair, Luna is really just interested in spacecraft)
IssacApplejack - I demand Shipping pictures. Nothing better than some Non Filly-Fooler, Hate-Love Relationships!
VastaKustutaAlso. I really like your perception of Issac Clarke. Being utterly confused at the change of scenery, the always subtle-cocky attitude, and the sincere void of despair that's always held in the middle of his persona. I hope to see some serious Issac Clarke Asskicking to the rescue of everyone in the near future. As much as I also want some Dismemberment in the history. I still want to remember that this is much a pony fic as a dead space fic, so it should hold each 'tone' equally... Yeah, Dismemberment.. And Friendship..
You know what? I'll just shut up and wait eagerly for the next set!
Really like this crossover. It manages to capture the personalities of all of the characters that it includes very well. This story is extremely well written, and I like how it changes view points from time to time. Also that there is a parallel story (with dash) going on so that the you get a brief break from Twilight-Issac scenes so they don't become stale or boring (not that they are its just fun to see other characters). The conversations and character interactions seem genuine and realistic, not cheesy, fake, or cliche. As a huge fan of both the Dead Space universe and the show I really like this and eagerly await the next chapter.
VastaKustutaMy only issue was fluttershy and ditzy doo being tied up... it just seemes like a poorly overused cliche "oh the otherwise self capable girl gets tied up" yet we never see any males getting caught like that ever >>;; thats my only real issue...i love the story so far ^^
VastaKustutathis fic is Epic. the characters are extreamly well writen and the over all story is simply wonderful and engaging. i can't wait for more chapters. i would like to see more from you.
VastaKustutaSpoilers:
VastaKustutaWell. You surprised me. I thought I had a good idea of were this story was going,that there was only so many ways you could take this story, and then in this entire ninth chapter you manage to surprise me, especially with the sudden torching of Canterlot. I can't believe that I had totally forgotten about Dash. Good work, I'm waiting for more.
dash needed to say "its a trap" i wouldnt really have laughed at that for it actually being a trap cause lets face it, your going to get a makeover and someone yells its a bomb i would never understand what she meant other than that good job
VastaKustutabtw how come on the story page it says Xover and here it says oceanlord
btw btw Xover's Lost Soul of Uchiha was pretty good
woop lol i feel stupid, xover as in crossover lol
VastaKustutaill go die now :|
MY GOD.
VastaKustutaI was shaking the entire time while reading this fanfic. I think my heart almost exploded at one point, that's how fast it was beating.
I'm still shaking. I can barely write.
OceanLord... If you will make the next chapter any better, I think I won't survive reading through it...and I'm not kidding.
Have to be 100% honest here. I kinda lost my suspension of disbelief when the General wanted to cut the military budget.
VastaKustutaTalking ponies I can buy.
Magic Unicorns, sure.
Alicorns who move the celestia bodies, why not.
But a general wanting to cut the military budget?
@Clockworkchaos
VastaKustutaWell, after 1400 years of no conflict, its safe to say that everypony has gotten complacent.
Imma put this straight to my Favorite Fanfic readling list for FUCKING AWESOME PURPORSES...for this as an example
VastaKustuta!!!!!Spoilers!!!!
VastaKustutaOK, let me make sure I have everything strait. Fluttersy and Dizy Do are imprisoned, with their wings completely plucked, and Fluttersy is being wheeled off, probably to be experimented on. Does this have to do with her being "particularly susceptible to the markers effects? In this case might she become the first new necromorph, since it may be possible to turn her without completing an entire marker? And now Rainbow Dash may be in for the same fate, having been whisked away to parts unknown, after killing a guard thanks to markermadness (how is she effected? is the marker already partially built, or was that one tiny bit of contact sufficient to put her permanently under it's influence?) there is also some mysterious stranger coming to ponyville latter that night in order to provide assistance to the adventures?
Finally, Princess Luna is suspected of murering her sister, and the people doing all this are most likely the reminates of Nightmare moons army?If I have the facts for the most part right, then good. I like were your going with this. I might make a second post to say what I actually think of this story a little later.
I haven't read this yet, but I love that 'Pony Space' is apparently published by Penguin Books, and the style of the cover is very much something they would pick to use. Now to actually read it. :P
VastaKustutaAll I can say is, I love it so far adn when can I expect to be reading part 12?
VastaKustutaThank you.
o.o holy shit. Just finished what's up and I have to say this is 12 kinds of epic. Looking forward to reading more!
VastaKustuta2 things, is this after dead space 1 or 2? (played second but not first) and love the monty python and the holy grail reference in ch. 6
VastaKustutaI'm still here...waiting...
VastaKustutaI'm so glad that OceanLord isn't dead and that I can expect more to come :D. And I think this new chapter (14) while being short had great character development. Keep up the great job man :)
VastaKustutaRead it all in one sitting. I can't wait for the next part, although what happened to Spitfire? She was introduced and then completely discarded. They completely skipped over her and went to the caves...
VastaKustutaFrankly, I've been following this exceptional piece of fanfiction for a long time, even before I actually watched an episode of MLP:FiM.
VastaKustutaIt has been a while since a chapter was released. I'm glad this epic crossover fic is still alive!
@jspang
VastaKustutaThis I assume takes place after Dead Space 2, since when Isaac is first introduced it talks about the wounds in his shoulder and hand.
On the topic of the suits our little Issac be wearing I vote for the level 3 suit of the original and much better dead space game.
VastaKustutaI refuse to read this until it is finished. Please finish it soon!!!!
VastaKustuta